"All living beings are suffering, and the road to immortality is endless. Looking back on the way we came, we are all covered with bones."
There is no system in this world of immortality, or are you and I already in the system, just unconsciously?
A young man from a small town with useless spiritual roots has bizarre memory fragments flashing through his mind. The ordinary selection of immortal sect has become the beginning of a huge conspiracy...
Is it a grand gathering of immortals held once every sixty years, or a gluttonous feast where opportunities are divided among the forces of the four continents?
Let's see how Shen Dongyao, an ordinary young man who has lost his spiritual roots, fights against all forces with an innocent heart, explores the mystery of his life experience, uncovers the mystery of this world step by step, and cuts off the heavy shackles on all living beings...
"Giggle, giggle..." A hoarse and weird laughter sounded: "All living things begin in chaos and nothingness, and you can bring them back to their original place with just one glance..."
The boy suddenly opened his red and bloody pupils and looked at you.
Reader comments
After reading the first and second chapters, I felt that the writing was okay, but it lacked polish. Ma De, at the beginning of the third chapter, the plot is like shit. Damn it, the genius of the big sect comes to the small mountain village to choose his disciples. I can barely understand it. After all, the sect needs to set an example.
I can understand why I choose a disciple and immediately go on a mission. After all, it's just a matter of course. It's okay to take new disciples to do tasks, it's too busy.
Damn it, you really thought of using the protagonist's waste spiritual roots as bait. Not to mention that the protagonist is a waste among wastes, using people as bait is something that an upright sect can do.
The protagonist's brother is still a genius, and will be the leader's disciple in the future. Those two leaders are cultivators of immortality but not brains, right? Offending the protagonist's brother, waterlogged and stupid writing.
That's outrageous, Ma De. All the disciples I selected have failed, and a lot of disciples from the sect have also failed. I think it's unreasonable for the two leaders, Bai and Yang, not to betray the sect.
Looking at the name, looking at the cover, and looking at the beginning, I think it's okay. It turned out to be a toilet under a streetlight, invisible shit. Damn it, you wasted my nap time, it pissed me off.
After reading the first and second chapters, I felt that the writing was okay, but it lacked polish. Ma De, at the beginning of the third chapter, the plot is like shit. Damn it, the genius of the big sect comes to the small mountain village to choose his disciples. I can barely understand it. After all, the sect needs to set an example. I can understand why I choose a disciple and immediately go on a mission. After all, it's just a matter of course. It's okay to take new disciples to do tasks, it's too busy. Damn it, you really thought of using the protagonist's waste spiritual roots as bait. Not to mention that the protagonist is a waste among wastes, using people as bait is something that an upright sect can do. The protagonist's brother is still a genius, and will be the leader's disciple in the future. Those two leaders are cultivators of immortality but not brains, right? Offending the protagonist's brother, waterlogged and stupid writing. That's outrageous, Ma De. All the disciples I selected have failed, and a lot of disciples from the sect have also failed. I think it's unreasonable for the two leaders, Bai and Yang, not to betray the sect. Looking at the name, looking at the cover, and looking at the beginning, I think it's okay. It turned out to be a toilet under a streetlight, invisible shit. Damn it, you wasted my nap time, it pissed me off.
Feeling okay so far