碎苍天

It's really beautiful! ! After a long time, I finally found this book📖. Once Gu Shiyi (Gu Cangsheng) knew the truth about his life experience, he planned for ten years and entered Taoism with his own life. He was a 17-year-old genius seventh-level martial artist. He was also an unpredictable middle-level alchemist. He was the hope of all geniuses. The unattainable existence is just what Ni Ni said. Brother Gu, who worked hard to treat her illness, is a young man who is decisive in killing, thoughtful and strategizing. Let's see how a young martial artist stirs up the storm in this city and becomes the common master of the world! ! (Also, the author's writing style is very good~ one link after another, looking forward to it!!)

I can't understand what those people who deliberately look for poisonous points or give bad reviews after reading a few chapters have to say. The characters in the whole text are flesh and blood, and the characterization can be called a group portrait. The delicate writing style and meticulous heart are another Jianghu novel that amazed me after the Book of Troubled Times.

9.5 Points for the first 200 chapters and 7 points for the last 200 chapters. Overall, I give you a solid 8 points. The excitement in the early stage is seriously separated from the assembly line salvation flow in the later stage. The emotional line is not well written, there are too many characters and they lose their fullness, and the setting is too complicated, resulting in a lot of foreshadowing paragraphs and explanations. The early stage is very good. It would be nice if it could be rewritten. It can become a 9.5 Masterpiece without resorting to cliche settings such as forced salvation.

The author's book is really well written, with fluent writing style and decent rhetoric. It is deeply rooted in the legacy of the Wei and Jin dynasties, and it also carries forward the style of the Tang and Song Dynasties deeply. I can read this book of the author in my lifetime. It is really my blessing in three lifetimes. After reading this book by the author, I actually felt an indescribable feeling of sadness. If I can never read such a good novel in the future, what should I do? So what should I do? It wasn't until I put the author's book on my bookshelf without hesitation that the excitement in my heart gradually calmed down. But I immediately thought that if others can't read such a good novel, wouldn't it be a waste of the author's efforts? After a painful ideological struggle, I finally made up my mind to sacrifice the small self and dedicate myself to the greater self. I want to dedicate this book review to the world for reading, and I want to keep reading this novel. Push it up, push it up! Push it up until everyone has seen it! Holy book! The third young master of the Tang family shed tears after reading it. Tian Can Tu Tuo sighed to himself after reading it. This must be one of the four great classics. It is definitely the number one sacred book in the 21st century. Shengxu has almost no literary talent in front of it! Doupo has almost no connotation in front of it! Zhu Xian almost lost his emotions in front of it! Zhe Tian almost lost his imagination in front of it!

I only found out about this book yesterday because of Douyin's sand sculpture animation. It is indeed worth reading. It is suspenseful and full of blood. It is indeed not like a Tomato novel. It's just that the writing is still lacking! I hope the author will continue to work hard! [Laugh]

I have read dozens of chapters. The author's writing style is good and definitely not a novice. The foreshadowing is profound and he also digs holes to arouse readers' interest in reading. The psychological description of the characters is also very delicate. It's not bad.

The book has been in short supply for a while, and it's always hard to find something I like on Tomato. I finally found this book, and looking at the ratings, I can tell it's not the kind that everyone would like, but I like it. The elements are: smart protagonist, not stupid people, calm writing, ups and downs of the plot, shabby content and other things This book is of the highest quality on Tomato

This book is quite good to read. It is a slow-burning and enjoyable book. The various foreshadowings and foreshadowings are slowly unfolded and the refreshing feeling is addictive. (Of course, there are some small flaws, which you have to look for yourself. Overall, the flaws are not concealed.) At least in my opinion, it surpasses most novice novels. And this is Tomato. It is considered a masterpiece to be able to write something like this. The 2000+ hours of reading time on my two accounts is really good. I hope the author can write a better plot. Come on!

