One Piece: at the Beginning, Momonosuke Received the Lunch Box

Welcome to the author's new book "One Piece: Kill Momonosuke at the Beginning and Kidnap Yamato to the Sea". Friends who have finished reading can read the author's other four completed books. 1 "One Piece: The Strongest Experimental Subject at the Beginning" is also known as "One Piece: The Worst Criminal in the World, Killing the Celestial Dragons" and "One Piece: Killing the Celestial Dragons until the Sky and the Earth Fall Apart" 2 "One Piece: I Open Susana with the Barrier Fruit" Also known as "One Piece: I Use the Barrier Fruit to Ride the Sea" "One Piece: Grab the Barrier Fruit at the Beginning" 3 "One Piece: Hellbrook" also known as "One Piece: Capital Squeeze, Not Even the Corpse" 4 "One Piece: Grab the Slippery Fruit" is also known as "One Piece: Live to the Strongest" Grateful [crying] [Top post] [Please pay attention] [Working on draft] Why is my book review missing?

It is a non-system (the golden fingers are the local abilities obtained during time travel, see the beginning for details), a purely local combat system, and the logic is also very good. It can be seen that the author has an outline. Overall, it is very comfortable and enjoyable to watch. Anyone who likes movies with no heroine but many heroines can watch it. Because the protagonist is a heroic figure, there is no romance. The heroine is basically attracted by the protagonist's courage, ambition, etc.

It's still very good. The pirate novels produced by Dayehuo must be high-quality. There are some filters added to it, but I have to say that the pirate writing he wrote is really good, and it's pretty cool to be creative. I'm just talking about the early stage, who knows about the later stage [laughing evilly]

The novel is very good, judging from the introduction, it is very good, and I have also been a fan of @ye for two years, so I highly recommend this novel 1. According to the author's expression, the protagonist grows rapidly in the early stage and is very well represented. The protagonist's actions are mainly to change the rule of the Celestial Dragons in the article, collect partners to improve abilities, and make up for regrets. 2. Various emotional expressions and behavioral measures are consistent with the original work 3. The author's writing style is excellent, his descriptions are detailed and vivid, and he insists on updating continuously for dozens or hundreds of days. When you watch Rotten Tomatoes, don't you just want us to review it seriously? Just copy some words [sneaky laugh] Turn on AI story review mode [laughing] Once upon a time, there was a small village where two good friends lived, Xiao Ming and Xiao Qiang. They play and grow together every day. However, one day, Xiao Ming suddenly disappeared. Xiaoqiang was very sad and decided to find Xiaoming. Xiaoqiang walked a long way and came to a strange place. There he met a magical bird. The bird told Xiaoqiang that it could help Xiaoqiang find Xiaoming. So, Xiaoqiang got on the bird and started the journey to find Xiao Ming. During the journey, Xiaoqiang met many interesting animals, and they all told him clues about Xiao Ming. For example, a smart monkey told him that Xiao Ming was taken away by a mysterious old woman. Another brave lion told him that Xiao Ming was in a remote forest. Finally, a gentle rabbit told him that Xiao Ming was by the river ahead. Xiaoqiang followed these clues and finally found Xiao Ming. It turns out that Xiao Ming was taken to a mysterious island by an old lady and became the guardian of the island. Xiaoqiang was very happy and returned to the village with Xiaoming. From then on, their friendship became even deeper. This story tells us that sometimes we need to be brave enough to pursue our dreams and never give up. At the same time, we should also cherish everyone around us, because fate allows us to meet and become friends.

I had a great time watching it, and I want to make a wish. I want to read a story with Big Mom and the Charlotte family as the protagonist. After all, Big Mom's ideal is to build a utopia, and it feels like a concept that can change the world. It provides an idea. The protagonist can be the son of Big Mom and Kaido, and at the same time perfectly inherits the talents of both. In the early stage, he will accompany Big Mom and other brothers and sisters of the Charlotte family to help Big Mom build all nations. Later, he can Eat the cloned Blue Dragon Fruit, and learn various techniques of the Overlord with Kaido and Big Mom. The timeline can be extended, and the ability of the Bray Mirror Fruit can be used to develop into a more powerful intermediary than Ming Ge. It can also be transferred and developed quickly. The early development is wretched, and in the mid-term, it can help the new character Loki, alliance with the giants, unify and unite the giants, and you can also add Momonosuke's destiny to the protagonist ( Another king), he can also join forces with Kaido's mother to help Whitebeard heal his injuries, because he should be a few years older than Red Hair and Teach, so he can cast a deep shadow on Red Hair and Teach in advance, and even steal Garp's home in advance, and can be Ace Sabo and Luffy's teacher [laughing], instilling utopian ideals in them, and I feel that the Big Mom Group is really miserable in the original work, obviously all nations have the best life. , The lifespan seems to be only one month every six months, and it is also for the actions of a large number of Homitz soldiers. It can be said to be quite good. Moreover, when Auntie is suffering from Sirexia, the protagonist can suppress and improve his own strength at the same time, and can also gradually change Auntie's character and heart disease. In short, there are many things that can be operated. I hope Teacher Huo can adopt [Love] [Love] [Love]

There are not many authors who insist on writing about One Piece on Tomato. The author's work must be of high quality. Please support it and work hard. I've read all five of the author's One Piece books, go for it. I like the two protagonists Dai Die and Dongye Huanglong. Big Daddy Babaya, Wild Dragon Overlord, awesome pen!

Dayehuo's pirate novels, needless to say, just have no problem with the endorsement (plot, logic, three views, wording, etc.), Just read it (I am not a sailor) [OK][OK][OK][OK][OK][OK][full]

The low-end ones include Jackie Chan's tuxedo, the mid-end ones are similar to Venom and Forced Armor, and the high-end ones are the divine clothes from "Slay the Girl" and the Saint Cloths.

