I Am Immortal, but My Grave Has Been Dug Up!

The author must have just started writing books, right? There are too many books written now. To be honest, the writing is average and the character descriptions are okay. But the plot development is not close to the theme outline of the whole book. I still need to spend some time researching and write my own world, which is completely my own. Come on.

I suggest that the author add more chapters every day and at least ensure that three chapters or more are updated steadily every day. New novels must ensure the number of updates at the beginning, so that the number and quality of the novel can be improved to attract readers. Most readers will not click in to read this novel when it has only updated more than 100 chapters. Basically, a novel wants to be read. If readers click in to take a look, either there are a lot of recommendations, or there are a lot of updated chapters and the ratings are relatively high, so everyone will try to click in and take a look. Judging from the quality of the novel, it is actually pretty good so far. The first dozen or twenty chapters are well written, but the later memories are a bit long and a bit redundant. There is no need to just click through a few chapters. My personal rating is currently 8.5. If the author's novel wants to become popular, he must keep writing. There are only about 100 chapters now, and you only update two chapters every day. Many readers only update the novel with 300 or 400 chapters before it becomes popular. It still takes a long time, so the author must pay attention to the quality during this period. I also want to make two important suggestions. I hope the author will take a serious look at it. First: The novel has established a cool writing pattern from the beginning, so it is best for you, the author, not to be a member of the protagonist group in the later period. The most favorite thing about novels in the 10s was the routine of relatives and friends offering sacrifices to heaven with endless magical power. The authors of that era liked the heroine or important female characters the most, which annoyed me. Many high-scoring novels in the 10s have this feature, so I don't read them. Nowadays, everyone is generally not doing well in real life, so why do they still need to be stabbed online? If you want to be stabbed, why should you read Shuangwen? Do you think so? Second: Li Linglong and Nangong Yue have clearly expressed their love for the protagonist, so in the later stage, I hope the author will not mess around, and don't imitate some novels and make it difficult to reconcile, because you have already paved the way for them to like the male protagonist in the early stage. According to the normal plot development of a cool novel, it is a normal plot for these two to end up in the harem. If you don't accept it, how will you end it after you have described so much before? Is it possible that you want to hurt one of them or kill one of them with a knife? Or if this problem cannot be solved by studying some low-scoring novels, then forcibly assign her to another male character, or let her live alone all her life, which will make you feel uncomfortable? Take the Snow Swordsman Shop as an example. The male protagonist has accepted so many women, but two of them have been left out. It's a bit of a surprise to everyone. If you accept the others, why don't you accept these two? Aren't you doing this on purpose to disgust the readers? So I really don't understand, and I don't like that paragraph. Either you have one heroine in the whole story, and the hero does not flirt with other female characters, and other female characters will not take the initiative to express their love for the hero, and then let the hero refuse to hurt her to prove his love for the heroine, or other female characters fall in love with the hero, and your hero should not pretend to be aloof. Everyone is reading cool novels. Click here to read cool stories. Why do cool stories open more harems? Just accept it, don't be coy, this novel has laid the foundation for a cool novel, and it also has a tendency to open a harem. I don't want your author to pretend to be aloof, like Nangong Yue, Li Linglong, since the foreshadowing has been made. Don't be coy. In the end, your author gave me a big shit, and everyone was so angry that everyone gave you low marks! Finally, use love to generate electricity to support the author.

Very good-looking, strong when faced with strong situations. Come on, code words, the author will write 10,000 new words every day. Come on! Not enough, not enough at all👀Hurry up and code

Very good, my kids love to eat it!

He is truly invincible and has no weak points in terms of cultivation. 666 Likes this kind of invincibility all the way, getting stronger when encountering a strong one, and his cultivation level is unknown!

Five stars are necessary to express my respect😊

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The quality of the authentic depiction of the time is very good.

It's wonderfully written, keep it up

Update it quickly, otherwise I will control you. You know my methods best [learned]

Thinking clearly, no pitfalls so far

Although the ending is not perfect, this book is already very good

More more more more more more more more more more more more more more

Good luck, hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee hee

It's pretty good, pretty good-looking. . It just has less space.

The pace is tight and not sloppy

Five stars, hahaha, I heard that the memory part is not good, so I skipped it. The rest is quite enjoyable [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Hold your face]

A great book, worth reading

Good looking, worth recommending

Mind-blowing and enjoyable

No need to say anything good looking

It would be nice without ads

It was good at first, but I don't know how it will turn out.

Good, good, good, good, good, good

So cool ah ah ah ah

I was fascinated by it, it's such a good book

Very nice, but a little incomplete

No poison points have been found yet, but I have always been invincible.

Good looking, but a little short

It was okay, but it ended a little too quickly.