Urban High Martial: Quietly Cultivating Immortality and Wowing My Senior

I've only read seven chapters. I'm definitely not qualified to comment on things, but Yang Qingya really moved me at the beginning. She came to the rescue when the male protagonist didn't answer the question. After that, the dialogue and little actions between the male protagonist and her really poked me. Then the evil spirit appeared, and the second male protagonist disguised himself and protected Yang Qingya behind him. These gave me a very matching feeling. It's just that the author probably didn't intend to write it like this. From other people's comments and the chapters that follow, I think Miss Gu should be the heroine. Miss Gu is also very powerful. It seems that she is very strong so far, and she is a good match for the male protagonist. However, the male protagonist secretly filmed Miss Gu at the beginning, which made me uncomfortable. Maybe I have preconceived ideas. In the end, the author should follow his own ideas. I left four stars and left first.

The writing is good, at first I thought it was just a dog food article. But after reading it, I found that the writing was quite good. But I personally feel there's a bit too much foreshadowing. Um, tell me more about writing? The heroine? Topic in this area. Because I happened to be reading the comments, the author and book friends were discussing the issue of the heroine, so I would like to express my own opinion. I think the author's writing is really good so far. Don't change the book to cater to the opinions of book friends, otherwise the book will definitely become more and more messy. After all, everyone has different ideas. If everyone listens to book friends, it will definitely be completely different. Just cut out some suggestions that the author thinks are good. As for the heroine, I suggest that since the author is currently determined to be Gu Tingwan, don't change it. I believe that a small number of people have the same idea as me. In fact, I don't really care whether a book has a single heroine, no heroine, a harem, or who the heroine is. Because there are always different people who like different types. We can just find what we like, rather than the author changing it just because the readers like it. At least for me, I am the most taboo about this aspect. Changing my mind is really disgusting. I once read a novel with good reviews and good popularity. However, because the author wanted to eat both sides of the story, that is, he changed his mind about the heroine, the reviews plummeted. For example, in the current novel world, there are generally three types of heroines: single heroine, single heroine, and harem. If you change your mind easily, you will end up hurting one of them. The same goes for changing the heroine. Different people will definitely like different character settings. Readers can decide whether to continue reading according to their own preferences. The author decides who the heroine is, and the reader decides whether to read or not. This is my opinion. Thousands of people have the same truth. If I write based on everyone's suggestions, it will definitely not work.

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The plot is pretty normal so far, and the plot and characters are not too low-key. But can you make the male protagonist more powerful? How can the immortal cultivator be able to abuse supernatural powers? Not to mention Qi training, you can use spells to build your foundation, and your golden elixir can explode into stars. Can the intensity of the male protagonist be increased to make it more enjoyable?

The plot is not amazing enough, but it looks good to the senses

Yes, there is no world that looks down on the protagonist, a brainless pretentious slap in the face, and a superpower system with a very high upper limit. It controls the elements of novels and explains the rules and regulations. Personally, I feel that it is not weaker than Xiuxian, but it is not as comprehensive as Xiuxian.

Can the author use search and replace to change the name? I have to figure out who the weird names are. Word and WPS have search and replace functions.

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Why is no one watching?

It's very beautiful. Although the emotional line has not been fully developed, it looks pretty good. Although she is a single heroine, her deskmates are also very good. Come on