Hphufflepuff's Legendary Senior Sister

Style: It's very comfortable, and it's rare to see a HP fan who doesn't frown the whole time. First of all, there are many excellent female supporting characters, and I can feel that the author consciously created them. Since HP's book itself has a majority of high-profile male characters, it's really good to be able to work hard to discover and create original female characters. Secondly, it is rare for the heroine not to pretend, and the overall style is still in the magical world. Recently, I have been reading several HP fanfictions in a row and all the words are like "Dumbledore is playing a big game, and my gifted protagonist sees through it sharply" and "The wizarding world is so backward and decadent that no one feels the external threat"... From my personal experience, Harry Potter 123 is a fairy tale written purely for children. Everything paves the way for plots that interest children from a child's perspective. It is normal to have exaggerated and unreasonable parts; 4567 has the ambition to target a wider group of people, but the scope of the entire story frame and background construction has not been expanded, and it is still confined to Hogwarts and the British wizarding world. Some fan protagonists directly use this perspective to reduce the dimensionality and attack with originality, which can only be said to be very inconsistent [laughing awkwardly] Finally, there is no such thing as Snape's dream girl being highly praised, not to mention that the heroine loves Lily the most, so yay! The world has been suffering from Snape's dream girl for a long time! It can make me transform from a little girl who was originally very sad about Snape's death to an abandoned scholar whose heart skips a beat when I see the Slytherin heroine. You all don't know... No, you should all know what I have gone through. (There is a Hufflepuff book that I like very much. The heroine actually has the same father-daughter relationship with Snape. Later, it was described that Snape became like this because of the predators and bullying. There was nothing wrong with him, and it was not him who caused Lily. The phenomenon of human-to-human transmission of brainwashing kits has spread to Hufflepuff😇) Plot: This area needs to be strengthened, which is why I gave it four stars. First of all, the plot in Tomato is pretty good ~ I have defeated most people! But there are still some small problems, you can refer to them. In terms of wording and paragraph structure, it is sometimes a bit off-kilter. Especially in the first few chapters, the author will omit some descriptions that he knows the idea of, but the readers will not understand well if he does not write them out. After all, online novels are not literary works. They focus on being straightforward, bright, and easy to read. If you still have to think about the meaning of the paragraph, it will affect the immersive reading experience. It was improved later, but problems like this still occur occasionally. In terms of the compactness of the plot and the fluctuation of the plot, it is a bit too ordinary and everyday. The author can write interesting plots, and the writing style can also support dramatic plots, such as saving Lily, fighting in the secret room, and practicing magic in Nurmengard. But they were short-lived and soon returned to ordinary daily life. For online novels, the plot that attracts readers is very important. Let's just say that the updates so far are more like popular science and travelogue style than the previous two chapters, which are not as attractive as the return to the magical world in the latest two chapters. In short, based on the style of this article, it is a pity not to write a plot that makes people want to put it down. For the sake of a better novel, I hope the author will work harder (x

This is one of the most detailed Harry Potter novels I have ever read. Just like the title of the book says, the protagonist is a student of Hufflepuff House, but it is not the parent generation, nor the child generation, but the 7 years in between. He is Lily's school sister, and Harry Potter's school sister and professor. I really like the character of the protagonist, a bit big and rough, but not lacking in delicacy and super cute! There are some spoilers below, please read with caution~~~~~~~~~~ The protagonist travels through time, but there is no golden finger. Unlike traditional system novels, the system in this book has always had a strong emotional bond with the protagonist's mother. The biggest difference between the protagonist himself is that he is liked by animals and is good at the languages ​​of various animals, but there is not much space in the article. The protagonist also has no memory of the plot. The Harry Potter plot mainly flashes in formats based on the tasks given by the system. In the later stage, there are no tasks anymore. My favorite part of the whole story is when the protagonist just graduated. An account of traveling the world in pursuit of becoming a magizoologist. The writing is very serious, without any skipping or one sentence, but it is very serious about dealing with every magical animal in every country. It is super touching. This is the first time I have seen so many descriptions of magical animals in Harry Potter fans. This is also the biggest difference between this book and other Harry novels. There are no spoilers below, feel free to refer to it~~~~~~~~~~~ There is no CP in the whole text, and it does not fall into the traditional sense of being a fan. From the perspective of the protagonist, you will not feel that the protagonist is very popular and powerful, but from other people's experiences and feelings, you can see that the protagonist has really changed a lot. This is one of the reasons why I like this book very much. I really like it, everyone is welcome to eat [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

