Zhan Shen: Create a Zanpakutō for Zhao Kongcheng with One Punch

So far, the whole thing is quite warm, funny and lively. I personally hope that Qiye and Baiyu will continue to have a brotherly relationship without a female protagonist. If there is a female protagonist, it will feel different (personal opinion 🤔)

Absolute five stars. I'm really surprised that the quality of the Zhanshen fanfics I've found in the past day or two is so high. But among these articles, this one definitely ranks at the top of the list. First of all, the protagonist is invincible from the very beginning. But what really surprised me was that although it was an invincible novel, it was not brainless. How should I put it, the main theme is either pretentious from beginning to end. On the contrary, although there is pretentious content, the theme and writing style are humorous and relaxed. The so-called pretentiousness is actually the finishing touch, not pretentiousness for the sake of pretense (I really can't stand the kind of pretentious and slap-in-the-face articles written by male authors at first glance) (I don't mean to say anything bad about male authors. I also have many favorite articles written by male authors, but sometimes some writing styles and writing methods can really make people tell at a glance that they are written by male authors, and it feels like the difference between jj and qidian). Although it is an invincible novel, the plot and emotional lines are surprisingly well written, especially the emotional lines. What I'm talking about here is not just love, male and female, or male and female, but the interaction between the protagonists is very interesting, touching and engaging. I think the deepest impression this article has given me so far is the reliability of the protagonist, which prevents Qiye from facing death so early like the original article. I like Qiye very much, and Qiye seems more childlike in this article, but it is not childish, it is energetic in a good direction. There are quarrels with the protagonist, making jokes together, and making fun of each other. I really like this kind of friendship, they trust each other, it doesn't matter if it's love or not (although I do like Danmei very much), but it doesn't stop me from living and dying. At first it was really hard to imagine the main character without hair, and I was super hesitant to watch it. But suddenly I remembered Wu Xin, a young man in the sex industry, who was also bald but very good-looking. I immediately convinced myself, what's wrong with being bald? He's also handsome with a bald head! ! ! Especially the character of the protagonist in this article is really lovable, I personally really like it anyway. Later, I felt that the title bald had become a joke that could be spoken outright, a friendly one, and one that did not need to be avoided. Overall, I really think it's worth reading. The writing feels like it was written by a female author. Although the copywriting didn't directly state that it was a double male protagonist, it did say that it was full of passion and you could clap casually, haha. I'm really excited! ! ! ! ! Sukisukisuki! ! ! !

It's a very interesting fan novel that I quite like, but even though the author said it's a bit too gay, I will definitely not add this book to my bookshelf. It's beautiful. It's really beautiful. As for why it's not added to the bookshelf, it's because once I add it to the bookshelf, I will forget that I still have such a book. This book is funny, sometimes touching, and sometimes funny, but if you are invincible, then you are truly invincible [Adoration]

There is a saying that it looks good, and it does look good! But it just feels a little bit full of homosexuality. This is the only thing that makes my scalp tingle. Why can't Lin Qiye be considered a woman? Maybe the author doesn't know how to write it in this case, and I don't care about Little Lan Niang! I don't care if Lin Qiye turns into a little Lan Niang, I want to see it! But one thing to say is that a lot of regrets have indeed been made up for, which is something worthy of praise. I don't care about the rationality and the original work, as long as the author can make his heart happy. To be honest, the original work is indeed a knife. I didn't read the original work at all, but I have read a lot of knife things. This one is dead, that one is dead, basically ugh! I like this, I like this 119 photos, it's really awesome

It's very confusing, but not over the top. This book mainly tells the story of a time traveler who possesses the system and has the ability to draw a superhuman punch. He is invincible in the world of killing gods. It is generally relaxed. The author's writing style is acceptable, and his madness is moderate. He can go crazy without harming the overall situation, and solves most of his regrets. The reading experience is good. The author sometimes writes jokes that even a seasoned comedian like me wouldn't have expected. At the same time, the visual sense is top-notch among Western comics. In my opinion, this book is much better than other Zhanshen fics with a rating of 9 or above. At the same time, he raised questions about his soul, when will the protagonist improve his spiritual realm? I don't feel safe in the pool realm. [Sinister smile]

It looks good. I saw over 100 pictures without a female protagonist, but with a male protagonist [laughing evilly]. The rating was so low that I thought it wasn't good. I read it when I was short on books. It was so wonderful.

