Cultivation of Immortality: the Female Supporting Character Just Wants to Ascend Quickly

It's very exciting. Both the characterization and the plot are perfect. However, I personally think that the previous writing is very good. It is concise and not procrastinating. After Ascension, it is a bit evasive and light. Especially the part about going to the demon world and absorbing the bad system is a bit too much. And the ending is a bit less than perfect in comparison. It's easy to look forward to the end of everything, thinking that I can live a free and unrestrained life! In the end, there was a sentence that the war belonging to them will be even more cruel... Hahaha, what a good novel, I would rather let the ending sentence make people feel depressed, so I removed one star.

I'll give it four points. It's too urgent. This may be the author's first time writing a novel. Many places are very casual and repetitive. Because it's very urgent, many of the later chapters are just one or two sentences. Come on, author, write more and better articles.

It's very interesting, a wonderful story. The story of the male and female protagonists is not finished yet. The story of the heroine's children is incomplete

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Not bad, the heroine is pretty good, but the story of the children is incomplete.

Very beautiful, come on, you are the best

It's not bad, but I feel like it's not finished yet. [Like][Like][Like]

This system is really good. Unlike other systems where you have to complete tasks. Punish if you don't do the task. It's very nice, the system and the heroine are very good.

Nice! Come on, author! !