Red Mansion: Abducted to Yangzhou and Intercepted Hu Lin Daiyu

It's just so-so. Reading the comments section, readers can't agree. The Red Mansion written by the author is more realistic and the characters are more detailed, but the plot design is quite boring. I feel that the protagonist is superfluous. The tragedy in Daiyu is still a tragedy. It is a waste of food and a pity to abandon. Maybe it's because the readers are ordinary people and can't appreciate it. They read novels to relieve the fatigue caused by work and seek happiness. Speaking of which, the author is quite generous, asking the readers to eat the knife, which makes the readers cry. There are many excellent Red Mansions fan stories, such as: Red Mansions went to Beijing to beat Master Bao violently, the broom star and the adopted son of the Lin family. The scores are quite high, and a lot of people read it, especially the first one, Nine Points Zero. Turnips and greens, everyone has their own preferences. The author's writing is very good. My personal opinion is that I hope I can speak rationally.

It's well written, the writing is smooth, and the plot and story are exciting and interesting. Hope it can be maintained, stay tuned eunuch. [Learned] After entering Beijing, I suffered from various frustrations and my scores were severely reduced: 1. When Jia Baoyu of Lin Jia's Mansion was choosing a character for Lin Daiyu, the protagonist shivered. If asked, I would also choose a character for Jia Baoyu as a joke to see how they would react. If the Jia family, which is about to decline, can't withstand this pressure, then it's better not to rebel. 2. The emotional connection between the protagonist and Lin Daiyu faded inexplicably very quickly. Even Sanchun would often go to the protagonist to play, but Lin Daiyu had to wait for Sanchun to come to the protagonist. The previously written scenes of growing up together were not included. 3. Same as the previous point, if the protagonist wants to tie up Daiyu, he also needs to make a plan to make Lin Daiyu recognize Jia Baoyu as a person. It can be seen that the protagonist is not confident in this aspect or the author does not understand love, or does he think Daiyu is a person who rides a donkey to find a horse? First of all, the protagonist is a disciple who has the title of civil servant and is raised by Lin Ruhai. In this era, the disciples are basically the same as father and son, and there are various secret forces cultivated. He is fully capable in the Jia family and does not need to be so aggrieved. What kind of trouble can these people in the Jia family make. I don't know how the author conceived it, but I personally didn't feel comfortable with it.

There is no poisonous point, the IQ is online, and the killing is decisive. It is obvious that he has a strong literary background. Driving high and driving low, I entered the Rongguo Mansion and started to lose my wits, and even bit the dog.

I entered the trap relatively late, and I also read the comments in the book along the way, which made me tremble. I was afraid that the author would be affected by those words and stop updating or revising. I haven't found a book of such high quality on Tomato for a long time. Don't stop updating. [Sending my heart] Author, I understand you, so you must persist [Blow a kiss] The author should stick to writing novels. I will definitely read the new book.

Just calm down and read it carefully, and be more patient. This Red Mansion fanfic is really worth reading (book friends can read Chapter 160). It's good that Tomato can see such a fanfic. It is on the same level as Next Door (Wan Tian Qing) (Hong Lou Chun), the characters are well created, and the characters of Baochai and his family in the original work are well restored. Don't Lick Xue Baochai (it doesn't matter if you are a concubine). His status and family background are not as good as those of Daiyu, but his family's ambitions are as high as the sky. (In order to keep the family business, the Xue family's dream of becoming a concubine is to retreat and seek the next best thing, clinging to Jia's family as a backer, calculating, and ostracizing. Businessmen are businessmen. There are countless Xue Baochai in reality, but Daiyu only exists in the Dream of Red Mansions) Daiyu is too miserable in the original work. Please let the author let Daiyu ride on Xue Baochai's head [Breaking Updates] [Breaking Updates] [Breaking Updates]

The world of mortals is noisy, but I am the Dream of Red Mansions. Wrapped in red makeup, it shows luxury, this is the moment in the world and in heaven. My heart is always at ease like floating clouds, smiling at the new things in the world. The top level of Red Mansions, no one can match it!

I believe that most of the readers who clicked on this book should be similar to me. As a fan of Red Mansions, I also know that many high-scoring books on Tomato are written by trolls, and the corresponding comments are also fake at first sight. Some even dare to say how good the plot design is, how detailed the characterization is, etc. After reading it for 30 minutes. But at around two o'clock in the morning this morning, I wrote a book review for the first time. I want to say that this book is indeed well written. So far, I have not found any poisonous points. The author is also very careful in writing and often conducts research. It can be seen that Red Mansion also has an understanding. The details in the article are reasonably described and will not make people feel abrupt. This book is indeed worth reading. I even feel that the writing and Tomato do not quite match. Even if I go to the starting point, it is still a rare and good article. I hope the author will continue to keep up the good work.