The plot is good, not too poisonous, and the fun is interesting, but don't really include a gay story [face covering]. Five updates a day is pretty delicious too

It's super good-looking, very interesting, and not toxic at all. I think that although there is a slight adaptation of the plot, what if I adapted it as a fanfic to make up for the regrets?

I like this kind of subject very much, and I hope the author will continue to update it.

There are very few humorous and light-hearted slayers. They are better than those whose introductions say that they are refreshing and make up for regrets. In fact, the soup is changed without changing the medicine. It cannot be changed around the original work. Come on, author, you are very good.

It looks good. I hope Baiyu and Qiye can be together and have a good time.

No, bro, you are a bit short now. I haven't heard enough yet, so I'm done with it. Update soon! ! ! ! ! ! Keep up this momentum, I like it so much, hahaha, [asking for more explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] [asking for explosive updates] ][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][ Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates Explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] Explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates Updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates ][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

It's quite interesting, and it's easy to get along with Lin Qiye. The author is very talented! [Shy][shy][shy]ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃelegant

The author writes very well, the writing style is very good, the plot is also very good, and the character creation is also very good, especially Zhao Kongcheng's MVP settlement screen, it just made me laugh to death. I hope the author can work harder and finish this book. Never stop updating

Very beautiful (♥∀♥), it would be great if the final CP is Lin Qiye [Adoration]

It's very beautiful, the content is very novel, the ideas are quite strange, and it's also very funny. It's an adaptation of the original version. It's not written according to the original work. It's very worth watching [Adoration] [Adoration] [Eating Melon]

... Full of love The protagonist and Lin Qiye change their gender and become each other Can see... Cangnan God War was not fun to watch. It was a lot of fun, but it was not fun enough. It was like a roller coaster that stopped when it was about to reach its highest point. It was so congested and uncomfortable to watch. It just doesn't feel that pleasant. The main character is very important, he can defeat all kinds of magic with his single strength, which is very good and I like it very much. It's just that the fun is too intensive

Yes, the quality is high in Tomato. I would like to call you the God of Fun, and let Aha give you a seat. When I first read it, I thought there was a female protagonist. I personally hope that there will be a female protagonist, and it will be fine in the later stages.

Except for being a bit slow, everything else looks good, but those who like Ba Boss Qi Ye should not come here. This is Lin's wife Ye Xiao's charming wife, who later pursued the bald head, but her sexual orientation is normal. She likes Yu Jie after the bald head's transformation, and then Jialan has no pressure to think about snatching Qi Ye back from the bald head every day, and Ba Boss's fat dog food daily

Well, good. Very cool, love watching it. Overall it looks good. I love it, it often makes me laugh. But if you can't accept it being full of homosexuality, just don't read it, so as not to disgust yourself. By the way, can Lin Ziya and Bai Yu be together? Yes, I quite like it [laughs evilly]

The ideas are quite clear, and the content is also very funny. The most important thing is that there are several chapters a day.

It's interesting. Although the writing style is straightforward, it is more meaningful. Compared with the brainless Long Ao Tianwen or Shuangwen, the literary drama is also very good.

So far it looks very good! It's funny and heartwarming, and it really changes the meaning of the original book. Not only the main characters are saved, but some ordinary people they meet are also saved! However, it's easy to knock on CP. It would be better if you don't make it true! I also hope that the CP of the original book will not be included! That would be even more uncomfortable than writing the protagonist as CP! ! !

I feel this is the best book after Xiaobai and Uncle Wolf

I sincerely suggest you not to write in such a cute way. I have a toothache recently. I suck while laughing and it makes me drool. [Laughter and tears] [Laughter and tears] [Laughter and tears] [Laughter and tears] [Laughter and tears]

A very good novel, it made me obsessed with Baiye CP!

The plot is quite interesting, especially the plot where the protagonist returns to Lin's wife in cross-dressing at night [laughing] [Please update]

Good looking author! But cp is really a mystery.

Very interesting and full of passion! ! ! It's beautiful and I love watching it. I hope there will be more scenes of Mrs. Lin's night [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

It's a very good book. The regrets and knives of the original work are gone, and it has become a funny and happy fan novel. It's quite good. Although the jokes are a bit rotten, the faults are not hidden and it deserves five stars. The author is not a eunuch.