A Distant Guest in the Red Chamber

It's just so-so. Reading the comments section, readers can't agree. The Red Mansion written by the author is more realistic and the characters are more detailed, but the plot design is quite boring. I feel that the protagonist is superfluous. The tragedy in Daiyu is still a tragedy. It is a waste of food and a pity to abandon. Maybe it's because the readers are ordinary people and can't appreciate it. They read novels to relieve the fatigue caused by work and seek happiness. Speaking of which, the author is quite generous, asking the readers to eat the knife, which makes the readers cry. There are many excellent Red Mansions fan stories, such as: Red Mansions went to Beijing to beat Master Bao violently, the broom star and the adopted son of the Lin family. The scores are quite high, and a lot of people read it, especially the first one, Nine Points Zero. Turnips and greens, everyone has their own preferences. The author's writing is very good. My personal opinion is that I hope I can speak rationally.

It's well written, the writing is smooth, and the plot and story are exciting and interesting. Hope it can be maintained, stay tuned eunuch. [Learned] After entering Beijing, I suffered from various frustrations and my scores were severely reduced: 1. When Jia Baoyu of Lin Jia's Mansion was choosing a character for Lin Daiyu, the protagonist shivered. If asked, I would also choose a character for Jia Baoyu as a joke to see how they would react. If the Jia family, which is about to decline, can't withstand this pressure, then it's better not to rebel. 2. The emotional connection between the protagonist and Lin Daiyu faded inexplicably very quickly. Even Sanchun would often go to the protagonist to play, but Lin Daiyu had to wait for Sanchun to come to the protagonist. The previously written scenes of growing up together were not included. 3. Same as the previous point, if the protagonist wants to tie up Daiyu, he also needs to make a plan to make Lin Daiyu recognize Jia Baoyu as a person. It can be seen that the protagonist is not confident in this aspect or the author does not understand love, or does he think Daiyu is a person who rides a donkey to find a horse? First of all, the protagonist is a disciple who has the title of civil servant and is raised by Lin Ruhai. In this era, the disciples are basically the same as father and son, and there are various secret forces cultivated. He is fully capable in the Jia family and does not need to be so aggrieved. What kind of trouble can these people in the Jia family make. I don't know how the author conceived it, but I personally didn't feel comfortable with it.

There is no poisonous point, the IQ is online, and the killing is decisive. It is obvious that he has a strong literary background. Driving high and driving low, I entered the Rongguo Mansion and started to lose my wits, and even bit the dog.

I entered the trap relatively late, and I also read the comments in the book along the way, which made me tremble. I was afraid that the author would be affected by those words and stop updating or revising. I haven't found a book of such high quality on Tomato for a long time. Don't stop updating. [Sending my heart] Author, I understand you, so you must persist [Blow a kiss] The author should stick to writing novels. I will definitely read the new book.

Just calm down and read it carefully, and be more patient. This Red Mansion fanfic is really worth reading (book friends can read Chapter 160). It's good that Tomato can see such a fanfic. It is on the same level as Next Door (Wan Tian Qing) (Hong Lou Chun), the characters are well created, and the characters of Baochai and his family in the original work are well restored. Don't Lick Xue Baochai (it doesn't matter if you are a concubine). His status and family background are not as good as those of Daiyu, but his family's ambitions are as high as the sky. (In order to keep the family business, the Xue family's dream of becoming a concubine is to retreat and seek the next best thing, clinging to Jia's family as a backer, calculating, and ostracizing. Businessmen are businessmen. There are countless Xue Baochai in reality, but Daiyu only exists in the Dream of Red Mansions) Daiyu is too miserable in the original work. Please let the author let Daiyu ride on Xue Baochai's head [Breaking Updates] [Breaking Updates] [Breaking Updates]

The world of mortals is noisy, but I am the Dream of Red Mansions. Wrapped in red makeup, it shows luxury, this is the moment in the world and in heaven. My heart is always at ease like floating clouds, smiling at the new things in the world. The top level of Red Mansions, no one can match it!

I believe that most of the readers who clicked on this book should be similar to me. As a fan of Red Mansions, I also know that many high-scoring books on Tomato are written by trolls, and the corresponding comments are also fake at first sight. Some even dare to say how good the plot design is, how detailed the characterization is, etc. After reading it for 30 minutes. But at around two o'clock in the morning this morning, I wrote a book review for the first time. I want to say that this book is indeed well written. So far, I have not found any poisonous points. The author is also very careful in writing and often conducts research. It can be seen that Red Mansion also has an understanding. The details in the article are reasonably described and will not make people feel abrupt. This book is indeed worth reading. I even feel that the writing and Tomato do not quite match. Even if I go to the starting point, it is still a rare and good article. I hope the author will continue to keep up the good work.

After reading the beginning, there were too many details and the plot was a bit slow. But I have to admit that the more I read, the more reluctant I am to give up because of the cost of silence. I originally wanted to see how the protagonist gets rid of his identity as a disaster victim and how he brings about changes in the world? Even if you are fighting for yourself, you should always have a goal. But you can't always see it. Moreover, the turning point was so sudden that it was understandable to block Lin Ruhai's path and build a relationship. This was considered a gamble and a risk. But I can't figure out why the other party wants to accept you as a disciple. Was it you who took the lead in poisoning the trafficker? Then naturally, without any investigation or testing, he directly regarded the protagonist as the heir to the mantle and the young master, and it was so heart-warming. And your reading skills are average. How do you maintain this love? The protagonist also treats others indifferently. Xiuzhu was indifferent when she died, and had nothing to do with the mistress when she died. She and Daiyu were ordinary in getting along. How about seeing her slip into her destined destiny, and then cherish her in the absurdity of the Jia family? This strong Mo Yan style relies on the invincibility of tragedy in the context of the times to write about the mental journey of the people in the game who are always hesitant about redemption. I can't appreciate it. Looking back, I still give it a five-point rating. Cheers, author.

It's been a long time since I've seen The Red Mansion with such good writing, and it has a touch of Cao Gong's style. The character growth is well-founded, the plot is reasonable and smooth, and the characters are deeply portrayed. Different from other fast-food Red Mansion articles on Tomato🍅, the plot is relatively slow but has ups and downs.

It's well written. In today's fast food culture, there are not many articles with slow pace and full plot and character creation. Five stars encourage me to continue reading below (Tomato readers are more violent. The author's book is more suitable for the starting point, so the score will be higher) Well written, very good