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The charm of husband's literature lies in its ability to attract people, enlighten people's minds, and comfort people's souls. However, there is a certain author who is lazy in writing and slow in updating. This is really a pity for the literary world, so I am writing to criticize it. This author first attracted everyone's attention with his wonderful chapters. The whimsical ideas at the beginning, the ups and downs of the plot, and the vivid characters are all amazing. Readers are full of expectations and eagerly look forward to the subsequent development, just like waiting for the rain after a long drought, or waiting for the dawn after a long night. However, as time goes by, updates move at a snail's pace, extremely slow. The readers' enthusiasm gradually cooled down during the long wait; the flame of expectation was almost extinguished during the endless delay. Updates are slow and waste time. Everyone has a busy life, so they take out precious time to devote themselves to reading, just to pursue the joy of literature. However, this author does not know how to cherish it and squanders the readers' patience, making everyone anxious in waiting and disappointed in anxiety. Updates are slow and trustworthy. Now that you have opened the door to the story, you should take responsibility and provide readers with a wonderful sequel on time. However, the author broke his promise and ignored the readers' expectations, making the promise elusive like catkins floating in the wind. Now we, the readers, cannot bear it anymore and rise up to fight against it. I hope this author can wake up, work diligently on writing, speed up the update, and live up to the love of readers. Otherwise, it will be abandoned by readers and criticized by the literary world. We should take this crusade as a warning and call on all authors to cherish the trust of readers and contribute to the prosperity of literature with a positive attitude. Let the boat of literature sail unimpeded in the river of time and bring endless spiritual wealth to the world.

It's very interesting, and ranks t0 among the Conan fics I've read. The protagonist is Fuhe Shi'er traveling through time, Wudiwen, currently joining the winery. The emotional lines are described very delicately, and the daily life between the winery and Hongfang is well written. Conan is almost spoiled haha What I like the most is Fuheshier's character, who is contemptuous of everything, ruthless, and at the same time has a gentleness that is unique to him. I hope the author will work hard and write well! At present, the heroine should be Ran and Shiho, the feeling of mutual redemption, and then the daily interaction with Kuroka is also great. Conan is about to be fooled into joining the organization, and Fushiguro's decisive killing is also vividly written. The protagonist is that kind of redemption... Every supporting character likes the protagonist.

The current sense of indifference is very good. It is between black and white, and many people's friendship is to [laughs] Guado himself kowtows to cp I personally think that one or two is okay. If the harem really reaches a home run, there will be no sense of mutual redemption. (Of course, if the author can grasp it, it is okay not to write it as a seeder.

Author, if you want to change platforms, just let me know and I will follow you.

Yes, if it's Fuhei Shi'er, if it's too long to write the name, you can just write "Shi'er", which is also convenient. It's also ok to write the full name when you want to introduce the name. It's the best one so far.

It's one of the better ones among the few famous ones I've watched, but I still hope there won't be a female protagonist. After all, the original world of magic is full of infatuated people. I hope it doesn't ruin the character. Also, those who scold me are trying to ward off disaster for me.

The writing is quite interesting. Can Shiho be the heroine? [Love] [Blow kiss]

When I watched it, I always felt that it looked familiar, very old, and I might have seen it before, but it was definitely not a Fuhei, but an ordinary male protagonist. He was polite and courteous when he was close to vodka, and it revealed that the male protagonist's basic salary was different from that of Gin, etc. I sincerely hope this is a reference

Not bad, especially the chapters where Shir and Shiho interact, it's very nice☺️In terms of character design, Miyano Shiho's image is 🍅among so many fan novels, it is more consistent with the original work. The other novels feel a bit private and OOC. Those who go for Miyano Shiho can be included in this book (I am) Also, there are two words in the introduction: "organizational leader" and "decision to kill". It can't be justified if a few people on the red side don't die.