It's been a long time since I've seen The Red Mansion with such good writing, and it has a touch of Cao Gong's style. The character growth is well-founded, the plot is reasonable and smooth, and the characters are deeply portrayed. Different from other fast-food Red Mansion articles on Tomato🍅, the plot is relatively slow but has ups and downs.

After reading the beginning, there were too many details and the plot was a bit slow. But I have to admit that the more I read, the more reluctant I am to give up because of the cost of silence. I originally wanted to see how the protagonist gets rid of his identity as a disaster victim and how he brings about changes in the world? Even if you are fighting for yourself, you should always have a goal. But you can't always see it. Moreover, the turning point was so sudden that it was understandable to block Lin Ruhai's path and build a relationship. This was considered a gamble and a risk. But I can't figure out why the other party wants to accept you as a disciple. Was it you who took the lead in poisoning the trafficker? Then naturally, without any investigation or testing, he directly regarded the protagonist as the heir to the mantle and the young master, and it was so heart-warming. And your reading skills are average. How do you maintain this love? The protagonist also treats others indifferently. Xiuzhu was indifferent when she died, and had nothing to do with the mistress when she died. She and Daiyu were ordinary in getting along. How about seeing her slip into her destined destiny, and then cherish her in the absurdity of the Jia family? This strong Mo Yan style relies on the invincibility of tragedy in the context of the times to write about the mental journey of the people in the game who are always hesitant about redemption. I can't appreciate it. Looking back, I still give it a five-point rating. Cheers, author.

It's well written. In today's fast food culture, there are not many articles with slow pace and full plot and character creation. Five stars encourage me to continue reading below (Tomato readers are more violent. The author's book is more suitable for the starting point, so the score will be higher) Well written, very good

The protagonist's growth journey is pretty well written, but it still can't escape the vulgar plot of a harem novel. (80% Of The Red Mansions are harem stories, I've read too many of them; I hope the author writes more about power and strategy, and can focus on the main line of the Jia family, but don't mix too much love and love, because the Jia family wants all kinds of women [smile] [smile] [smile]). Secondly, I sincerely hope that the author's writing style on historical machinations can be polished and polished. When writing the next book, he can concentrate on writing a book on machinations. It is estimated that the results will be even higher and the author's talent will not be buried. [Like][Like][Like]

In fact, personally speaking, this book is quite good from the writing style to the plot to the main theme. At least among the Red Mansions fans I know so far, I think it is the first one. It is relaxing and not unconventional at the same time. It's actually quite good. I can only say that different platforms have different audiences. Most people come to Tomato just for the emotional value (I also read Tomato because I am a poor student and have no money to read paid online articles). And as long as the Red Mansion is not mindless and enjoyable, it will involve some intrigues, culture, etc. It is highly literary, and people who are impatient will naturally not be able to read it. But I personally think this book is quite good. On the contrary, I was a little timid after discovering the decrease in traffic, which made me feel a little awkward. Personally, I feel that if the author has no financial or reputational concerns, he might as well try to stick to his original idea. Why should he repeatedly change his original style of his ideal work in order to cater to the Tomato public?

This is the best Red Mansions novel I have ever read.

The writing style is good, the literary talent is good, and everyone is smart, but the author probably didn't give a gift, which offended people, causing the article to be shut down. If it weren't for the sake of supporting the family, if I had written it completely on another platform, it would probably have become a big hit. I hope the author will change his mentality and write two high-quality novels, try not to make any money, and build his reputation first, and then the financial resources will naturally come rolling in. Whether the book is good or not, fans will naturally support you. No matter where you write? As long as your book is good, they will naturally follow you, why are you afraid of not making money? If the tomatoes are not good, send them to other places, and do not delete them. Literati have the character of a literati, and only with principles can they have direct troops.

The author's literary talent is indeed very good, and he has read some of the poems deeply. Nowadays, very few people know the poems of Wang Guowei and Wang Yangming, let alone composed their own poems. It's a really good book. It's not too much to rank it in the top three among the Red Mansions.

