After Breaking Off the Relationship, I Was Kept by the Yandere School Beauty

After watching it for so long, I have to evaluate it somewhat. Personally, I think the author Tang's writing is really good, and I'm addicted to reading it. However, the villain is not very good here (although I also know that it cannot go on without the villain). The main problem is that there is no sense of oppression (our Miss Qiao panel is too strong) and she will be killed immediately when she finds out. And none of them have a B rating. In short, cheers for the author! I also look forward to making progress (if you think what I said is wrong, please welcome additions and corrections)

Very nice, please update soon! I'm going crazy! ! ! (Because of the epilepsy of wind sign, I am also like a yandere) Going crazy! ! ! Going crazy! ! ! !

It's so good to watch, I finished reading it in one sitting. I don't want to comment too much, everyone has their own opinion.

It feels just right to me. There is no need to write about college. The emotions in this movie are already in place and the depiction is very good. I, a loser, like to watch it. The male and female protagonists are really dedicated and rarely boring. It would actually be better if the villain had less of that kind of plot.

It was wonderfully written, but it felt like it ended so quickly.

It's pretty good. It's not poisonous. The male protagonist can take things easily and let them go. Facing a family that treats him as a tool, he doesn't care about any bullshit kindness. He just takes revenge when it's time to take revenge. It's better than most regret stories.

It's pretty good to watch, the story is interesting, the female protagonist is also very lively, the male protagonist is not very likable, but I can understand and accept it, and the villain is not miserable enough, which is a bit frustrating. I like this kind of eloquent story. It's interesting to write about daily life. The heroine's father is very cute. Good luck to the author. The male protagonist is nothing and looks disgusting

This is the feeling I like. Possessive, slightly yandere but not so crazy, and arrogant and ignorant about love. The emotional line is rich and the revenge story line is also fun to read. There is no grinding feeling, and the writing is affectionate and righteous without any debt. The writing is good, but the word count is small. I really love this book. Why is there not a million words [crying] It ended too quickly. In fact, I really wanted to read about life in college. If I wrote about college, I could write at least hundreds of thousands of words. The author's writing style is good at creating vivid characters. I'm looking forward to the next book.

The plot is well detailed and progresses normally without feeling stomach-ache. There are currently more than a hundred chapters, and it is a pleasure to read. There is no long-winded stomachache plot. Basically, the weak points will be over quickly and I will not write in detail. For example, at the beginning of the chapter, I want to suppress it first, but it is finished in two pages. It is in sharp contrast to those who suppressed themselves to death in ten chapters. The male protagonist also has a normal personality. In comparison, well, he is not a coward at all. He gets angry at the beginning and quickly gets rid of it. He is basically sure of victory in all frame-ups, and his aura of reducing intelligence to NPCs is basically invisible. The whole story is mainly sweet, with emotional drama throughout, and a strong sense of lightning protection. The NPCs are all more human-like (except for the villain). The male protagonist is not very stupid. After he calmed down, he quickly realized that the female protagonist likes him. No matter it's a villain or something else, it's basically just a seasoning. The main point is the romance between the male and female protagonists [Chigua]

Well enough. Unlike Yandere, although the heroine is kidnapped and drugged before and after, there is no coercion. There is only one chapter in the book where she is imprisoned. It is more like an innocent love story with some tsundere added. I came from another book. In fact, the content and structure of the two books are very similar. The characters of the male and female protagonists are still very cute. I personally think that the structure and rhythm of this book are better than the previous one. The revenge arrangement, including the promotion of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, is more reasonable. Even this This book was adjusted down two years because of the age, and the content of Qin Se and Ming only appears in the last chapter, which is less than once in the previous book. It is still innocent. Compared with the previous book, which skipped it in one go and fast-forwarded to the end of the marriage, this book still fills in the extra content of marriage, post-marriage, and childbirth. But it got a little weird in the second half. After Revenge of the Forest, I spent a lot of pen and ink describing the conflicts with Yan, ignoring Fa Tang. Fa Tang will not be a separate chapter but mixed in between conflicts. But Yan's final ending is obviously not worthy of the wasted pen and ink, and some of them are focusing on one thing and not the other. I guess This is because after the author finished writing Lin, the timeline has not kept up. If he does not create new conflicts, he may have to go through it in one stroke and end it directly like the previous book. Therefore, in addition to the new conflicts, at the end of the end, he also added career line content that was almost not in the previous book, which made it a bit uncoordinated. The author is still very good at describing campus love. In the first half of the book, when he gives out sweets, it makes people want to stop. In the middle of the misunderstanding stage, the imprisonment only uses a knife to deepen the bond between the male and female protagonists. The revenge is a little more cruel than the previous book, but not as cruel. Lin died in an accident in the end. There are more career lines than the previous book, but I think it is not as reasonable as the previous book. This book is still like a fairy tale. What I like to read most is the gap between fairy tale and reality after breaking away from a fairy tale. I forgot to mention why the male and female protagonists in both books have the same surnames as Gu and Qiao. I have reason to suspect that this is the author.

