Apocalyptic Beautiful Girl! Start Playing as an Official Organization!

This theme is quite good [I learned], but when the protagonist takes action, there is too much daily life and too little actual action. I hope the protagonist can stand up in the future. The main reason is that the protagonist discovers the shortcomings of restoring power and has no idea of making up for it in the future. He still cares about paddling and living his own life. The army under his command is completely self-disciplined by hanging up. I hope the protagonist can take responsibility and manage it in the future [Thinking] No, are you really planning to practice personal heroism? [Petrochemical] Then I'm done, I feel like this article is half gone, and why is it that the main character has been wearing it for more than three months and still blushes from time to time when he sees his female body? Does he really feel so much about his body? It's better to just say that the protagonist has just traveled through time [Petrified]. In the latest chapter, I especially emphasize that you are really powerful. [Like] Damn, giving four stars is my first good impression of this article.

The book is good, the logical relationship is quite strong, the characterization is also good, and the plot (not counting the protagonist) is also good, but the protagonist is somewhat boring. I think the author may want to portray an "ordinary" "person" who is useless, useless, weak, has no vision, and is somewhat retarded and incompetent, but he is somewhat disgusting. Until now. I've read all the updated ones. How should I put it? The previous ones were "terrible, terrible, terrible, terrible", but after the horror, no measures were taken. Maybe it was the "general trend" (I saw it in another novel, simply put, they were two fools). Song Zhihan just escaped in the front, but no measures were taken to deal with those folk superpowers later. How? Do you think Song Zhihan is an exception? Do you believe in your "doll", or do you think you are hiding well? 1: An example? She couldn't help but laugh. In three months, she herself knew that so many superpowers had changed qualitatively. Even if they affected the ones here, what about the ones in other places? How to ensure your own safety? 2: I also think the "doll" is a poisonous point. Let's go into details. You can see from the front that there are so many individual heavy weapons. Song stood and let her attack them. Not only did she defend them, but they also allowed Song to run away. (Here, Song ran away because he couldn't fight back. If he was randomly assigned an attack position, the "doll" would be wasted.) When it comes to missiles, artillery shells and other heavy weapons, they are not SB. They can run and attack by surprise. The enemy is in darkness and we are in the dark. How dare they do that? Three: Hiding well? Why, that triple-reinforced door of yours? Is everyone curious enough to open it, and when it is opened, the "doll" comes to the rescue? That's it, it's a good thing that the Federation likes. Being rescued is fine, but you can only accept it (passive) Continue to complain below Overall, the book is good. It would be better if the author could delete the protagonist, so I give it four stars and give it some review heat.

Plot analysis The plot is eye-catching and the characters are very vivid. But it's a pity that the portrayal of the protagonist ruined half of the previous advantages. Timidity and cowardice can be seen in the protagonist, and even "terrible" appears many times in the description of the protagonist. Later, the protagonist's portrayal should change from timid to brave, but a new problem arises. A large part of the plot description is difficult for me to understand. If it were another person, this matter would not develop like this, or this matter should not develop this way if it is the protagonist. Some of the plot trends in the article are inappropriately described. Of course, they can also be understood as the psychological growth history of the protagonist. The plot is foreshadowed from the very beginning, and new pits appear before they are filled, making it confusing. Part of the plot is difficult to understand, or inconsistent. Of course, it can also be regarded as the protagonist's hindsight. This article summarizes 1. The protagonist stays at home and rarely shows up. The characters provided in the basic game to develop and foreshadow the plot should be behind-the-scenes. 2. The plot in the article has been developing slowly, so it can be regarded as a slow-paced novel. 3. So far, the protagonist has not had an ambiguous relationship or intimate contact with anyone of the opposite sex or the same sex, so it should be a non-CP novel. 4. The protagonist obtained an army at the beginning, but his overall strength is considered average and he should be considered a semi-invincible character. Summary: no CP + behind the scenes + semi-invincible + slow pace (One star is deducted. The description of the protagonist has always been terrible at the beginning. Except for the description including the protagonist, this book can be said to be five stars)

A must-read for the author When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is more focused. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.

At the beginning, you will definitely feel that the protagonist's personality is a bit bad, but as you watch later, you will feel more and more obsessed with it. It's a pity that it just stopped being updated, I don't know why.

It looks good, but isn't this really a conversion from a female channel to a male channel? [Awkward laugh]

Changing order + not getting married + original God characters appearing later + behind-the-scenes flow + Cthulhu? +Apocalyptic text+Special abilities (such as powers, magic)+Some inexplicable organizations appeared in the middle and late stages. In fact, this novel is okay, but the protagonist is a bit useless and the plot is a bit inexplicable. I originally wanted to give it three stars, but since this book is a single novel, I will give it four stars to support it, even though the book has been completed. So scary, so scary, so scary, so scary, so scary, so scary, so scary, so scary, so scary, so scary, so scary.