Very delicate, one of the best among the Red Mansions

Thousands of people and thousands of books dream. I have read most of it and have some personal comments. As many comments in the article said, the author does have some unexpected, or "poisonous points" that have never been seen in Red Mansions fan fiction. But who can know what ending Cao Gong arranged in the past. As for this book, for a novel, there is no problem with a full five-star rating. The plot is not dragging, the writing is brilliant, and the characterization is amazing. The author is a well-educated writer. Highly recommended! I see many book friends saying that Yuanzi's writing is not good. I want to say: the author really brought the protagonist into that book, rather than the so-called tough resistance and slap in the face. The author's writing of the book gave me the feeling that it really brought him into the times, into that era of stupidity and filial piety in feudal society. This is really good writing.

The author's literary skills are very good. This book is underestimated. I hope it can be updated and completed normally. It seems that the water in the tomato pond is also very muddy. It is true that everything in the world is prosperous, and everything in the world is prosperous. Not being envied is mediocrity, come on, author.

This book is superior to other Red Mansions. There are no system plug-ins, which makes it comfortable to read. The Red Mansions should be read slowly and carefully. I think it is very close to the original text. In fact, you don't need to read it as a novel. The protagonist's experience of starting from scratch is much more comfortable than the first one.

What a rare and good book. The author portrays Lin Siheng in a way that is more in line with modern young people's views on things. Every character in the article is very full-bodied. It is a rare masterpiece. Besides, the author is also very stable when driving [awkward laugh]

Everyone expressed their opinions. I personally think it looks pretty good. The writing style is also more rigorous. When reading the book, please do not use modern ideas. It's not easy for Tomato, a fast food platform, to have such high-quality products.

The writing is very good, and it is considered to be at the top level among Red Mansion fans on this platform. Although the plot is occasionally a little forced, it is generally quite reasonable, the characters are relatively facial, and the best writing is brilliant. The dialogues between the characters in the article have an ancient flavor, which is quite comfortable to read. Modern vocabulary does not pop up from time to time. In this regard, it surpasses most Red Mansion fans. It's a pity that once women are involved, the author can no longer maintain it. Thinking about the harem, he has sacrificed a little bit of the rationality of the story and the personality of the characters, and added many details that are inconsistent. In the end, the first volume is the most brilliant.

[Thinking] The book is a good book. I thought it was very good when I started reading it. Then I didn't realize that it was a harem story. I thought the title of the book was about a single heroine, but I was caught off guard. The further I read the book, the more it became more like a Liu Bei story. This book is also the most edited novel I have ever seen [Laughing and crying] It's an eye-opener

The setting of the protagonist is novel and can combine garden drama with government affairs. It depends on how the protagonist balances career and garden in the later period. If the balance is well balanced, it will be very exciting. I don't know if it's a harem story, but if it is, I can't accept all the twelve beauties, and giving it a happy ending will make up for the regrets of the original work, haha. It would be better if there were more chapters.

I read a fanfic before, which focused on officialdom, supplemented by garden drama, and was written as an official novel. That's not to say that the writing is not good, but I think it's better for Red Mansions fans to focus on emotion. It's okay to write up.

It's a good Red Mansions novel, but not a cool one. It's still the harem I love [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] Come on, author, write slowly according to your own ideas!

I have read three or four Red Mansion fanfics on Tomato, and some of them scored 8+9+. To be fair, this book is worth reading carefully in terms of writing speed, emotional logic, character presentation, and inner portrayal. It's just that this 8.3 Score is indeed misleading and it is easy to be preconceived. Of course, as a soul-traveling novel, this book does not have much description of the benefits of time-traveling that are easy to bring about pleasure, but despite its shortcomings, it is still a good book on Tomato.

It's super beautiful. Although I haven't read the original masterpiece of Red Mansions, it doesn't affect my love for the original work and my pity for the characters in it. This novel completely put me into it. The characters in it are as different as the original work. Sister Feng, Daiyu, Qingwen, Si Qi, Sanchun and Lin Ruhai are all vivid and vivid. It's amazing.

I haven't read it so seriously for a long time, I read it for 5 or 6 hours straight. I couldn't bear to let go after seeing it in the middle of the night. Generally speaking, Daiyu Baochai and others written by the author seem to have souls, and they fit the characters in the original work very well. It seems like another part of their lives. Come on, author! It's really wonderfully written.

Red Mansion fanfiction, great book! I can feel the author's intention. Although it is a cool article, the logic is clear, the lines are delicate, the characters' interactions are in line with their respective personalities, the plot design is reasonable and fascinating, I hope more people will read it, I recommend it!