Knowing that he had to take risks to carry forward Huangmao's spirit in order to return to the original world, as a good person, Mikami Takagawa rejected this development setting without hesitation and decided to be a passerby.
But reality always runs counter to ideals, and all kinds of bad situations follow.
…………
"Xiaojun doesn't like the little devil, why don't you consider the Nian Shang system."
"If you have any questions, you can ask me for help. Takagawa-chan doesn't need to trouble others."
"No matter what Mikami-kun says, I will never give up."
"Common people, don't be too greedy and accept your fate as my servant."
…………
Mikami Takakawa felt bitter: Why are you so tired as a passerby? The boys from Asashi are over there. Don't go too far!
Reader comments
Although the plot is a bit old, the content and character descriptions are playable. Continuity is okay, no scene skips or stiff transitions so far. There's a little bit of poison in the middle, but it's harmless. There are so many descriptions that it's hard to doubt that it's not the character water! And no pictures [smile][smile]. Overall ok
The writing is good, the characters are well-drawn and the plot is not abrupt. But the biggest problem is "substitute literature". The male protagonist is the male protagonist. He has his own style and should not be a substitute for others.
It was well written and made me want to keep reading. I also became curious about how the protagonists deal with their emotions later on. It just feels like the protagonist is more like a way for the store manager and landlord to make up for their past sincere relationships, and it feels like the protagonist is more like a stand-in. It made me a little uncomfortable to watch [Thinking] For example, the store manager likes the protagonist because he feels like his boyfriend, and the landlord is the same, so when the protagonist carries her drunkenly, the landlord hopes that he will not run away like her previous boyfriend (rest assured that the protagonist and the landlord are not lovers, but the landlord simply regards him as her former boyfriend), but it is only Chapter 51, and the follow-up depends on how the author writes. So first give 5 stars to support the author
Don't treat the protagonist as a stand-in, everything else is fine
I really like the character of the male protagonist
What's nice is that I'm not driving
It suits my taste very well and the plot is very interesting.
The protagonist's decisive counterattack in the face of danger is very enjoyable to watch.
I'm looking forward to the turn after being stunned.
Update it soon
They will do anything [send heart]
Promise me, live on. Jpg✊
Looks good, doesn't it, bro?
Sigma men never fall into the trap of women [Like][Like][Like]
I'm looking forward to the next plot. Come on, author!
Why not update it? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]
Gold in the pit
Very good, but do you want to control points?
Not bad. Is there a book group?
Okay, what does arsonist mean?
No, those six are all the same.
Click in and see the first chapter under review [smile]
Although the plot is a bit old, the content and character descriptions are playable. Continuity is okay, no scene skips or stiff transitions so far. There's a little bit of poison in the middle, but it's harmless. There are so many descriptions that it's hard to doubt that it's not the character water! And no pictures [smile][smile]. Overall ok
The writing is good, the characters are well-drawn and the plot is not abrupt. But the biggest problem is "substitute literature". The male protagonist is the male protagonist. He has his own style and should not be a substitute for others.
It was well written and made me want to keep reading. I also became curious about how the protagonists deal with their emotions later on. It just feels like the protagonist is more like a way for the store manager and landlord to make up for their past sincere relationships, and it feels like the protagonist is more like a stand-in. It made me a little uncomfortable to watch [Thinking] For example, the store manager likes the protagonist because he feels like his boyfriend, and the landlord is the same, so when the protagonist carries her drunkenly, the landlord hopes that he will not run away like her previous boyfriend (rest assured that the protagonist and the landlord are not lovers, but the landlord simply regards him as her former boyfriend), but it is only Chapter 51, and the follow-up depends on how the author writes. So first give 5 stars to support the author
Don't treat the protagonist as a stand-in, everything else is fine
I really like the character of the male protagonist
What's nice is that I'm not driving
It suits my taste very well and the plot is very interesting. The protagonist's decisive counterattack in the face of danger is very enjoyable to watch. I'm looking forward to the turn after being stunned. Update it soon They will do anything [send heart]
Promise me, live on. Jpg✊
Looks good, doesn't it, bro?
Sigma men never fall into the trap of women [Like][Like][Like]
I'm looking forward to the next plot. Come on, author!
Why not update it? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]
Gold in the pit
Very good, but do you want to control points?
Not bad. Is there a book group?
Okay, what does arsonist mean?
No, those six are all the same.
Click in and see the first chapter under review [smile]
The writing is better than most Tomato books