[Medieval + King + Comedy + Pure Romance + Cold Weapons and Low Magic + Not a Power Fantasy]
I, User 326805189, transmigrated into a medieval game and spent a hundred years building a kingdom that was fairly powerful across the entire map. Most prosperous dynasties are built over hundreds or even thousands of years. A hundred years isn’t long for a nation’s development, but it’s a very long time for a person.
The only shame was that this was a single-player game. Day after day, year after year, the NPC dialogue and spawn points never changed, and no update ever came. I tried to kill myself to exit the game, but every attempt failed. After each suicide, I would respawn on the throne.
I was lonely. I was bored. There was just one NPC who felt special: the witch who lived in the forest. I unlocked all her storylines and skins, and earned the final achievement, “Friends Forever.”
“Damn it! I’m the ruler of a kingdom, yet I don’t even have a queen!”
Today marks the hundredth anniversary of the Kingdom of User 326805189. I’m holding a grand banquet and inviting all the notable NPCs from across the map. Only wine can temporarily ease my suffering...
After the banquet, at midnight, a miracle happened. In a single night, the entire world truly came to life. The cutscenes and dialogue boxes all disappeared, and the kingdom I had built and all the wealth I had accumulated were still there!
First things first: I’m going to find myself a queen!
General: Your Majesty, the Church doesn’t want you getting too close to the witch or dabbling in witchcraft.
Me: Hm, is that so? Go tear down the church.
General: Yes... Wait, what did you say, Your Majesty?
The pros and cons are evenly matched, with winners and losers, just like chess players playing against each other: I take two of your pieces, but you also have to pay the price of one. The protagonist is not like the male protagonists in other novels who encounter everything smoothly. He will still encounter difficulties and make wrong decisions, but he can make up for his mistakes and bear his mistakes. The protagonist is shaped close to a real character who has been trapped for more than 100 years. He can be crazy and gentle, willful but will bear the consequences of willfulness. Moreover, I think the author is very good at describing the thoughts of civilians and soldiers making their own status and position when faced with an absurd decision. This idea shows that the author's future achievements will definitely be high, which requires that his knowledge and feelings about society and people are definitely not low.
Personally, I am quite satisfied with the first book I wrote. Although it is not written in a popular way and is not a cool novel, I tried my best to depict a living world.
The author's writing is excellent! It's a rare masterpiece in Tomato 🙂, but for the convenience of readers, I think it's better to give the protagonist, kingdom and queen normal names in the later stage.
We and the enemy will win or lose each other, but I hope that the lords on the protagonist side will die as few as possible. The witch (the heroine) appears too little. At present, she basically lives in the setting. In the future, she should make magic props and other things to make a set of communication and so on.
What I read earlier is pretty good, but I didn't expect that the author is still a horse-and-blade player 😏, I hope the witch will have a single female protagonist 😘
Let's talk about the advantages first: the narrative fluency is sufficient, the story theme is quite distinct, the development route is clear, the characters have distinctive personalities, the style is humorous, and the details are rich. Let's talk about the shortcomings: the narrative perspective is not completely first person, but a combination of first person and third person, which is slightly confusing (I am also the first person, and how to solve this problem, I used multi-perspective description) Finally, let me talk about what I agree with: I also wrote a book about the Middle Ages, but it is based on real history, not Western fantasy. This book can be said to be based on intuition. Of course, thankfully, I wasn't put off by the title. There are indeed not many first-person books on the market, but they combine Western fantasy themes, so the effect is pretty good, and the author is also very serious, and even pays attention to details in daily life. I mixed in some private information. My own book can be regarded as information that I have researched for a long time, but the real history is still too difficult to understand for Western fantasy. Of course, each has its own theme. Keep at it, this subject matter is really good, there are many directions for expansion, take advantage of the first show to attract more old readers [Sending my heart]
If it hadn't been for these hundred years of accumulation, I feel that the protagonist's kingdom would have quickly lost a large area of territory. Of course, the protagonist should have eliminated external threats even for the sake of the queen.
This is a novel about medieval players in a medieval kingdom (Brain in a Jar). It seems that the protagonist has traveled to a different world. In fact, everything is destined by gods (programmers), and who is the being (the author) above it? And you are about to see the medieval version of the real undead disaster and it is the normal version without magic.
Excellent and funny, very good
It's quite interesting. It's a rare genre for a stagnant single-player game to suddenly become alive. But the title of the book is so bad that it's hard to attract people. After reading it, I feel that a common problem in Western fantasy is that the more names are written, the more people are mentioned. Especially when the villain leader appears and mentions it, it is just the name, which is a bit difficult to remember. Only the characters with characteristics on the opposite side are still memorable. I hope the author will mention the characteristics of those people when they appear later to facilitate reading [sneered smile]