The writing is quite appropriate. I hope the author can make the writing stronger. I was so frustrated when watching the anime.

I read a few pirate fanfics written by the author and gave the author a suggestion. I suggest that the new book should have a system. After subduing a crew member, you can summon a female character in the comic world. The combat power is directly related. The limit is 12. I will give me my own quota. It is for reference only. Esdeath (Xuanwu), Tsunade (Mori), Jersey Garden (Momo), Shokuhou Misaki (Kirin), Kangna 5 (Thunder), Dinisha (White Tiger), Tokisaki Kurumi (Soul), Albedo (Fallen Angel), 12 Thor (Magma), 9 Saber 4 (Suzaku), 11 Ao Run 6 (Piao Piao), 10 White Snake (Qinglong), I actually made a lot of outline settings myself, but I was a bit too lazy to write them down. I hope the author can complete it

[Top post][Top post][Top post] It's rare to find an unsystematic and exciting novel about pirates on Tomato. I've been following up on it. The author is really awesome🐮I have read every one of the pirate novels. From the youthfulness at the beginning to the later characters, they seem to come to life. The writing is great! They are all unsystematic pirate novels! Come on! A very novel One Piece trilogy. The author has worked hard. Come on, write the best work and present it to everyone - Jie Jie Jie Gan Middle School [laughing][laughing][laughing]

The author really has great ideas, and all of the books published by One Piece are excellent products! Different characters and different routines can achieve the same effect. In the early stage, Dongye Huanglong is relatively more like a commander and counselor. He is good at making use of the alliance of interests and is famous for his strategies. In contrast, Luo Ji shows himself as a monarch at the beginning of the story. Although he may not be strong at the beginning, he is able to win over people's hearts based on human nature based on existing intelligence, and relies on his charm to gather and convince stronger people for his own use.

The harem story was well written, and the killing of Momonosuke at the beginning was already well received, and the subsequent content was also okay. Especially the part where he pretends to be Roger's son and kidnaps Yamato. Adding a surname makes her look like [laughing evilly], which fits my stereotype of her.

This book is very good! Watching it makes people have ups and downs and makes them feel emotional! I really like the character of the protagonist! I can't explain it specifically, but I just feel like I want to see it. I feel like it's not enough! I love how domineering the protagonist is!

The protagonist's IQ is online, and the setting is not as random as some fan fiction, nor is there any plot that deliberately disgusts readers. The writing is also good, unlike some novels where you can't understand what is being said as soon as you start listening to it.

I have basically read all the books by the author Daye Huo. The first ones I feel are Barrier Susanoo and 88 Experimental Body, which are pure battles. There are more than 300 books left that I have not read. This book is really good, but it also has problems. They all have harems. You can describe it more and collect them one by one. There are very few fighting scenes for the protagonist in the early and middle stages. It is only in the middle and late high-end games that it starts to become really fun. It is not bad.

It's pretty good, but I didn't take Weiwei away. I suggest adding @

It looks okay, but it's just that the back is not contained. It's impossible for Im to fight to the death. How long has he survived? The most forbearing person, even if you kill the Tianlong people, he will not fight to the death for them, but this was written when there was no information about Yimu, so it is quite good.

The blood of the golden lion, the blood of Whitebeard, the blood of Ace, the blood of the supercharged fruit, the fusion creates a Sun Wukong, [puckers his lips] Can the drawn creature eat the devil fruit? Can the fruit be transformed into gravity clothes? Can the gravity clothes on the ship be practiced to increase the speed?

The new work "Legongguo" is very good, I have read the latest chapter. Then I came to watch this, well, it was great to start the adventure with Yamato, and then I kept reading more than 300 chapters, and I just skipped to read the rest. It was not as fun as the previous one to gather the power of the girl. , A battle between the five old stars of the world government and Yi Mu lasted for more than 100 chapters, and then ended [face covering] In short, it was still very interesting more than 300 chapters ago [face covering]

I came here to follow the author from other books, and the books he wrote are quite in line with my taste. I haven't read many of them so far (I will review them after I read them later). The first half is quite interesting, and I feel like I am playing Don Quixote with Yamato [facepalm]

I have read all of this author's One Piece series, and they are among the best works in Tomato, and they are worth owning.

First give me five stars to encourage you. It is recommended that the author publish a single chapter in the old book to promote the new book. It started very well, then it got a little better, and now it's getting better. Keep up the good work.

It is a high-quality One Piece novel, and the more you read it, the more enjoyable it becomes. The pirates in One Piece have to find opportunities to recruit and develop, and join forces to start a shocking war against the World Government Navy and the Celestial Dragons. In addition, according to the performance of the fifth-speed flight, the aunt's ability and the King's attack power are suspected to be beyond the standard, and the Yonko-level characters can be instantly killed by the King.

The plot direction of this book is really something I have never imagined before. It is indeed very interesting. It also gives an ending to One Piece from another perspective. It is a book worth reading [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

Compared with many pirate novels, Tomato's is already considered a good one. It's well written, keep up the good work!

The ending design is quite clever, and it has rounded up many of Pirates' bugs. Although it is ridiculous, the explanations are very reasonable, such as explaining why Im can't come out, Nika's prophecy, the curse of the fruit, etc.

Tomato's best pirate fan author

Although this Pirates fanfic is not as good as King of the World, it is still pretty good and can be read as a fun read.

I am so happy that the author has written a new book again. The last one, The Wild Dragon of the East Wilderness, was very well written. I hope the author will continue his efforts and update more