I have read this book in its entirety and there is no OOC. The protagonist is not Long Aotian Hou Gong Shuang Wen. The only one injured in the whole story is Voldemort hahahaha. The heroine is a hard-working, diligent, cute, smart, and beautiful girl. The description of the background and past life is detailed and simple, and will not steal the spotlight, nor is it used to make the story miserable. It revolves around the protagonist, who is neither the parent generation nor the descendant generation, but it turns out! It makes people feel so immersed in watching it. The description is very delicate, sweeping away everyone's stereotypes about Hufflepuff. Especially the description of the heroine's hard work during the exam, and the description of Quidditch. It's normal to succeed and fail. Especially picturesque. This is the only one that makes my nose sore when I see Harry. There is no deliberate comparison with the original work, and there is no writing of a terrible dream. It's just a happy and joyful daily life that makes people feel wonderful. What I really like is the heroine's affirmation of herself and her calm acceptance of praise from people around her, turning it into something that makes her love life even more. I really came to life from the book. As I write, I want to continue reading it and will review it when it is finished.

I really like this writing style. It focuses on daily life, but the writing style is very good and doesn't feel like a rundown. The plot is light-hearted and pleasant, and the language style is lightly humorous. Although it should be considered a heroine-driven novel, every supporting role is outstanding. The article does not describe the "empty" heartthrob halo, but you can feel the heroine's personal charm between the lines of the author's words, and you will really fall in love with this beautiful human being unconsciously - imagine an outgoing, funny, cute, omnipotent, hard-working and self-improving, almost an all-round version of Newt [OK] except that she is really an emotional block [face covering] The main line is the career line/personal development of the heroine, and the Horcrux line is just a very small branch line. It is rare to see the heroine of Badger Academy who is really focusing on developing her beloved personal career. Moreover, from the main line, I can feel that the author has sufficient knowledge reserves and researched information. I personally think it is the most detailed setting among the HP fics I have seen so far, and the original plot is both novel and restored to the original work [Like] The only thing I feel a little regretful about is the opening chapter. At first glance, I feel that the heroine Goldfinger is a bit inexplicable and too strong to be buggy. It is still a Veela setting. If I don't like watching Pure Mary Sue, I almost quit [laughing and crying] Fortunately, I persisted and read two more chapters. I didn't miss a good article. I added it to my reading list [OK]

It feels like a very good book www But let me correct the author: Otome-oriented is not female-oriented/heartthrob all-oriented! There is no mention of "Micro Otome" in the introduction. Otome means that you can experience the story on behalf of the heroine (that is, the heroine = reader, the heroine has no independent personality). This book belongs to the original heroine, and the heroine has an independent personality instead of a leather cover. Either there's a female protagonist or it's an Otome character I suggest you remove the "Micro Otome" in the introduction, because there are times when I see an Otome and think that I can substitute her, so I just assume the role of the heroine ()

Super comfortable article! ! ! ! ! ! But why is the score so low? When I first looked at the score, I thought there was something wrong with it, so I gave it a high score in the hope that the score would be higher! . But one thing is that I feel that Sirius's emotional line is a bit abrupt. I felt that in the early stage, he felt like an elder, but later on, he suddenly fell in love with him, and considering the age difference, it was a bit like falling in love with him (ahhhhhh, although the average age of people in the magic world is very long, this can be ignored, but it is also too weird Aaaa)

The heroine is very charming, and the relationship line with the system mother is also very touching. What's even more rare is that after reading so many HP fics, there is finally a protagonist who is a fan of magical animals! Everyone survived, the plot was changed beautifully, and Bill's secret love line was delicious. The girls in the book are all so good, and they all have their own achievements in the extra chapters. It's a very good group portrait. The first part is about the protagonist studying at Hogwarts, the middle part is about graduating and traveling around the world to see various customs, customs and magical animals, and the last part is about collecting expired plans to kill Voldemort. The plot is well arranged and kept me entertained until I finished reading it in one day.

This book is very good! Time travel, system, heroine, extra 1v1 without cp in the main text, fan fiction, easy transition to parent generation and child generation, happy ending. Some of the settings are novel, the writing is good, the plot is coherent, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. The heroine is lively and cheerful, naughty and cute, beautiful and kind, smart and clever, highly approachable, humble and studious, calm and decisive, and powerful. In this book, the male characters show shocking power with their courage, perseverance and wisdom. The female characters are equally radiant. They are either gentle and intelligent, resolving crises with delicate thoughts; some are brave and fearless, shining brightly in difficult situations; some are talented, outlining everything in the world with delicate brushstrokes; Every choice they make and every step they take makes the brilliance of life shine between the lines. Great, keep up the good work^O^~ "Extraordinary wisdom is mankind's greatest wealth." "Love is mankind's greatest magic."