I think it looks pretty good. Anyway, it's okay as long as it's not mindless, the logic is very clear. Well, I recommend it. Anyway, can the author update it more and make it bigger and stronger? Write a million words. Let me look forward to it, okay.

Generally speaking, there is nothing big wrong with it. Occasionally, there will be wrong names or wrong characters, which is understandable. The story is average and feels like a template, but it is better than many yandere novels. The heroine is well portrayed and I really like it.

It looks better than expected. It is my most recommended non-Tata Kai type work at present. The plot is narrated from beginning to end and is not abrupt. The behavior of the characters is consistent with their identities and is very well portrayed. The best thing among them is the relationship and character of the male and female protagonists, especially the female protagonist, who can steadily control all harmful and unstable factors. When the person you love loves you completely, there is no illness but coquettishness. This is a normal yandere with money and power. Finally, I am very envious. I can do what I like with people who are in love with me without the pressure of financial, interpersonal, academic and other worries. I don't have to be tied down, fully tap my potential, and finally give back to the society. What a blessing it is... If I don't say it anymore, I'll go crazy with envy.

It's so good that I listen to it when I play games.

I hope the author can write more than 1 million words and more than 500 pictures. I have already thought of the plot. The first 250 pictures are in high school, the next few hundred pictures are in college, and then marriage and children are completed [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

I have read twenty chapters so far, and there are no surprises. The logic is normal. The writing style is delicate and can bring people into the emotion at critical moments. Too many times, for example, in Chapter 22, I seemed to have a sense of déjà vu with the betrayed Qingmei that the male protagonist had faced.

It's delicious. I've been eating it since the last book. I fell in love with Qiao Xingran's slightly yandere but not so crazy character. After they got together, he turned to the girl side and it directly touched the girl's heart! ! ! ! !

It actually reminds me of another book by the author. How can I put it... Sometimes when I see Qiao Xingran acting, it reminds me of Qiao Zhuo, but the two are not the same person. The writing is as smooth as ever, there is nothing very laggy, and the updates are stable. Five stars! I still hope the author can try something more novel.

The yandere forces love. There are a few male protagonists who are more dignified and not as soft as mud. They are quite good-looking.

Overall, it's a bit of a fun story. The heroine is very yandere in the front, haha, but it's a pity that there's no college writing in the back. It would be great if I wrote some college writing in high school and college. Generally speaking, it's a pure love without a knife in both directions.

This book is already very good among its genre. The disadvantage is that I don't like too many slow-paced and detailed descriptions. At least I have read so many books of the same genre. This book is the most thoughtful and least unreasonable book I have ever read. The subject matter is not novel and there is no impressive plot, which makes it difficult for me to continue reading. However, I cannot deny the high quality of this book.

The author's writing is so beautiful, but I didn't read enough and it ended all at once [crying] And is it really impossible to create a book club group?

It's good-looking, and the characters of the male and female protagonists are very well portrayed. It's just that the villain is a bit abstract. In the early stage, he is a super hero, and in the later stage, he is a spring bamboo [face covering]

The pace of the book is very fast. It begins with the hero's high school life and unfolds the narrative. He reunites with his childhood friends and becomes inseparable. From the high school uniforms to their marriage when they grow up, the characters in the book have clear relationships, and their behaviors and attitudes of love and hate lay the foundation for the rest of the book. (What is even more unforgettable is the uneasy mood of Qingmei, who has been with you for ten years.) Okay, no more gossip. You must cherish the people in front of you.

Classic plot, classic routine, classic rhythm, classic slap in the face There are only two classic words in the whole story. It is a very standard love story on the market with basically no shortcomings but no advantages at all. It is suitable for people who just want to kill time or who have no books to read. This kind of thing with no special features can only have four stars at most. Also, the male protagonist is really awesome. What I want to see is the female protagonist who is weak and punches hard against an external enemy😡

It's super pretty and sweet. I want to ask what sleeping position can help me have such a good dream hhh, but the attribute of yandere is only a very small part in the book, and it's more of a nurturing one hhh [laughs]

It's very beautiful. The relationship between Qiao Xingran and Gu Chen in the early stage was very subtle [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

The male protagonist is lonely and has a difficult life, but he is gentle, considerate and considerate; The heroine lacks family affection, is yandere and paranoid, but is rich, powerful and intelligent. The complementarity of the two makes each other's imperfections achieve the perfection of their lifelong companionship [love] [love]

Good-looking, yandere or something is the best Why don't good books have high scores?

It's been a long time since I've read a love story that fascinates me so much. Apart from the previous Bingshan-senpai, this is the second good story I've read. I didn't think much of yandere stories before (I'm so sorry!), But now I think the author's writing style is really good. I love it. Is the next one coming out?