@ Forest After reading the latest, I found that the logic is quite good. There was a golden finger in front who wanted to ensure safety as soon as possible, but found that the Order Collective was deliberately destroyed by someone with a heart. The overall situation is strange and unpredictable. So first solve the immediate environmental crisis, stay in place and let the exposed confidence come out to test. This is the archer The writing is also good, and the emotional aspect of the social area where public opinion goes out of control a few months after the power is restored is well controlled. Moreover, the researchers' affection for each other was also very evident. Finally, which direction are you going to take in this book in terms of sexuality? Judging from the atmosphere of this article, unless you choose to go BG, the male protagonist will only have a strong female protagonist and a weak male protagonist. The sudden appearance of a strong male protagonist will weaken the delicate sense and personality of the heroine, and may even seem to usurp the lead. This is an inevitable shortcoming of the heroine novel. So insurance policy is the best, 100% better than marriage Finally, I would like to thank the author for creating this work with unlimited potential. Five-star support

Although some people have always said that this book is not good enough, I think it is quite good. Some people are not satisfied with the character of the protagonist, but a big reason why I like this book is because of the character of the protagonist. It allows me to see the real psychology of an ordinary person who suddenly faces unknown fears and disasters, although his life experience is very old-fashioned. The protagonist's entanglement in some major events allowed me to see the reaction that a normal person should have. Although I probably gave up in the end, I still look forward to an update one day.

It's very interesting, especially the last chapter, which surprised me, but it's a bit short, and the official organization of the different world seems to have not appeared. What happened to the biologist with the supernatural ability who escaped after being rescued in the first place?

It's good to watch, but it's a pity that the writing is not very good. After the protagonist mastered the military communications, he did not immediately report the city and its content. I feel like you focused on the wrong thing. I didn't see the protagonist [what] in the whole process.

It can be seen that the author has written some macro narratives and is trapped. From a macro perspective, everyone is insignificant. Only those factors that are beneficial to the whole have the value of protection. Harmful factors should be removed as much as possible. However, micro narrative [the protagonist's] perspective is also added, so the service objects of the macro narrative are actually secretly poking at the protagonist, not everyone. How can I put it, Wangdao Shuangwen

Is there going to be a plot about rebuilding civilization? [What] So far, the plot is pretty good and doesn't have any bad points, but I just don't quite understand the protagonist's socio-horror + otaku setting...

Come on, my beautiful girl is here

When can the protagonist share abilities with his clone? The protagonist's body is too weak and just one resurrection is too little.

It's over, you told me it's over [Star], I finally found a book I like [Petrochemical], I won't follow you anymore, woo woo woo. [Cry]

Let me just say it straightforwardly, regardless of the ratings and comments. Some people deliberately exaggerate. (You can think of those people as trolls) Although it is a little bit toxic, it is still well written. Let me put it another way, well, the protagonist described by the author sometimes plays too much of himself. But we can ignore it.

The plot is very good. It would be better if the protagonist had less daily life. I have a question, why don't all the people in Doomsday know how to farm? Or is it that people in cities no longer know how to farm?

Beautiful, love watching it! It's my favorite subject, I'll help you go to Shuhuang Square to recommend it [please update]

The puppet should be described in a colder way, instead of being humane and inhumane at one moment.

Good looking, good looking, come on

No? ! No? ! No? ! Why is it over? ! It's obviously very well written, right? [Cry]

Not bad, but the character of the protagonist may be a bit difficult to write in the future

Seriously? I was so looking forward to your work, and you told me you were done.

Write what you want to write, follow the path you want to take, and let others have their say.

Doomsday plus behind-the-scenes plus Genshin Impact and it represents the official, which is relatively novel and okay.

It's barely okay, but there's too much nonsense in the front and some minor poisoning. But a lot of updates will make up for this, so look forward to the updates.

Very good, looking forward to the follow-up

It's really a pity that there are only more than 100 pictures. The logic is smooth and can complete the closed loop. Overall it's pretty good, 9 points is fine. At least I personally think so. Well, I read very few books on Tomato, but if I have to find a few good books in the genre of post-apocalyptic protagonists and official armies, this one is definitely the highlight. It's a pity that there are two other books. The sense of immersion and military details are very good, and the books have been taken off the shelves. Only one or two copies are still there. It's really quite good.

Although the writing style is immature, the ideas and themes are quite interesting. It is novel to integrate the second dimension with the real army and the apocalypse.