Wait, I'm an NPC?!!

Overall evaluation: A passable and bland group portrait(?) Article. This NPC article gave me a sense of life, using daily life to unfold the main line - maybe it's Yaoyuan's life experience? And the relationship between the game world and reality. After seeing these few words, I believe the author definitely has some ideas, and I look forward to it. In terms of writing—— Although the writing style is a little less polished than that of experienced authors, the shortcomings do not hide the flaws. What can be improved is mainly in the characterization and connection of the characters. Maybe it is not vivid enough? I just personally think that more small details and movements can be added, or the surrounding environment can be used to highlight it. In short, the interaction between the characters is a bit unnatural - I can't say that, it should be a little dull, and there is also the transformation between perspectives, which is a major difficulty in group portrait writing - I am also troubled by this, so I won't make any unreasonable comments, but I believe that the author can accumulate experience and do better. Of course, there is another way to ignore these minor problems, and that is to update more often! (U‿ฺu✿)

Multi-faceted narrative, everyone has their own story, which is the biggest feature of this book The language is fluent and the plot is compact. It's not a brainless novel. The plot is also very interesting. It's the best NPC online game I've ever seen. Some of the battle scenes are vividly described by the author, and the command skills are not mysterious. Moreover, some of the characters are very well written. If it were a normal article, a passerby would have just mentioned it in one stroke. The traffic volume is relatively low, I hope it will be recommended soon👍

Wow wow wow, I found a good-looking book [laugh][laugh][laugh], it is clearly organized, not brainless, and has depth. The author must update it carefully [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Come on, the plot is not bad so far [eating melon]

It looks good, but the output is very small. [Cover face]

Just v vvvv several weird and weird places

It smells like AI, but it doesn't matter. There is something. I gave you a five-star review, please update it quickly.

It's really beautiful, I like it very much, but it's too short [crying]

It's a pity, overall it's OK, no toxic content