The Fate of the Waves

My humble review: The content of this work is all-encompassing, the writing is rigorous, it integrates industry, war, Eastern and Western mythology and history, and the description of the environment is very atmospheric. In the early stage, Mo Xuan's life was full of ups and downs, and the foreshadowing of fate runs through the whole story. The character's transformation is fully demonstrated in the suffering, and the narrative is naturally connected. The character of Hu Xi is impressive. He looks fierce but prefers tea ceremony and ancient music. He has a deep obsession with his apprentice Man Ti. After the two separated, he searched for him for three years. Manti went to the front line and suffered a lot of injustice in order not to hurt his relatives and friends, but returned as an official. When Hu Gong heard that others were bullying his apprentice, he immediately became angry and secretly arranged for people to protect him, hoping that he would return home. That night when Man Ti returned to the pavilion, his relatives and friends had prepared meals and waited for him for three years. Hu Xi, who used to love tea but not drink, also drank to relieve his sorrows all day long. The ending erases the bonds between each other for the peace of the world, and the fate dissipates after embracing each other, like a dream, full of aftertaste. The article is refreshing without routine, the growth line is delicate and long, and the background is gloomy and gentle, like the thick and warm sunset on the plateau. I look forward to enriching the character interactions in the follow-up. The suspense passages are very brilliant. If the climax increases the tension, it will be even more amazing. I sincerely admire the author.

Maybe it's because I'm an Aries. I feel like letting go of the past like this makes me feel a thorn in my heart. Moreover, the protagonist is a legendary blacksmith who can be said to be very valuable to the family. This makes me feel that I only found the protagonist because of interests. The protagonist also forgives me, which makes me feel very poisonous (the above is just a personal opinion), but I still give a five-star encouragement.

The content is very good, the characters are well described, and the writing is good, but it is a bit too sharp [smile] [smile] Although the protagonist's character is very honest and honest, it is not good in this world of intrigues. I look forward to the following plots.

My Mo Xuan, why did you become a cow?

Great, the mysterious xp in the niche group in our mysterious group finally got a meal [send heart][send heart][send heart]

The experiences of the two protagonists in the book are full of ups and downs. There is no brainless Mary Su plot, but Mo Xuan is really suffering. I hope the author can let him and Sabas have the same ending.

Except for the part where the protagonist gave it to the protagonist for free, everything else was pretty good.

The outline is good, please optimize the details, keep up the good work