HP: Bird of No Return

I declare that this is the least OOC thing I have ever seen, bit by bit testing, bit by bit opening up, like a poisonous snake soaked in mead. I like the character of the heroine the most. She has the so-called steadfast human beauty and a sense of strength, instead of gradually losing her own thoughts after being quoted by the viper. Tom also has the flavor of the original work, super thoughtful and a little bit of temptation, it is really awesome. I have read a lot of books in Tomato, and it can be said that it is almost the only HP fanfic that I can read. The female protagonist has her own life, not the kind that revolves around the male protagonist and has her own thoughts. The author does not create all kinds of evil women, daughters, little suns, etc. In order to forcefully cater to the male protagonist. Updates are also super stable. Hope to be updated to millions

The only book I have ever read that is consistent with the original work! The subject matter is so novel, and the adoptive mother literature is so interesting (hee hee). Finally, it's not the same as the childhood sweethearts in the orphanage and school classmates. The wife is great and has a rich imagination! The plot writing is also smoother than at the beginning, keep up the good work! ! ! Love you author!

I have read more than 70 chapters so far, and the writing is really super delicate. If you like the original version of Lao Fu, you can read it without thinking. But if the three views are too correct and can be substituted into the novel, don't read it. You will feel very uncomfortable reading it. It is inevitable that Lao Fu plots and kills people. The writing style is really humorous. Some parts were obviously hellish, but I still laughed wildly. I felt like I could go to hell immediately after reading it. The heroine is very lovable in my eyes. The Virgin may be her shortcoming, but it is also one of her charms. She is in pain and enjoys it, but she still helps others. She seems to be a complete idealist.

The writing style is the best I have seen in foreign persimmons, and the foreshadowing in the story is also very good. Heck, if you like HP, Riddle, and dark male protagonists, then you should watch it, it's pretty good-looking. Also, I like Yanzi and Lao Deng the most. Hahahaha, I don't know who Tom Cat is (). I hope the rating of this book can be higher...! After all, I started chasing you in December 2024, and I've been chasing you for a long time😘

The heroine is very good, the novel is wonderful, the hell joke is very interesting, and the author's writing style is also excellent. The only shortcoming is that the male protagonist is too consistent with the original work. He is so bad that I want to slap him a few times, and then give him a heart-breaking meal [smile]

I almost missed it because of the name and cover, but after reading it I found it to be a very good novel. The protagonist has no magical talent, has a certain logic, does not whitewash Voldemort, does not flatter Voldemort, and has an independent personality (this is very important! After most novel protagonists pass through the book, their lives will be as if they will die if they don't hang out with the protagonist). It prefers a daily style, which is totally my cup of tea! You can see it (confident). In addition, the heroine has magical talent. But not into Hogwarts. Haven't seen this before. —————————— Let's change it, does this male protagonist have to be Voldemort? Although I know he is not a good person, the old way of killing people and setting fires without any scruples still makes people feel a little disgusted.

，，，，， In fact, I have some control over some of the protagonists, but because the protagonist is Tom Riddle, the bottom line has been lowered again and again, so I feel okay and not as cruel as I imagined. I really like the love scene between the two. It has a sense of beauty that is ignorant of life and death, and the flower of evil. After watching too many sweet and sweet relationships, it is still very touching to watch Tom's bad guy "falling in love". I don't know the ending at the moment, but I still look forward to the ending of the two people together. Although I hoped that the swallow would fly away and be free many times while watching it, if the ending is really like this, I would feel a sense of loss. I just want to watch the evil devil do all the bad things outside, and then go home and quarrel with the swallow. Also, the author's Tom is very close to my impression of this character, or it expands my understanding of him. He is really harmful to both humans and animals, but his bad logic is self-consistent and has a sense of being alive (a paper man who always chews on big melons has the feeling of growing flesh and blood).

