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Title of the book: I am a son in the Baituan, and the white beard I licked makes my butt hurt.

What a redundant novel, and he will delete low-star comments

Where do you get all the orders? Let's show you the way and make money together [cover your face][cover your face][cover your face]

Not to mention, it is quite interesting. At first I saw that the protagonist married Huaidibei and I felt that it was not interesting. I felt that it was written by someone else. But I still insisted on watching it for a while, and then I stayed up all night to finish it [laughing and crying]. The more I read, the more I became addicted. To be honest, this novel is not as enjoyable as other novels of the same type, and it feels like a normal anime. Some are only curious, not boring (because it can be skipped). Anyway, after reading it, I feel that the only poisonous point is marrying Huaidibei. But now I think this may be a turning point in the novel. First, the identity of the protagonist is established, the first partner, and then "confession" to Whitebeard about the future, which can help him change. Whitebeard does not realize the seriousness and refuses, and then the protagonist - retires (marries Huaidibei), and Baibeard The beard agreed, that is, "on the top", and then the protagonist appeared and showed his strength - no longer low-key (although the battle did not take place on the top in the novel, but what is interesting is that it is very silky, which is really interesting. The author's skills are really good, changing the location of the battlefield Fang can still retain the intensity of the battle, which is still very enjoyable to watch), and the protagonist basically appears in the whole text, but he does not interfere too much with the original plot. While not interfering too much with the original work, it can be integrated with the plot written directly by the author without being obtrusive. Compared with other pirate novels, this book gave me the feeling that it is like a small bridge and flowing water, without the rough waves of the sea or the rapid excitement of the river, but it has its own characteristics and "flavor", which is interesting to read and has a smooth flow. Not "noisy".

This book is a re-creation of the original plot, which I personally think is pretty good. Although there are some places where the logic doesn't match up, it doesn't matter. However, there aren't many scenes for the protagonist's wife in the later period. I still hope that the protagonist's wife has more scenes, and it can be slightly strengthened. In addition, I really can't understand what the use of having an extra daughter is. I hope the author can explain it to me. Although the existence of the system makes this book a bit flawed, after all, the system text is too popular. I personally prefer to slowly improve my strength by myself, but the sign-in rewards for the next ten years are still exciting. Overall, this book is still very good. Although the writing is average, the plot can be said to be excellent, and it is still worth reading.

To be honest, it's pretty good-looking. After the main plot begins, there is an invincible novel with a single female protagonist. The writing is good at the beginning, but maybe because I can't break it off, I deliberately rush the progress. The previous page was ten years ago, and the child on the next page is ten years old. But after Ace went to sea, he returned to normal. But the part about Blackbeard was deliberately left out because he was afraid that the main plot would not be written after he was killed. Overall, I feel it's not toxic, and I don't know why the rating is low. Conclusion: Don't worry about fanfics... Although the early progress is slightly faster, it does not affect reading.

If this is not a trap, it will be intolerable for you! It would be a pity not to read such a good book

I have been obsessed with Hai for six years. I always thought my dad's name was Newgate. The first time I discovered it was Newgate, my God, how did I know? I used to do it in New York City. It's called New York City.

The setting of the story is really good, mainly about the changes in the world caused by climate change. The empty island turned out to be created by Pluto, and Uranus turned out to be the cause of rising sea levels and huge climate changes. There is also the whimsical idea of ​​replicating the Nika Fruit, resulting in the appearance of an unnamed fruit. I have always been curious about the characters and animals in the pirate world, or the Neptune class, which are full of explosive physiques and vitality. What would happen if the Neptune class was used to fight the Gothic Reincarnation with the Five Old Stars? The important thing is that the real use of the Neptune Reincarnation was once used by Madara, a suicidal style of fighting. According to this novel, Wu Laoxing may not be afraid of death, but Mu will make it miserable.

A very classic Pirates fanfic. The main character's IQ is online. The main character's strength is relatively poor in the first 30 chapters. It's a bit frustrating to read. After Ace was caught, Ace gets better and better. I, an old bookworm, can't stop reading. I watched it at 4:30 in the morning. Author, please update! Not enough [adoration][adoration][adoration]

How to say it? I've also watched a lot of One Piece fanfics. But as for the description of the content setting and the overall view of the entire pirate world, I think it may be the best one. Although the ending is a bit quick, the analysis of the entire plot is very complete, but the content could actually be more detailed. After listening to this book. It feels like a dream. But it does not affect my evaluation of this book. I think this book is a very good one.

It's really good, I can read the latest chapters in one go. Although it is different from other pirate novels, and the pig's feet are a bit soft, overall the writing is okay and not too stiff. When everyone knows that you want to follow the plot, you can write something else. It's quite interesting, at least I watched it

Very nice It's been a long time since I've seen a written Pirates fanfic. But it was really hard for my son to write this Otherwise, the rating will definitely start at 8

I have seen 11 of them so far, and I think they are quite interesting. The protagonist is similar to a male mother on the white group, and the rewards for signing in are not like other novels. They are all about the power of the domineering fruit, and they are just an ordinary gold coin.