Summary: It's not shit, it looks pretty good First of all, this article does not suppress the protagonist's combat power or even slightly strengthens it. It does not require a little bit of ink to unlock the power. It is not a template or a role. It means that he has all the power after traveling to Shi'er, and his character is very similar to the original work. Secondly, this article does not have the kind of plot that makes people laugh without thinking after seeing the strength of the protagonist. Then, this article is a bit private, but it's not a big problem There is also the heroine. From the current look, there should be Ran and Shiho. I don't know about Kurenai.

If you are not the author, you are really gone! What would I do without you! I finally got through it until Noah's Ark came on stage. I was still waiting for the protagonist to enter and just open the unparalleled game to give me a hard time [Crying] The Deep River of Passwords

Come on, author. It's really good. It's not popular yet but I think it will become popular (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*

What a great book. It was made like this by Shen He. Shen He, please stop reviewing it. Let me ask you something.

The writing is still good, and the plot between Xiaolan and Aijiang is handled very well. It's just that some people in the middle misunderstood the writing method, which is quite annoying. I read a comment about the story about Gin's CP. As the protagonist of a winery, it's normal for Gin to have more storylines. The middle part of the plot does have more writing than Lan Ai. It's normal. Personally, there's nothing wrong with it. The problem is probably that the feeling derived from the misunderstanding of Nantong's joy and the identity of the protagonist of Gin's winery were focused on the description before. Based on the context, I think it's normal that the author is still writing about Hitomi. Some plots in the middle are very well designed, and Conan's angel-Gin is also very interesting. However, there were a few Nantong who misunderstood the writing method, Kidd, Conan, and even delayed Gin. There is indeed a lot of fun, but not everyone can accept this kind of fun. Some people love it and some people hate it. I want to give it 5 stars. The various plots in the middle are handled well. However, there are a few plots that I personally can't accept, so I can't give it full stars. In the comment area, I saw the author saying that in the male channel, the way the career line and the emotional line are handled, and the proportion of the plot between the winery and the emotional line are indeed in line with the rhythm of the male channel, and there is nothing to question. Personally, I think it would be better to write less misunderstandings about some Hitomi. After all, this plot feels irrelevant to the main plot of the winery. It is like a medium spicy taste. Those who like it will like it more, but those who don't like spicy food may just leave. It's no wonder that some comments directly mentioned the female author, which is indeed the case.

😀Finally I read a good book, not too spicy😅

A very nice fan fiction. I like the author to continue writing. I hope the reviewers will not meddle in other people's business.

Look good, look good. It feels like getting along with the people in the black organization is also very pleasant. Angel baby loves it. 😘😘😘😘

It's really good-looking, the character design is not broken at all and is very interesting. Jin'er's character is very restored. The only difference is that Conan is a bit miserable (σ≧︎▽︎≦︎)σ.

I want a boy and a girl, I want it to come true, I want it, I want it, I want it, I want it, I want it, I want it, I want it [Adoration]

A particularly good work, if there is a female protagonist, can there be a side story? As for the main story, I still want to see Shen Er's story. Also, will there be any updates? [Almost crying]

It's a really good book. I was still waiting for Xiaolan and the others to know what the protagonist's original ending would be. I didn't expect that they were reviewed and given the knife first. It's a pity. It's a pity.

Full marks, I hope there are no eunuchs, novels of this type are basically full of eunuchs

The characters are a little OOC, but they look good. I hope there is no cp. I just want to keep it like this and be able to eat it everywhere [Sending my heart]

The setting is fine, but it doesn't pass the review. There is nothing we can do. This book is gone, which is a bit regretful.

I don't know what to say. Two words are: beautiful! Three words are: very Okay! Four words: super good-looking! In short, it's just one sentence, I'm impressed It's not a loss!

Personally I feel pretty good, five stars

It's so cool to show me, I hope the heroine has Lan

It's pretty cool, but I'm just asking, would you consider having a female lead? Both lines are developing quite well.

Among Conan, I really like this one. I feel like it brings this theme to life in a different way [please update]

Looks great, looking forward to the fight with Gojo Satoru