Very, very delicate writing style... The teacher writes it really well. The title "Bad Fairy Tale" perfectly summarizes the direction of the story. The various fairy tales interspersed also make people feel that the story is destined to lead to an unchangeable ending, but only we readers know it. …Looking at Yanzi's perspective and combining it with what actually happened, one feels a kind of blinded sadness, but also feels that Yanzi just wants to know nothing better. The dull feeling becomes a protective color. Familiar neighbors or friends around him may one day be because of the child he raised. I still can't bear to watch Yanzi know this fact after encountering the misfortune caused by exploitation... The portrayal of the supporting characters is also very brilliant, and it is particularly immersive. With first-person visual description, the protagonist Yanzi is like writing a diary, and only we readers can understand the little complaints and jokes in it. Yanzi from the future is trapped in this unfamiliar world, and the most important person can only become Tom who he raised. Sometimes the loneliness revealed between the lines is particularly interesting, like a continuous drizzle in London, with only continuous regrets and longing. It was the first time I watched this plot of Riddle's rebirth. It was destined to be the villain's victory, but between this kind of companionship and use, Tom inevitably developed feelings for Yanzi, and he tried his best to deny it. It made me feel happy... You are a dead arrogant person who is duplicitous. Admit it, love will always be your biggest enemy, Tom, hehehehehehehehe... (Ps: Teacher, after finishing this book, will you be able to retrieve the physical book? I really want to collect it. I feel that this story is particularly suitable for the aftertaste of paper texture...)

It's really great (//∇//), not at all. The Dark Lord deviates too much from the character, and I don't think Yanzi is the Virgin. She really is the kindness and beauty of ordinary people. . . . And this is the first and only one where I hope the male protagonist loses BE. . . And it's very touching, and I really express my love for the author (›´ω`‹)

A particularly delicious (?) Book, well written by Rouse Such a beautiful book! I have to give Rouse a big thumbs up! [You can't give a bad review just because a wizard is too bad. The heroine's character is also very good, really good! Woo hoo hoo, we are all ordinary people who work hard and hope that the heroine can dominate the wizarding world one day [because I knew the story was going to be bad, so I started dreaming [Swallow! You are the best baby! Finally, the bad guy Tom Riddle written by Routh is not OOC at all. I highly recommend everyone to watch it!

A HP fanfic worth reading. I have read a lot of HP fan fiction with both male and female versions, and this one is really good. The current score is definitely low, for all my hahahaha comments. Absolutely witty, the author's brain circuit really matched mine, and I couldn't stop laughing within a few lines. I feel that the heroine is a chosen ordinary person, after all, she is still a wizard, otherwise I don't know how to develop well. Compared to the later part, I prefer starting from the beginning until entering Hogwarts. I've thought about why, maybe it's the freshness, the plot is relatively new, and it fits the characters very well. The plot after entering Hogwarts is difficult to escape from the common plot. Looking forward to the follow-up.

The writing is interesting and delicate. In the early stage, the relationship between the heroine and Tom was strange. The heroine was coerced into getting along with Tom. However, through Tom's intentional planning, the heroine gradually developed feelings for Tom. However, Tom died (but with a Horcrux), and the heroine was still thinking about Tom. In daily life, he is implementing his plan step by step. I feel that the plot is in reserve. The future development will go to the bad and there will be an explosion. I don't know whether the emotional ending will be a be or a he, but what is certain is that the wizarding world will not be good if it continues like this (sad) Dear author, I'm here to improve your rating! Please keep writing, it's really good! Now I feel that the cb between the heroine and Dumbledore is better than the cp with Tom. The two of them are really cute, and the description of Dumbledore is very good. The author is also very humorous. From time to time, I laugh like a fool.

Fortunately, I watched it. Although it said that the heroine is abused, I think it is okay. It just describes a kind of character. The heroine is the ninja in Big and Ninja. She has never believed in Riddle easily. It is much better than the kind who just coaxes with sweet words. The story is about imprisonment and torture, and the kind of story where the heroine falls in love with the murderer after being imprisoned, and conveys vague information to Dumbledore who wants to rescue her. . . There are too many slots but no mouth. . .

