Star Sea Ship Girl: Pioneering Era

Pretty good but... When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. To sum up, updating may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updating. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Urgent! Urgent! Urgent! Why should I encounter this book so early! ? You must still have some manuscripts saved [punch out] and hand them over as soon as possible! !

I particularly like the subject matter. Since I play Ship B and never read the plot, I actually only like original articles that follow the Ship Girl template. However, this one is about interstellar science fiction and belongs to a different genre. I think it's full marks for creativity and subject matter, but I don't know if it's the author's control over the plot direction or something else. It feels too bland and obscure. I suggest that the author can refer to some popular articles to try to establish a clear main line or create crises in stages, or maybe refer to the daily articles of Kan Niang to mainly write about daily life. Generally speaking, I still support the author and hope that the author's writing will get better and better.

The author feels that this book is well written, but the caliber of the naval guns is too small. The caliber of the main and secondary guns of these ships can be expanded 10 times. Otherwise, the caliber of the main gun of a 2km long battle cruiser is only 1.8M, which is too small. In fact, it can be changed to a caliber of 18m.

It is a very good book. There are no poisonous points or pain points in the whole process. The plot is also very interesting. If I have to say it, it is a bit lacking in emotion, but this is also an advantage. There are also a few pictures at the end that are a bit too anxious. The ending is a very nice semi-open ending.

How should I put it? I actually like novels about ship girls, but I don't like to force ship girls into rare levels. I prefer that each girl has her own characteristics. For example: the destroyer girl runs fast and consumes less resources. The main gun is weak but has a close-range killer torpedo. The cruiser girl is slightly slower and the main gun firepower exceeds the destroyer. Then there are specializations in various directions. The main force girl runs slowly, eats a lot, but has super firepower. However, she has limitations and needs to form a strong joint group with the destroyer cruiser to exert her maximum ability. She will not act alone. You can change the rarity of the ship girl into a level, so that every ship girl has the ability to touch the top level.

To be honest, the author's writing is quite good, at least the writing style is passable. On tomatoes. There really is nothing better than this author's writing about starship girls. Of course, it cannot be said that there are no shortcomings. The author still lacks a bit of imagination, for example, he was in the interstellar world, and ended up using a traction rope to tow the spacecraft. [Hold face][Hold face] But overall it's pretty good-looking. I hope the author can work hard! [Send heart][Send heart]

Overall it's pretty good, but the setting feels a bit familiar, a bit similar to the Fire Battleship and Dragon Whale family I saw before, especially the family settings and battleship and rare objects settings!

It's a very good book. I still hope that the ship girls all have names. Except for the first few ship girls, they don't have any sense of existence. I don't know what they are called, what they are, whether they are historical ships, and what skills they have. I hope you can start writing about them. Good luck, author💪

Overall, it's a good read, but there are too many things in the back that I can't remember. I also feel that there was not much foreshadowing of the relationship in the early stage before I made a vow. I hope there will be more emotional lines later. Good luck, author [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's pretty good. The upgrade system should be the one that can upgrade my warships.

The overall story looks pretty good, but since this is a ship girl article, there should be multiple female protagonists. The female protagonists are not described in depth enough in the whole text, and they are basically all mentioned in one stroke. The pace of this article is relatively fast, and it is less of a regular article, so we can understand why the author did not describe the ship girl too carefully. If I remember anything, I'll add more.

The best ship girl novel I've ever read. I didn't expect it to end so soon. There aren't many good Kan-girl novels these days.

Good-looking, overall stable, upgraded text, [laughing evilly] I thought I was going to build a force to act as a nanny, but it turns out it's okay to develop. [Laughing evilly] It's just that the old ship girl didn't have much chance to appear. Xingxue: "I was obviously the one who came first." Ink: "I thought it was a specialized command ship that could be with the commander." Chen Xingyue: "Have to eat" Xuanniao: "There are cows" Xinglan: "give it for free"

I have to share the losses I have suffered with everyone.

The interstellar ship girl is quite new. The interstellar films I have seen before are all dark and humanistic, but this one does not have so many annoying descriptions. It mainly writes about the author's fantasies about what the star should look like after having a ship girl. The overall feeling is very comfortable and quite in line with the style of a ship girl.

Not bad. I don't know why the rating is so low. I hope the author can finish it.

The setting is okay, but it grows too fast. It's a bit boring. I haven't read the book for half of it. I'm trying to see if I can continue reading. One year directly exceeds the family's hundreds of years of accumulation. The high-level ship girl has more levels than the family and has reached the highest level of the natural disaster-level empire. In addition to the trump card, help the family find the wormhole and find a low-cost star field that is not within the alliance. The most important battle is whether he is a barbarian or a hidden barbarian, the protagonist is really destined [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

The tone of description in this novel is a bit strange. Some people may not understand it. The pace speeds up a lot later on, but it's still very good-looking, with no flaws, it's great, it's good-looking, I love watching it and want to watch it again.

It's a very nice Star Sea Ship Girl story. The main character's plot is very reasonable and the plot is very compact. I recommend everyone to read it.

Warm and wonderful plot! The author is great! 👍👍👍

A top-notch author. Now he updates basically three times a day. The subject matter is novel. In the later stage, I didn't see any poisonous points. At most, his allies used their bodies to transform into Tao to nourish the planet. Is it a small knife? But it didn't really die, and finally became the earth-bound spirit of the planet.

Wow, it's a rare Xinghai novel or a ship girl's, it deserves full marks.

Yes, I love watching it, but I wish there were more battles or daily life with the ship girls.

Personally I think the writing is great and I support the author, but the updates are too slow and not enough to read!

The language is plain and simple, but reading it carefully makes people unable to stop. It can bring people an immersive joy of development and creation. The plot of Luo Xingyuan's interstellar development and exploration is still very clear and complete, but the interaction with the ship girl seems to be missing a little bit, which is a pity. Also, why does the novel go back to the writing route of gods controlling rules and power at the end of the novel? Isn't it the path of science and technology (weird)

The setting is interesting, the interstellar version of the ship girl. The content has not been expanded too much. I hope the author can show more of the magical things belonging to the interstellar in addition to the ship girl. Just writing about the ship girl fighting for territory is a bit too limited, and it will become very boring later.

Looks good~ She breaks away from the traditional ship girl and has her own logic~ Come on~~~

What I wrote is that I hope the data can be displayed. If it can be like happiness, it doesn't matter. The author just used a mind map to write out his subordinates. It is simple and clear.

It's pretty good-looking, and it suits my taste anyway, but there are too few of them. I want to keep them, but I'm afraid I'll run out of them.

One of the few interstellar texts that can be read, with a lot of cut words