A very, very, very, very good book, very, very, very, very good, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very good, very, very, very, very, very, very good, very, very, very, very, very good, very, very, very, very good to read! , If you see it now, the above is all nonsense!

It's good-looking, the protagonist is not lustful, calm, and doesn't have a harem [like]

Well, although Blackbeard was not killed, it is understandable, otherwise there will be a big problem in the subsequent plot advancement. I think this is no problem, and then I suddenly forgot the name of the heroine who was injured on the ship, which is really good. Although there are not many emotional scenes, she is generally written with a high favorability. In terms of combat power, she can be said to be above the emperor level. This is good. Otherwise, how can she reverse the situation at the level of a general in a war zone?

Full marks Not dragging, The advantage is that it is consistently strong and can be read through. Some pirate novels are unreadable. The disadvantage is that sometimes the dialogue can be complicated You might not be able to stand it at the beginning I'll read Chapter 10 and the more I read, the more I'll like it [laughs] Very cool For the first time, I read a pirate fanfic [][][][KISS][KISS][KISS]

Originally, as an author whose performance is not as good as Peng Jie, I generally would not leave a book review, but I cannot bear to have such a good author lose some readers because of a small flaw. I read eighty chapters in one go. The author's writing is very good, especially with so many smooth dialogues and a compact plot. In particular, the smoothness of dialogue has been a problem that has troubled me for a long time. But as I said before, it is actually good in all aspects. The reason why I only gave it four stars is because the author's constant presence of "Tao" in the dialogue affected the reading experience. If it can be solved and the plot is not interesting in the later stage, this work will not be given five stars. The above are all just suggestions and have absolutely no other meaning. If the author doesn't like it, please delete my comment.

The idea is good, but the writing style is not good enough and it doesn't look so good when written.

Well, you can watch it when you are bored (don't watch it with your brain)

It's been a long time since I've finished reading a One Piece fan novel. This one is so well written. I read half of many novels and then stopped reading them because the latter parts are not good. This one is different. I can only say that the more I read, the better it gets. It's awesome!

It's not bad. I spent two days reading this book. Overall, I felt it was good, but I was amazed at the end. Really, the author of the original novel stole it from the outline and wrote it. It's very good. No drama.

For people who have never watched One Piece, they will be really confused when they see the later stages! There may be setting explanations in many places in the anime, but I don't understand them at all! I finally understood it after reading it! It's a very good book, five stars for you...

The imagination, reasonable conception and the interweaving of jf's thoughts complete a complete One Piece. The final chapter makes people's hearts surging and proud. It is the best One Piece I have ever seen, hahaha. I hope Oda can surpass the author, don't let me down [laughs]

It's very rhythmic, unlike other pirates. This series of fast-paced invincible streams can be considered an invincible stream, but unlike other invincible streams, updates are relatively slow. Come on, author

I do not understand! Why is this book rated so low? To be honest, I have read no less than thirty pirate fanfics, including Ron, Feeding Nika to Eat Lava Akainu, The Strongest Lieutenant General, Os, the Remnant of the Old Era, Atlas with 12 Spells, Asking Sachi for the Dark Fruit at the Beginning, Loyalty is Great, Grabbing the Frequency Barrier Fruit at the Beginning, I am the Great Swordsman, and No One He knows better than me the color of the Overlord, Smoke Fruit Rit, I fucked until the heavens fell apart, and the three navy generals and I were sworn brothers... There are too many. The first few books I mentioned are pretty good. The ratings of the first few books are quite high, all above 9.0, But this one is only 7.8. I don't understand! In my opinion, this book is on the same level as the one about Akainu, and the ending of this one is better, that is, the ending of the protagonist is disappointing (helping the world move towards peace, but has to leave this world, leaving nothing behind except his wife and two children). This book is very good about the origin and setting of Im, as well as the history of 1500 years. The origin and setting of Devil Fruit, as well as Eve and Nika, these settings are better than all the doujins I have read (Oda II). I read it in one go. I will not be able to summarize more details until I read it a second time. I will make a comment then. Overall, I can give this book 9.4 Points. I am not trusting you. You will know by looking at the length of time. In short, I highly recommend this book! ! ! Don't get hung up on the system. This system has no sense of existence. Just be the protagonist and gain strength.

I came in based on the title and have read dozens of chapters. I feel good so far. This is a brand new angle. The protagonist can be said to be a mortal (Blue Star Man) in the early stage. However, because he was the first to join the white group and the author's handling, although the early stage was weak, everyone participated. The 30-year period has arrived... I hope the author will not forget his title. In addition, 7.6 Points, I think this book is not the rating it deserves, at least 8.5 Or above

It's suitable to be read in one sitting. I don't recommend following up on it [face covering]

It's a great book. Although the ending is cruel, it doesn't stop it from being a good book. The writing is a bit messy in the middle and later stages, but it doesn't affect viewing.