Very close to the original work! ! ! It doesn't feel OOC or anything, but why is the rating so low! ! ! ! ! ! Moreover, the tragedies of some minor characters are well grasped, and they are completely in line with the logical chain. There is no deliberate tragedy. At the same time, Deng Duoduo's portrayal is very accurate. Many fans paint Deng Duoduo as a super scheming villain, but Deng Duoduo is not at all. And I really like some of the quotes and comments about other works (fairy tales) written by the author in the article. This is not just a fanfic (nods) However, I feel that there are some places that are a bit strange, such as the Yanzi Madonna syndrome (🤔️Is it my problem? I don't think Yanzi Madonna is a disease at all? Because my definition of this is a bad good person who is more emotional than rational, but Yanzi is obviously kind but has a degree of a) Also, maybe from my personal perspective, the description of the character's psychology is not delicate enough. It feels like it's more about narrating the past with views on events, and then there's some psychology of reflection in between, but it just feels like it's lacking a bit of flavor? ? ? (Actually, I don't know how to describe it.) But overall it's well written! ! ! ! ! ! ! (By the way, is there no description of what a swallow looks like?)

Excellent! Actually, I don't really like reading Tom's articles because I'm a bit of a control person (?), But the author's writing is really good——!

The character of Tom in this book should be the most consistent with the original work that I have read (I hope he will be more crazy in the future). The perspective of the male protagonist has a little bit of the feeling of Voldemort's rebirth (but not much). I haven't finished reading it yet, but I hope that the lord will win in the end (forgive me for being a person with almost no moral bottom line)

The best Tom fanfic I have ever seen. There is no OOC at all. I have seen it in the early stage but I have to say that there is no OOC. The humor is also very good and not blunt. It is much better than the kind of jokes that are all jokes. It is super enjoyable to read! My rating has gone up so quickly. When I watched it, it was only 7.0😭

This is the first time I like it like this. I should consider it as a favorite HP fanfic. Great writing style. It's also the first time I've seen such a writing style. It doesn't feel OOC at all. It's unexpected for my taste. I'm really looking forward to the next story. The author is so good orz

In fact, I wrote this comment because of the heroine. She is very real, not overly smart, and even a little stupid, but this is her charm. The author did not let poor Yan Zi grow up in the later period, but let her go, let her be free, and allowed her to have things that she hates because she cannot accept them. It is very real and ordinary. Like an ordinary person, he is allowed to live in his own comfort zone. This is also the biggest highlight of this book in my opinion, besides the character writing and plot.

Like! ! It's very beautiful and exciting, I'm stuck in it [Shy] The author will give me more encouragement🌹 [Adoration] [Angry] [Admiration]🌹! The protagonist is very strong, but she was inexplicably pulled into another world and forced to assume responsibilities and obligations that had nothing to do with her in the first place. It was really miserable (Tom might be happy [pouts]). She strives to live according to her own wishes in an unfamiliar world, and helps others to the best of her ability. She dares to think and act. Although sometimes her actions may seem a bit reckless to me (as a viewer), I can feel that she has tried hard to consider every step and try her best to do things the best (after all, the protagonist does not understand the original plot, and it turns out that she is still a Muggle and does not understand the magical world). The protagonist is usually a Buddhist, but he has a very strong ability to complain hahahaha. She is a very good little girl. I hope she will get more choices in the future and can return to her own world (although I don't know if Tom and V will let her go (it feels a bit suspense)?) And I personally feel that Tom was a bit annoying when he was a child (he felt difficult to get along with). When he grows up, he may be a better person (better at pretending) and have a higher quotient, making people feel less annoying. And occasionally there is a trace of concern in the communication with the protagonist? He's so awkward, but he's pretty cute (so annoying) I am looking forward to the plot after thinking about it. I don't know how it will develop. Hehe [shy] Finally, I hope that I will be good to the protagonist. For example, Elizabeth and others can have a good future. Like the author! Big cheers for the author! ! [Sending Hearts]

It's super nice. This book is one of the few that Riddler doesn't have OOC. The writing style is light-hearted, but the story is dark. I really like the heroine's character. It is logical and the overall pace is relatively slow.

Baby, when you are tired and hungry, just read more and take a rest. The story line of this book is really exciting. When I recommend the book to people around me, they all call me a pervert. How about it? It's attractive enough for me to say so [cool] [laughing] but the logic is very online. Every character in it is very vivid and charming. ٩(๑^O^๑)۶ I will always follow your meow. Please give me good reviews. The rating of this book does not match the quality.