It's very good to read. Based on the comic book, the novel is overall very good. The plot is compact and interesting. Every character in the book is very full, and each character has his or her own story and experience. Although there is a bit of abuse in the middle, the plot is abuse, not all abuse. I only have one feeling after reading it: it is worth reading. The author has vividly portrayed each character's tasks, and it is very enjoyable to read. Both the early and late stages are unique and compact. The protagonist is constantly getting stronger and stronger. Every character is flesh-and-blood. I love it very much [Send my heart] Five-star recommendation, very nice! This is also a story about rivers and lakes and the imperial court, as well as about cultivating immortality. Very nice, recommended! ! !

I think it's still very good so far. The author's writing is fluent, the story content is quite exciting, and the character settings are clear. There are occasional shortcomings in some parts, but the flaws are not concealed! When I read it, it only had a score of 7.9, Which I felt was too low. This book should at least have a score of 8.9 Or above to be objective. It is worth recommending and I will continue to read it!

It's quite well written, better than Jiang Ye's. I'm curious, who is the author? A newbie definitely doesn't have the strength

The male protagonist is smart and meticulous. For anyone who wants to harm him, he will use all his strength to eradicate anything and anyone who wants to harm him, no matter whether the opponent is strong or not. Perhaps the male protagonist's biggest regret is that he did not kill the female protagonist at the beginning, which led to a series of things that followed. The female protagonist is good-looking and a lady, but she was almost killed by the male protagonist when she was powerless at the beginning. However, later on, as she got along with the male protagonist, she developed a crush on him and gradually grew up, becoming as scheming as the male protagonist. The descriptions of others are just right, the writing is delicate and informal, and the male protagonist has more unknown secrets that need to be slowly discovered. This book is not a simple novel. The male protagonist will be injured or even life-threatening when fighting against masters. The plot is not brainless and everything has traces to follow. In short: I really recommend everyone to read this book. Finally, I would like to say something to the author: Be yourself. This book is a breath of fresh air in this novel of cool novels, rebirth, systems, golden fingers, and all kinds of brainless plots and characters. This book has great potential and must be maintained. An ancient poem "There will be times when the wind breaks through the waves, and the clouds and sails will sail across the sea" is given to the author and all readers, and of course to myself.

Although some of the transitions are a bit abrupt and the division of strength is a bit confusing, I can't imagine how Daxia can still exist if it is so weak. Anyone outside can be just as talented as the Martial Saint Daxia. However, in terms of updating the happy emotional line, Sheng suggested that Lu Jianjia should be eliminated if possible. Choosing Ning Qingxin as the female lead was the right choice. Although Sheng appeared late, Sheng's character portrayal is better. In short, I still give it a five-point support. I hope the author can maintain the current quality in Day 4, which is very good.

I saw Chapter 10. I came here specifically to write about my feelings after reading it. From the small characters at the beginning to introduce the protagonist's personality and way of doing things, to the protagonist I have seen so far explode into the [seventh grade] strength in the article. There is no poisonous point at present. On the contrary, it is very enjoyable to watch. I read books with imagination, and from the text I seemed to be able to really see the protagonist under siege by everyone. It fits the Jianghu temperament I originally imagined. As an old bookworm, I suggest that the author can polish the plot and characters more. After all, it takes a lot of effort to portray each character with flesh and blood. I am willing to continue to follow this article even if it updates one chapter a day. Finally, the author must not write a crash. The ending can be cut, and it can be cut at any time, but it must not be written a crash. I am waiting for the day when this book becomes brilliant. Finally, I would also like to thank the author for bringing us high-quality books, keep up the good work! Thanks.

The author's book quotes are concise and comprehensive, and the main theme is clear. I looked at the two words in the middle [smile] and read a little bit. I felt that the writing was not bad. I will wait and see for a while.

The protagonist looks young, but he is actually an old man with eight hundred tricks, powerful martial arts and resourcefulness. This is what I want to see.