Well, it's a very novel setting, but the pace may be a little faster (than normal HP fans). Weiwei is really cute. I saw Graduation. There is no poisonous point at the moment (I think), but there are very few love lines and there will be a little bit later, but I like this [blowing kiss]

Why is this score so low? This is a great read. Everyone becomes a better version of themselves. I think Ivy is worth it. Everyone has their own growth line. And the most ingenious thing is that the era Ivy lives in is a link between the past and the future. He strung all the so-called parent and descendant generations onto a sugar-coated haws. The entire worldview extends far beyond the fragments mentioned in the book. If I am to be picky, I think this article is too short. Not enough to watch at all. My heart felt soft when I saw it. Ivy's life is very fulfilling, rich and wonderful. For this article, I think it is not particularly important whether there is CP or not. Everyone lives happily in their own life trajectory. Harry is no longer the poor orphan. He has many possibilities. So does Lily. I think Lily was a particularly good witch in the original work. She deserves to have a richer and more exciting life. After graduating, Ivy traveled almost around the world while collecting information on magical animals. After collecting this information, I received another exciting offer. He just returned to Hogwarts to teach, and he happened to be teaching Harry and his generation. At this time he was only 20 years old. What an exciting life trajectory! I feel so happy, so free, and such a vital article. Ivy's life😭😭😭😭 my dream.

There are no degrading words, no stereotypes, and no heroics. Except for the original characters, the original supporting characters seem to be all female, and they are all leaders. The pets are all female. The descriptions of Rita and Umloch are not particularly negative or mean, they are just very ordinary descriptions. [Sending Hearts] (Author, I love you!) Be biased towards daily life and not keep a running account

I read a lot of hp fanfiction, but rarely save Lily and James. In this Harry, when he looks in the magic mirror, he is finally alone. He is the happiest, with daily warmth and a sense of joy. Especially the relationship between the heroine and Bill is very good, and he is also the one with the highest appearance rate, but the heroine is really only interested in oil and salt.

This is one of the best HP fanfics I have ever seen! Most of this book is about daily life, but the plain and flowing daily life is a test of writing skills. I have only read one book about daily life that is similar to this one, and it was also very well written. The only flaw is that the description of events is a little brief, but this is not enough to prevent the author from taking us through Evita's life course, which is really beautiful. From being alone to meeting everyone who loves her and loves her, she has a beautiful and magnificent life course, my dear girl with purple eyes. After reading so many fan stories, I finally realized what attracted me to HP all the time. It wasn't the accusations of who was right or wrong, the eternal cycle of bullying and discrimination, or the wandering adventures. The most important thing was revealed in the opening chapter—it was love. I am obsessed with these loves, Naniji, Adele, Lily, Hermione, Luna, Naville, Lupin, Regulus, Harry, Dumbledore, Newt, no matter what kind of love, people may not give it consciously, but they will receive it in full in the next moment. This is what I realized about the characteristics of excellent HP. In ordinary days, love is the most difficult to explain but it is everywhere. Love is the greatest magic of mankind.

The writing is super, super, super good, and I still feel like I haven't finished reading it. In fact, this book has been on the bookshelf for a long time. Because it is the final article, I have wanted to click in and read it from time to time, but the introduction always dissuades me. Yes, because the heroine's schooling time is between the parent generation and the child generation. I always feel that there is not much to see in this time period, and I am afraid that the author will not write well. It will be worse. But after I really read it, I found it to be really amazing. I don't know how to describe it. It's definitely a cool article, but it's not the kind of awesome and coaxing Feng Ao Tianwen. The existence of the heroine and the author's writing style are more like a gurgling stream, with tranquility and distance, and the cool summer breeze slowly coming to people's side. To put it in more vernacular terms, it is as enjoyable as going to play in a stream on a hot summer day. It is not difficult to imagine this kind of pleasure. It is really amazing. It's been a long time since I've read an HP fanfic so happily. The settings of many of them are very good, but if you really read them, you can't really read them. But if you delete them, it seems a bit of a pity. In short, they are just tasteless and a pity to discard. Anyway, I highly recommend everyone to read it. Oh my god, otherwise you will definitely miss out on a very good article.

This book is very interesting. I really like the plot and content. I feel very curious about the next development. It is not a cookie-cutter fic where you can tell the next step at a glance. I really like the content.