The heroine Yanzi is Lao Fu's adoptee. This setting is really sweet. The plot is also very relaxed and relaxed. It's so exciting to see Lao Fu seeing his own heart clearly and (maybe) planning to seduce Yan Zi. It's so delicious. Also, it was obviously Lao Fu who took the initiative to kiss him, but when Yan Zi responded, he innocently avoided it. Ah, ah, ah ah ah! ! ! It's really beautiful

Look! [Laughing] When I first read the title, I thought it was a dark and depressive article, but I didn't expect it to be so funny. The heroine complained about boxes and boxes. Still not enough. I finished reading Chapter 110 in one day. Looking forward to the next chapter. (Quietly ask when can I drive and how to drive)

After chasing it, I emo'd it for a long time. After thinking about it for a long time, I finally got up and rated it. The author actually wrote it really well, but the more I looked at it, the more I wanted to slap Tom. This love is really suffocating. The little swallow's misfortune all comes from him. The bird that does not return does not return, and the little swallow will not be able to return home after all. As the copywriter said, this is not a sweet story, it will destroy the heroine's body and mind, so please be careful before entering.

The writing is great, I really like the heroine's character (I hope the heroine can go home in the end) It's so cool. The author's writing is very good and the writing is very humorous. None of the characters are OOC (when can the heroine escape from Tom and return to Dumbledore [thinking])

This is the most realistic fanfic I've ever read that is very close to the original characters, and it's not OOC at all. I like the character of Yanzi very much. If we are involved in such a world, powerlessness is the most normal expression of us ordinary people. At the same time, as people of the new era, we will inevitably suffer from the pain of others. This is also my favorite time-travel novel. Those of us who have received modern education, no matter when or where we travel, perhaps all we can really do is suffer soberly, because we have seen a beautiful world. The Tom at the beginning of this book is exactly the same as the Tom I imagined in the original work, but in the direction of the author's story, I feel that Tom's development is completely inconsistent. When I read the original novel, I thought about Dumbledore saying that Voldemort didn't understand love, but I felt that Tom was longing for it. Perhaps it was his innate lack of empathy, coldness and cruelty, plus his intelligence that could see through that no one in the orphanage really loved or cared about him (I really liked the part where Tom told Yanzi that he saw a doctor in the orphanage) that he became a cold-blooded madman. The author's writing style has a sense of humor and relaxation, which is very similar to the style of the magical world that I love. The only thing I think is lacking is that the later narration is a bit too delayed. Maybe the author didn't want to write it so long. If there is a more concise outline, I will regard it as my HP masterpiece.

It's great. The maternal nature of Swallow is so strong that it overflows. It's so gentle. I even think Swallow is stable enough to raise Bigger. Dumbledore's friendship line is well written, and I can completely feel his charm [laughs] The emotional line depends on the individual. It's pretty good. If you like a twisted flavor, you can give it a try (warning: it's quite cruel)

Let me share my feelings. It was quite comfortable to read in front of me, and it was like a memoir. But starting from chapter 280, I felt tired. When the heroine turned into a sheep, it felt like a running account. I am persisting now because I want to know what happened next. It was really tiring to read. It may be that the author prefers this kind of narrative method with a lot of spoken words, which made my eyes tired, my head tired, and even aesthetic fatigue. The words are a bit unpleasant, and there is a lot of nonsense. The story is very good, not cliché, but the large number of inner monologues of the characters really feels like a waste of pen and ink. It may also be that I have not read any famous books, and my aesthetics is low.

As a old Harry Potter fan, it was the first time I read an article about falling in love with Voldemort. At first glance, I thought it was very exciting, but when I recalled it carefully, I realized that at a certain moment, I also fantasized about the bond with him when I was growing up. Thanks to the author for opening up a new world of HP fandom for me. I have now seen the relevant chapters where the heroine becomes a "forbidden wife", and the feeling of humiliation and sinking is quite exciting. However, I prefer the early part where the heroine and Tom test each other and are attached to each other. The pace seems a bit slow in the later part, and the parts of "Happy Lamb" and "Prison in the Old House" are a bit too long. All in all, this is an excellent fanfic with many mature perspectives and good fairy tale metaphors. After tying this book, I looked at other fanfics with Lord Voldemort, but I couldn't stand them anymore. I always felt that there were too many OOC points. This is the frustration of eating high-quality food from the very beginning.