Hogwarts: Insidious Me

The front part is very good, the protagonist and the supporting characters are well established, but the plot plan is really a bit unclear. How can Voldemort travel through time and space [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh], and Lockhart inexplicably targets the protagonist and becomes an enemy [awkward laugh] [awkward laugh]. Hermione's writing is really good, come on, the character description is worth reading, come on, the author [like][like]

It is a rare first-person novel for me, and the contrasting characters of the protagonists are quite good... So far, it is a new and good-looking Harry fanfic. So, author, can you tell me more [understand] [explore]

The writing is quite good, and the first-person writing method is quite rare [eating melon]

Although it is written in the third person, it is very well written.

Ah, what a good story

I've read two chapters, it's quite interesting.

It feels good-looking

This perspective is very suitable for listening to books

The protagonist's physique needs to be improved, otherwise he will have no status in the family in the future. If the boy is not stronger, love will not be sweet. The writing is very good, and the detective element is actually very good, but I personally feel that the detective element can be a by-product of the protagonist's high IQ.

It's quite interesting. The protagonist's character felt weird in the early stage, but the writing later was very good. It's a pity that it ended so hastily.

It's great. There are no problems with the characterization so far, and the plot is very reasonable. ? Why is it so bad?

I like this style of novel very much, 5 stars encourage and support, I hope the author can release 5 more chapters [Like] okok successfully read it in one night, it's great

This is my first time reading about first person pronouns on Tomato.

Great write-up so far! The characters are very distinct!

Novel perspectives and story unfolding