Nice looking and looks very comfortable! I can feel that the author's attitude towards everyone is very objective, and the characters are not OOC. Many fans feel that if they stand on one side, they will unconsciously have some subtle malice towards the other side, or the protagonist always stands in a high position and makes condescending comments about the characters or the system.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. It's really good to read. I finally have a book with Lily and James. The whole book is very warm and a little humorous. The emotional line is sweet and reassuring. Weiwei is still very stupid. I really like the part where Weiwei travels around the world. Two words, good-looking, three words, super good-looking, six words, super invincible and good-looking!

If you like to read the original plot of "Everyday Xiang He Shao", you must read this book. It is very delicious, and the magical animals are very cute. A very harmonious story makes the whole story happy. This is the happiest fanfic I have ever seen Harry live in. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very gentle. The characters are not very OOC, and everyone is very vivid and real. The direction of the plot and the emotional development are all causally related (although the emotional line does not account for a lot, but it is still delicious). Some points are foreshadowed in the previous text, and the writing style is still very mature. Although there is a plot where the heroine travels is relatively dull and may dissuade many people, it is very consistent with the character of the heroine. She loves life and the world. She is a great girl! Adele's identity is also very interesting, and it surprised me again in the end. I stayed up two nights to finish reading it, it was delicious. ❤️❤️❤️

Great, very well written. Everyone is doing well. Very warm, complete and happy ('▽') ps. Quidditch all-female team yyds. Ministry of Magic female leaders yyds. Sisters and sisters are great!

Wow, it's so pretty. I'm currently ranked second among hp fans. Why is there no one else when it's so pretty? It is a super heartwarming little story, not long in length, mainly about daily life. To be honest, I rarely read daily life stories, because most daily life stories always make me feel bored, but! ! This book is real, very relaxed and happy, the plot is all sweet and no knives, right? Do you know how rare it is to have knives everywhere these days! ! Thanks to the author for giving them the ending they deserveQwQ

It's hard not to give full marks to many Harry Potter fans. The author's setting itself is very attractive and really builds another possibility for the Harry Potter story. The time span is also very well chosen. This may be my favorite among the 50 or 30 Harry Potter fan stories I have read, hehe.

Like it very much! Every character in it is well created. The protagonist is a smart young man who likes small animals. The small animals she raises also won my heart [shy] I don't give five stars because I heard some rumors about tomatoes [staring] Anyway, I like it very much! [Sending Hearts]

My heart felt warm after reading it, and I felt the wind of freedom gently blowing over my body, bringing lasting emotion and joy that made people unconsciously raise their lips. All in all, it is very beautiful and warm. My heart melts when I watch it. It is very relaxing to watch. There are no deliberately created conflicts, no hostility, no anxiety or eagerness, and a light melody.

I like the character of the heroine, she is so alive. This is the character that a heartthrob should have, right? [Blowing Kiss] Women have fully demonstrated their shining points, and the author's writing style is very gentle. It is my favorite narrative style, and it is not trivial at all [Shy] There is no CP in the main text, and the emotional line is very obscure. There are Bill, Charlie and Sirius in the extras.

Overall, it's very good-looking. The angles and settings are very novel. I especially like Evita. There's only one thing, I really can't see the part about traveling around the world. Fortunately, it's relatively far back. Other than that, it's very nice.

Nice! Vivi and Adele are both smart and powerful wizards. The author's novels are as comfortable to read as fairy tales. I personally like this book very much except for the part in the middle where Evita travels around.

This book is really interesting, both the protagonist and the writing are so interesting! This brings me back to the feeling of reading fairy tale books when I was a child. The only shortcoming is that this book is not a conclusion. It is really good and I really want to read the finale in one go. The characters currently appearing do not feel very OOC, they are really interesting and worth watching. Moreover, my wife's writing style is witty and the protagonist is lively and interesting. It's really a pleasure to read. Reading this book is really a pleasure. I just feel so happy reading this book.

I saw the third year of summer vacation. It is very beautiful. It has its own rhythm. The heroine is serious about living her magical life. It is so attractive. Except that the first two chapters are a bit blurry, it gets better and better later on. Keep up the good work and work hard to finish it [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It's good to read. It's rare to see a story with this timeline. It's a very novel angle, and it's rare to see Harry's happy life as both parents. I like this book very much and look forward to the author's follow-up stories [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Nice! The writing looks so comfortable! Love the heroine's character! There are also flashes of characters from the original work! Come and see everyone! ! ! ! !