Traveling to the World of Immortality, the Protagonist Turned Out to Be My Senior Brother

Let's give it 5 stars first. Don't be put off because of Gong's character just by reading the comments. Maybe you read the book too quickly and didn't understand the image the author created for Gong. The original description ① "arrogant and rude" is indeed arrogant and rude, but because he has the capital of arrogance, the background of this book is that the weak and the strong are the strongest in the world of immortality. Just like reality, geniuses often do not look at mediocrity, so this character creation is very reasonable and well-founded ② Domineering Arrogance, this is the evaluation given by Senior Sister Chen. She also added, "I am a good friend of his family, so I can barely be considered his friend." The author's description of Gong in the article vividly reflects this word. Gong's attribute is Long Aotian, and Long Aotian's most prominent attribute is domineering. Although some protagonists are rarely arrogant, Gong should be regarded as having a smooth journey to immortality and has not suffered many setbacks. Arrogance is normal. ③ (My own feeling) The image of going his own way and being independent. Gong's character is indeed very different from the typical Long Aotian. This is also the cute point of this pair of cps "Yummy" ④ Regarding the target of Gong's ridicule, "please see clearly" who is he mocking? "✘✘✘Sword skills are nothing more than this" This sentence is obviously mocking the protagonist for not practicing well. Gong is arrogant and rude, but he is not deaf. If it were mocking the protagonist's master, the protagonist would not have to practice the sword for a long time. ⑤Gong's shortcomings are that he is not good at dealing with the world. Geniuses who cultivate immortals grow from childhood to adulthood, [not in the human world]. So I want to talk about the importance of worldview. When can we get rid of bringing novels into reality? So what's the point of reading novels? ? Moreover, there is nothing wrong with Gong's character [in their world]. He is also responsible for rating the selected disciples. If there is no distinction between good and bad, what will happen to the Sword Sect? Later, he dragged Shou into a secret realm two realms larger than him, to cultivate immortality and go against the will of heaven. If Shou went in, wouldn't he be looking for treasures? Doesn't attack provide opportunities? Anyway, the attack is wrong, but the benefits are gained. The two cancel each other out, so why do you care if it doesn't matter to the two of you? The two protagonists are not inexplicably together. Regarding cp, I have read a little bit so far. Gong may like to touch the protagonist's head. I added a bookmark without mentioning it. Anyway, the secret poke is delicious.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. My real junior brother, from the very beginning, his personality was very bland and he didn't care about anything. Later, he felt that he had changed a lot and was very vivid. Qianshan was still the same arrogant person who made me laugh to death. Later on, she was gentle to her junior brother and others still looked down on her. She was so energetic, and this book is very upright. For example, I thought that Qianshan's cultivation would be looked down upon by his family members if he was damaged. But it turned out that not everyone was so upright. The women in it were also very good. Oh my god, they were so upright. There is no sect entanglement between sect disciples. My mother is too upright. This is the right kind of family. [KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]

Nice looking, cookie. The two of them didn't have many misunderstandings. Gong was more arrogant at first, and then became a bit venomous. Shou's personality is relatively bland. Later, after the two people discovered their feelings, they confessed in a normal process. Then Shou is wearing a book. Some people will mind that he uses other people's bodies, but in this book it is a voluntary donation. Shou fulfilled the original wish. Both attack and brain are online.

I have finished reading it. The overall story line is not too complicated. It basically focuses on upgrading and playing dungeons to find treasures. The writing on the front of the love line is very cryptic. If you don't pay attention, it will be easy to forget. When you look at the back, you will feel that the love line is inexplicably fast forward. In fact, I have done some auxiliary pads in the front.

It's good to watch, but the emotional and plot lines are like a roller coaster, speeding by. You can write a little thinner and a slower emotional line. You can see the foreshadowing and other characters written by the author. It feels like the foreshadowing hasn't had time to unfold yet, and there could be more group scenes, and the characters are very likable. What about extras? The matter has not been fully explained yet, what is the follow-up plan? Father type·Unforgiving words·Possessiveness·The protagonist in the book is aggressive I really like the character design. The more slowly you attack, the more jealous you are, the better is to love without knowing. Shou didn't know if Gong liked him at first and thought he was his younger brother. In the end, the truth was discovered, but because of scheming, he chose to train Gong. [Laughing] There is no desire to guide the author in his writing. The author writes very well. This is just my xp. [Love][love]

It's okay, but Boss Yu is too arrogant. Because he's so arrogant, it's hard to tell that he likes Xiao Feng from the front. Only later when Xiao Feng took the initiative to kiss him did he feel that sweet feeling! The previous emotional scenes could have been made more obvious.

The emotional line flows very smoothly, and the plot concept is actually okay. It will definitely be more complete if it continues, for example, the foreshadowing of the previous Samsara Cauldron can be used. However, the author made a few typos.

The overall story is pretty good, the reading is smooth, and the events are well connected. The relationship aspect is a little slow, and they were confirmed to be Taoist couples only after Chapter 100. But I like to see this kind of relationship that flows slowly, and the young lovers are so pure. The only drawback is that it ended without filling in a hole, so I give it four stars.

Everything that I can finish reading will be given five stars⭐

Good-looking🤩Feng Qichi went from not wanting to meet the protagonist to falling in love with each other. Yu Qianshan found it interesting at first, then appreciated and fell in love with each other. The process was very good, I like it very much👍

This book is okay to read as a whole, the emotional changes are not abrupt, the story line is relatively complete, the logic is clear, most of the characters are portrayed in a three-dimensional way, and any foreshadowing will be covered later. Recommended

[Send heart] Personal feeling, so happy

The emotional line between Qi Chi and his senior brother is like a long and thin stream, and love grows over time. , Pretty good.

It's good-looking. Xiao Chichi has grown up very quickly under the training of Yu Qianshan, and he deserves to be the protagonist.

There are also plots about Ding Gaoyi and his master that have not been filled in, and there is also the story about the Demon Lord.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I really like the protagonist's light character He is also very smart and knows clearly what he wants and will not be disturbed by people or things around him.

There's a lot of foreshadowing left unfilled, it's a sweet story, and there's no plot about high blood pressure. You can read it when you have time.

It's so pretty, it's so pretty😘😘😘😘😘[Learned][Learned][Learned]

This book doesn't have the public hesitation. It's so comfortable to read, and I really like the character of the protagonist.

Plan to watch it tonight! I think it looks good now! Great writing! Recommend!

It's super beautiful, the author's descriptions are very detailed, and the plot is fascinating. Very nice to look at. Stay up late and read the entire book! [Crying][Crying] (Don't imitate me)

It's nice, short, and quite nice."

It's so beautiful that I'm at a loss for words [Petrochemical]

It's okay. It's pretty.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's beautiful. Flowers of the Kaolin are super cool.

I've read all the good reviews!

Very nice! It's just a little short!

A bit to my liking