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I don't usually post book reviews, so I gave four stars just to prove that I'm not a reviewer, and I haven't had much confidence in free novels since I've been on Tomato for a long time. But this one is really good. There is a saying that goes well, if it's too serious, you will inevitably want to change your taste. Not everyone likes the lifeless and depressing atmosphere of Warhammer all the time. Your book is really okay. Don't make mistakes in settings. Your writing style really needs to be improved. Don't write randomly. Occasionally, you can also read the advice of normal book fans. Don't panic if you make a mistake. You can just change it in time. You must keep it normal! (Some people on Tomato use free novels as a shield. This is the reason for free novels, but it doesn't mean you can use it to disgust people.) Sometimes the content of some service plots is acceptable. Just write this kind of article so that most people can read it comfortably. If a small number of people have normal opinions, just ignore the abnormal and extreme ones. As long as your plot can be rounded and reasonable, it is acceptable. Sometimes the content can be simplified as much as possible or not too much. After all, the highlight of this book is that most people are focused on how to watch the protagonist use Dora A. The magical props of dreams, some of the twenty or so chapters written by the author may be a little too long. Here I will mention the ones I mentioned above. Simplified, some small details and plot introduction. Most people can accept that you write a few more words or hundreds or thousands of words, at least to understand why. Of course, how to grasp the specifics depends on your personal performance. Don't be limited by "free novels" to limit your progress.

It's well written. I'll comment on the details. I'll just add one point. The supporting characters are well-cast, but the protagonist's portrayal and setting are a bit lacking. With Tinkerbell taking the lead, he can show some action. Many things in the first half of the plot can be avoided. I know it's for the sake of the plot, but the plot line is stretched too deliberately and makes the protagonist look completely different from the adult in the setting. Maybe it would be better to change it to a student.

It's super good-looking, the plot is compact and interlocking, the story is also very interesting, the characters are very detailed, every important character is very specific, especially the psychological activities of the characters, the descriptions are realistic.

Why did I read it some time ago, but I stopped reading it after reading it. Yesterday, I suddenly ran out of novels I wanted to read, so I remembered this one. It was really good, and I regret it now when I think about it!

This book allowed me to see that every character is three-dimensional and has a full personality. The logic is sound and unexpected (at least to me) and the author is very thoughtful.

The ups and downs, both the climax and the continuation are compact, and coupled with occasional humor, they are all very attractive. The characters are very distinct, and the storyline is well-founded. I praise the author's talent.

The writing is brilliant! The writing is brilliant! To be honest, I almost never comment on novels, but I really can't help but want to say a few words about this book. Wonderful! I have only read the first part so far, but I can't help but express my thoughts. It's really beautiful.

The author's writing is smooth, the plot design has ups and downs, the conception is rigorous, and the character descriptions are vivid and delicate, making people want to explore the follow-up. It is a high-quality masterpiece, and I support the author's 5-star praise.

It is very beautiful, with a compact plot, no tediousness, no wording, and no procrastination; this novel has a good rhythm and is wonderful.

It's really good to read, the author's writing style is good, and the characters written by the author have very distinct characteristics. I have been short of books recently, but I came across this book. The plot is really exciting, and I really love the author to death.

The plot of the story is clear and rigorous, with no unnecessary words, and it can capture the reader's heart and desire to continue reading.

Very well said, informative and gripping.

The plot logic is very strong and the foreshadowing is done very well.

The plot is good, the content is novel, not cliche, and the characters are intelligent.

I like this book very much. I sincerely hope that the author will become better and better. I give it a five-star recommendation!

The most well-written novel I have ever seen. The plot doesn't drag. The descriptions of the situations are well written. The whole movie is not boring to watch. And a sense of humor.

It's really good. It describes the worldly feelings and the author's writing style is really good! It's very comfortable to read.

It's really good-looking, the plot is exciting, and the writing is very immersive. I've read a lot of books of this type, and this one is quite good.

When I first started reading it, I became more and more addicted to it, but towards the end it became a little more exciting, which can really arouse the reader's emotions.

The content is compact and the writing is humorous. It is worth reading.

It's a very nice book and the writing and plot are top-notch on Tomato.

I have read a lot of books of this type, but none of the articles made me feel the same way. The characters written by the author are vivid and the plot is very exciting.

This is one of the few good books that I, a bookworm of more than ten years, have read this year that I can't read at a glance. Please update it!

Beautiful, tight and seamless. There is no nonsense in the book, and the characters are three-dimensional. It's great, very beautiful, I like all the characters in it.

The plot of the novel has ups and downs, making people experience a spiritual adventure while reading.

The writing is humorous and anti-conventional, and the descriptions are very visual and very comfortable to read. In this materialistic world, I feel at ease reading this book. It is really, really good to read.

It's heart-wrenching and very funny! The language expression is novel and brilliant! Come on, I really like your writing, I hope you will get better and better. Come on, come on, come on~0~

The logic is clear, the writing is very good, not procrastinating, and each character is very clearly drawn!

A rare good book worth recommending. Wonderful and refreshing articles that make people forget to come back!

I don't want to say too much, I usually don't rate it, but this one deserves a review, it's beautiful.