Incompetent King? Start with the Witch Destroying the Cathedral

The pros and cons are evenly matched, with winners and losers, just like chess players playing against each other: I take two of your pieces, but you also have to pay the price of one. The protagonist is not like the male protagonists in other novels who encounter everything smoothly. He will still encounter difficulties and make wrong decisions, but he can make up for his mistakes and bear his mistakes. The protagonist is shaped close to a real character who has been trapped for more than 100 years. He can be crazy and gentle, willful but will bear the consequences of willfulness. Moreover, I think the author is very good at describing the thoughts of civilians and soldiers making their own status and position when faced with an absurd decision. This idea shows that the author's future achievements will definitely be high, which requires that his knowledge and feelings about society and people are definitely not low.

Personally, I am quite satisfied with the first book I wrote. Although it is not written in a popular way and is not a cool novel, I tried my best to depict a living world.

The author's writing is excellent! It's a rare masterpiece in Tomato [smile], but for the convenience of readers, I think it's better to give the protagonist, kingdom and queen normal names in the later stage.

We and the enemy will win or lose each other, but I hope that the lords on the protagonist side will die as few as possible. The witch (the heroine) appears too little. At present, she basically lives in the setting. In the future, she should make magic props and other things to make a set of communication and so on.

What I read earlier is pretty good, but I didn't expect that the author is still a horse-and-blade player [laughing evilly], I hope the witch will have a single female protagonist [blowing kiss]

Let's talk about the advantages first: the narrative fluency is sufficient, the story theme is quite distinct, the development route is clear, the characters have distinctive personalities, the style is humorous, and the details are rich. Let's talk about the shortcomings: the narrative perspective is not completely first person, but a combination of first person and third person, which is slightly confusing (I am also the first person, and how to solve this problem, I used multi-perspective description) Finally, let me talk about what I agree with: I also wrote a book about the Middle Ages, but it is based on real history, not Western fantasy. This book can be said to be based on intuition. Of course, thankfully, I wasn't put off by the title. There are indeed not many first-person books on the market, but they combine Western fantasy themes, so the effect is pretty good, and the author is also very serious, and even pays attention to details in daily life. I mixed in some private information. My own book can be regarded as information that I have researched for a long time, but the real history is still too difficult to understand for Western fantasy. Of course, each has its own theme. Keep at it, this subject matter is really good, there are many directions for expansion, take advantage of the first show to attract more old readers [Sending my heart]

If it hadn't been for these hundred years of accumulation, I feel that the protagonist's kingdom would have quickly lost a large area of ​​territory. Of course, the protagonist should have eliminated external threats even for the sake of the queen.

Excellent and funny, very good

It's well written, but some details need more polishing.

This is a novel about medieval players in a medieval kingdom (Brain in a Jar). It seems that the protagonist has traveled to a different world. In fact, everything is destined by gods (programmers), and who is the being (the author) above it? And you are about to see the medieval version of the real undead disaster and it is the normal version without magic.

It's quite interesting. It's a rare genre for a stagnant single-player game to suddenly become alive. But the title of the book is so bad that it's hard to attract people. After reading it, I feel that a common problem in Western fantasy is that the more names are written, the more people are mentioned. Especially when the villain leader appears and mentions it, it is just the name, which is a bit difficult to remember. Only the characters with characteristics on the opposite side are still memorable. I hope the author will mention the characteristics of those people when they appear later to facilitate reading [sneered smile]

A very good novel. The few war plots made it feel like I was reading a war history without losing the humor. The heroine doesn't appear much. Although she is married as a queen, she has some sugar but not much. She is more like a national master at the moment.

I accidentally finished the game. I thought it was pretty good before. When I saw the map updated by the researcher, I felt a little confused. I didn't know what the ending would be. I saw that I was going to the southern region and stopped. Then I waited for the update. I didn't want to watch it anymore (the map was changed inexplicably, and the characters aged faster). I felt that there might be an unexpected ending. Overall it's okay, take your time and take a look.

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

The book is very good. I strongly support it. The author must make an effort to update. Don't let eunuchs look good. If you like them, watch them more. Author, I support you. Too little, too little, too little, too little. Ah, ah, ah, ah, can you update it more? Author Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on! I, the author, come on, come on, come on! I hope this book has multiple female protagonists! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! There must be multiple heroines!

Really recommend it looks good

The writing style is humorous and humorous. It is much better than the articles on Red Persimmon where most of the sentences are incomprehensible. It has the feeling of an ancient novel.

It looks good, the writing is pretty good, and it's quite interesting. I just feel like it would be better if the witch lady had more scenes.

I don't really like the first-person perspective, but overall it's pretty good.

I just want to read a little sweet article. Is there anything wrong with me? Why are you stabbing me like this [crying][crying]

Every book is encouraged. I was too tired to finish this book. At that time, I only updated forty or fifty chapters and it looked great. I felt that the battle lines were quite nice and dense, but I could see the blood flowing like a river.

I've read more than 100 chapters, and it's quite interesting to read so far.

It looks good and the writing style is very comfortable to read [send my heart][send my heart][send my heart]

It's quite good, a very novel book, but the title at the front is indeed a bit strange, and the protagonist's character is so soft [laughing and crying], the rake ear root is yes [face covering], the maid, and the lucky Jasmine, because the queen has become too unruly, but as a comedy, it can be said.

Greatness needs no words

Good looking, I like this protagonist

What you said is so cool

Good, good, good, good, very interesting

It looks good. I like this subject matter very much. I feel that the author's writing style is also good and the characters are very three-dimensional. Overall, I like it very much. Come on, author. Meow

Kingdoms and Castles is an adaptation of the novel, I rarely read it, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.