Very poisonous. I'm not willing to let you suffer if I don't give 5 stars. 1. The one with lower literary attainments... Naming, martial arts, and discourse. That's pretty low. Correction: It is recommended to use AI to beautify. 2. It is taboo to write a long novel in the style of a suspense drama. Because the answer will be announced at the end of the suspense drama, many people skip to see the answer. Correction: It is recommended to study the most successful suspense drama - Conan. Each stage is a small story, independent of each other, and most of them do not affect the main plot. Or give up writing suspense dramas, which requires a very high level of skill. 3. The process was quite dull. Two people had a brief fight and it was gone in one episode. The main narrative content was very low. Correction: It is recommended to reduce the comments from passers-by (one person comes out, passers-by comments 2-3 pages), reduce the dynamic narration of regular moves (one flat A and half a page are gone), for long stories with multiple women, either write A in detail in the margins, or simply and quickly (kissing two people will take 2-3 pages of brainstorming), increase the depth of the description of the main plot, write more about the main plot, the branch plot is more detailed than the main plot, which shows that the writing skills need to be improved. 4. Conventional suspense dramas with multiple pitfalls must have up to 10 chapters to reveal the outcome (because there are too many chapters, especially if they are serialized, the audience will not be able to remember them if you trick them too much, and they will often become confused just watching them). Correction: It is recommended to use less traps and more narrative methods. Reading a book is equivalent to listening to you tell a story. If you don't understand, you will easily miss the mark and your score will not be high.

It is indeed a very good book. It is rare. I haven't read such a book in a long time. I remember when I was reading fantasy novels at home in the winter of the second year of junior high school, I was so excited that I shivered all over. Maybe it was too cold and there was no heating at home [laughing and crying]. But being immersed in that fantasy world at that time opened up a new world for me.

To be honest, the writing is really good. I am picky about reading books, especially books like Dragons in the Snow. After reading ten chapters, I can taste the roughness of a book. But after reading this book for one day, it has already reached a hundred chapters, and I am already fascinated.

A 10-year-old bookworm tells you that it is indeed a good book and can be found on Tomato

Very good, a book worth recommending. I hope it will be updated soon!

It's great. The logic is clear and the content is rich. It uses all kinds of beautiful sentences, all kinds of superb writing styles, and all kinds of rhetorical techniques from the early stage to the later stage. This is well-interpreted, and every character probably has his own network of relationships and story lines. I guess the authors of this novel wrote poems, and the outline is particularly complete.

I don't want to brag or praise, but this is the first Jianghu book that fascinated me so much. I was thinking about reading this book after work. Just keep the 8.6 Rating. In fact, I personally feel that a score of 9.3 Or above is a high score. Originally it was at least 9.5. However, the author's description and description of appearance are not precise and profound enough. This is Shuangwen Jianghu Wen IQ Wen Emotional Wen

Yes, this is one of the few Tomato novels in which the protagonist has a brain. It's a bit like Jiang Ye, but also a bit like the Count of Monte Cristo.

The writing is okay, at least I can keep reading. As long as there are no too toxic plots, I will finish it. Alas, I was really disappointed later.

I have read various books, such as Mystery and Mystery, which I have been reading for several years. Right now on a lot. I can't even read the novel. Then this one is really pretty.

I've only seen one tenth of it, and it's already very exciting. There were a lot of pitfalls in the early stage, but the more you read, the more awesome it becomes, and the pitfalls gradually become more reasonable. But it already feels like it's coming to an end, and there are still a lot of pitfalls that haven't been filled in. I don't dare to think that it's not nine out of ten awesome. I hope it doesn't end badly. For those who talk about this poison and that poison, read a few more chapters. Those who have read the comic thought it was a refreshing article to relieve fatigue, but after reading the novel, it is really awesome.

There are multiple female protagonists, a bit like Invincible. The main line is very clear and easy to follow. The first part is the story of the protagonist, as a genius 7th-level martial artist, using all his tricks to stir up the martial arts in the Great Xia, gradually improving himself and finally becoming the co-leader of the martial arts world. The second part is the story of the protagonist going to the barbaric wilderness to create a world, and finally Daxia and the barbarians join forces to fight against the high-ranking bronze immortal. The part about fighting against the Bronze Immortal is a bit like the land of gems, it's worth watching [Like]

Very good, very good martial arts fairy tale. The protagonist is not only ruthless, but also very smart, and the villain is not dull either. A rare piece of writing. Hope there will be more updates.

I think a good novel is like a wonderful world, with ups and downs of the plot and vivid characters, which can immerse readers in it and forget the worries of reality. Have you read any particularly good novels recently?