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Te Ma Tou asked me to write a book review? So I wrote it. Because I can't subjectively judge whether it's good or bad, I'll just talk about my creative experience. This book was written by a knife in the bedroom. I read other authors' fanfics and it wasn't enough, so I wrote it. This was my motivation. The creative idea is because I don't understand the prehistoric system, I have only read a little bit of popular science and a little bit of panda head cultivating immortals, and I have some fantasies about technology, so I came up with the Goujian account of the Interstellar Alliance. The main character's name is chosen by the soldiers and generals. At first, the word "Dian Zhu" for "Zhu" has to be deleted and rewritten. I am from Guangc, so I read "Zhu" for "Zhu" but not "Zhu". The more I write later, the more I write, and Dianthus also has settings. When I first started writing, I fantasized about becoming the next 9+1 Sunshiyan every day, but well, it was all fantasy. There was an outline for this book at the beginning, and I also thought about sticking to the original work, and then? . ? , I couldn't keep the outline, so I estimate that the three chapters took thirty chapters, but that's fine, there's no suspicion of plagiarism, they're all original. Now this book has become an improvisation, and the outline will only have a single complete story segment, not the entire book. That's fine, there's no limit to the ending, I'll always stick to it I call myself the King of Wild Pictures and the King of Cold Recommendations, and I will focus on describing the cold characters in the original novel (except for Yaizhen, who no one remembers) By the way, I would like to thank all the friends who have liked my books for their support. I do not advocate paid rewards, only free rewards. A little praise is the biggest reward. I will be happy for a long time!

The subject matter is very novel, and it is really eye-catching. The logic of advanced knowledge is very clear without being too confusing. And the main story is very attractive, and the descriptions of each character are also very vivid, which is always very good [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

So far, I think it is the most beautiful Youshouyan fanfic I have ever read. The use of science fiction and immortality in the article is simply a love letter from my dreams. The only shortcoming is that it is a bit bland and lacks a bit of spicy excitement. The author's writing style is also very good. I hope the author can write more, maybe a million words [laughter]

It's good-looking, and it's quite rare to see a tech-type Youshouyan (this is a trumpet account)

Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I can feel it is a good book for now. Compared with other animal fics, I chose to start from the perspective of technology, which feels quite novel, and the design is very suitable. Naturally, I can find that it has been carefully considered. This is the assessment for now. This is a potentially good book... It looks good, and it tastes good! ! ! Author, write quickly! Ahhhhhhhhhh!

It looks comfortable, the plot flow, no knife, just candy

The third beautiful book is so beautiful. It's also long, so I didn't have to look for the book for a while. Compared to other fanfics, this one requires a worldview, a worldview, and characters. It's very enjoyable to read.

To be honest, I think this work that combines exile, technology, the universe, and daily life is really romantic! The author is very talented in writing group portraits. I hope he can continue to keep updated to accompany my high school life.

This novel is written from the perspective of future technology, step by step, integrated with the world view of Youshouyan, and rationally distributed. At the same time, most of the regrets in the original work were slowly resolved in the way of Dianthus, and a new world view of Youshouyan was created. In it, you can perform reasonable CP٩(´`)(´`)۶ based on the original work.

Very well written, keep up the good work 1

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha 👍

Haokang, I haven't found such a good book on Tomato for a long time.

I hope the author can persevere and write slowly without rushing.

Very few people have watched it, but it is quite interesting. However, the progress of the plot is average and there is no major plot. I hope the author can use his brain to think of more plots.

Highly recommended, the content is not a simple retelling of the original work, it is all original. I especially like the description of Si Buxiang and Dianthus. Si Buxiang is still super cute, and this pair is so cute. Hehehe~

I feel like Sister Bai, it's fun all the way to the end, and I can't find any flaws. It may not be popular because of the time period or the subject matter, but I like it anyway

The perfect combination of science fiction and beasts, and the novel subject matter make it hard not to be impressed by the same system and time travel fans. At the same time, the good setting, excellent writing, and wonderful plot made me cry with joy as I have been short of books for a long time due to the proliferation of systems. It's so good! ! !

It's pretty good. There's no knife. It's so sweet that I feel dizzy.

Wow wow wow that's great [send heart]

The author writes well

Very beautiful I hope the author will do a better job with this book😍😍 I hope this book won't be interrupted halfway through. [I hope this book will be updated and completed] I hope the author will update more

It's still pretty, nothing bad about it

It's quite good, it's worth reading. The author's writing style is very good, there is nothing poisonous, and it feels very smooth while reading it.

Meow meow meow meow ~ (good looking)

It's beautiful, I love watching it, I watch it every day [Blow a kiss]

This book is really nice

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's great^ω^ Love it, author, cheers~

After reading it, I realized that I forgot to comment, so I added [face covering]

It looks good, but it feels like the CPU is burned out.