[Lighthearted and Humorous Style] [Not Mindless] [A Small Cheat] [Cyber War] [Pseudo-Business Rivalry] [Pseudo-Conquest] [Pseudo-Political Intrigue]
What kind of proper person transmigrates?
Could a proper person even transmigrate?
Liu Guan fancied himself a successful man, but he certainly wasn't proper, so he transmigrated.
This was a transcendent world with 72 sequences, and also a magnificent cyberpunk world.
More than six hundred years into the Calamity Era, as savage beasts attacked without end, city after city towered hundreds of feet into the sky. At last, humanity won a century of respite.
The leaders of the past had forgotten their original purpose.
Heaven and earth were a furnace, and the countless living beings were its fuel, burning without end.
The irreverent Liu Guan decided to do something about it.
With one slash, he cut down every enemy. Sword in hand, he looked around and dared to ask: Who is the hero?
"Brother Liu, how about composing a poem?"
In the crowd, the deputy commander of the Northern Army clasped his hands and teased him.
"Better not. My poems always come with a critique."
"That's just what I like about them."
"Yeah! Give them a thorough scolding!" the crowd egged him on.
"Though tiny as a grain of rice, the moss flower still blooms like a peony."
As of now, there is no big problem with the plot rhythm, and coincidences are not considered deliberate. The content is relatively fascinating, but since the world view has not yet been developed, and the protagonist is just a little Karami, it is not clear how to write the follow-up. My personal expectations are mainly two points. The first is that if you are poor, you can benefit yourself, and if you are successful, you can help the world. Don't become that kind of completely inhumane capitalist. Technology and population are both labor forces, so it is possible to make the bottom class live a better life. The second thing is about the emotional line. I haven't seen the author indicate whether to write a female protagonist or not. But the character portrayals are still relatively vivid at present, so I think the author should be able to control the writing of emotions? I prefer to have a female protagonist. Note that she is a female protagonist, a protagonist, not a pendant. Of course it's just a personal feeling, but try not to portray too many main characters. I can accept stories with multiple heroines, but the requirements are that each heroine must have her own turn, with a distinct personality and unique emotional line (this key point is the most troublesome to copy, like a stallion.), There is a lot of writing, and it cannot be invisible for thirty or fifty chapters. Of course, I still expect the author to write it himself. Unless it is a plot with a particularly fast pace, try not to follow what is written in the comment area. After all, the number of readers who will speak is in the minority. What I want to see is the story the author wants to express. After all, this level of writing is considered rare in Tomato, and the author definitely put his heart into it. Then the outline will at least have a direction.
The structure is very good and the world view is novel, but the pace is too fast. It would be better if it were written in more detail.
It's okay so far, I hope it will continue to work, come on author😄
Not bad, the plot is reasonable, you don't have to lose too much brainpower
It's really nice. If you want to make it quickly, you can try it. If you're a book reader, you can also try it.