HP: Relaunching the Second Show, My Genius Son

It's a great fanfic, with a lot of the author's private works, but I think it's innocuous. Before reading it, I once saw a comment saying that it was uncomfortable for Sri Lanka to become friends with the foursome. Before reading it, I actually agreed with this point of view, but after reading it, I thought it was normal. After leaving his drunkard father, having a stable and excellent mother, and a child with a huge family behind him, his life would be completely different. When Sri Lanka didn't have this, even the people of the Snake Yard itself didn't have a very good attitude toward him, let alone James, who regarded him as an imaginary enemy. Moreover, the author also made Lily understand some truths at appropriate times in the article, such as that it is not magic that is evil, but the people who use magic. All I can say is that mothers can really influence their children for a lifetime.

In this book, Eileen Prince became a good mother, fulfilled the responsibilities of a mother, and gave Severus a happy childhood. It was very touching. However, it was not written as a whole, just from Eileen's perspective, but from everyone's perspective. Moreover, Severus's relationship with the foursome was also different from before, including the fact that he and Lily also changed from a secret crush to a tolerable one. The friendship is very good. I was a little worried before reading this book. I decided to make the relationship between my wife and Lily a CP. But to be honest, the two of them are really not suitable. They are only suitable for being friends, but not suitable for being lovers. In terms of character, I have not finished it so far. I hope that the subsequent development will be more interesting. I am very much looking forward to this book by the author.

It's not bad. There are no big bugs. I don't deliberately criticize Dumbledore and Gryffindor, and I don't praise Snape to the sky. It's okay, but the relationship between ggad in this article is different from what I understand. I think they are both a little low-key little old men. They can't bow to each other just because of a trivial matter that doesn't even count. But it will only be mentioned in the next few chapters. It is a small space and the previous chapters are very good.

I have read many fan stories about the professor who suffered so much, and I feel refreshed after reading this article. The professor finally has a mother who loves him and is able to protect him, and he can live a normal life. The writing is smooth and the style is relaxed and warm. I like it very much. Five-star recommendation!

This is a great Harry Potter fanfic. For the first time, I saw the Snape redemption text that changed Irene, which reduced the shadow of Snape's childhood and resolved the grievances between Snape and the foursome in a clever angle. It's really great.

"It doesn't make much sense for a so-called savior to appear after suffering. There is no savior more suitable than his biological mother." I really like this paragraph. The rescue at the beginning of the story is really awesome and family fun lovers are ecstatic

This book was written by Si's mother to save him. His mother got rid of her love brain and returned to the family. Sif has become different from the original book. He became good friends with James and Lily👫 The plot written by the author is smooth and fascinating. It makes up for a lot of regrets from the root. It is super beautiful. If you like fan fiction, you can read it. Recommended reading📖

The theme is good, but I don't quite understand why SS and JP should become friends.

Super pretty! I hope ss will be beautiful this time, and think he is more suitable for a career (?)

Overall, the writing is okay, and the writing style is good. Compared with the two protagonists in the title, the novel is more like a group portrait. The protagonist is not limited to any one person, but more about the people and things that happened around him during the time when Tao Sijiao was growing up. There are a large number of [emphasis added] private settings that are inconsistent with the original work. The research party may feel a little uncomfortable [face covering]. However, in this novel, these private settings are basically logical and self-consistent. They are not the kind of background setting of Mary Sue or Goldfinger, etc., Which is quite acceptable. The full text is basically about daily life, but the ending is a little rushed. It hastily explained a lot of foreshadowing that I thought I would write well after reading the previous text, which is a bit regretful.

Although I don't know if there will be a woman who will spend the rest of his life with Severus, but I am still very happy. I feel that Severus is very happy. Although he does not have the thrilling experience of being a double agent, he is very happy and his ordinary life is hard-won. A tribute to their desperate victory.

It's okay to be alone, but if it's really possible, it's not bad to choose a like-minded girl to be a couple.

Things and people in the world are not black and white, are not a collection of pure good or pure evil, are not truly right or truly wrong. The more evil there is in things, the darker the gray will be, but it will always be gray. That's it. All things are the aggregation of positive and negative. The difference between them is just the different proportions of the two. The collection of everything is this gray world. In this gray, there are doctors who do good to help the world, and there are also crazy villains, but they all inevitably form this world and mix it into this gray.

The writing is quite good, and the story development is smooth and reasonable so far. However, I can't accept that Sif and the four robbers are so close to each other, and Irene is happy to see it happen. If my child plays with someone who has hurt him, I will definitely object. Even if it may change later, I will inevitably worry about the child being hurt at the beginning. Moreover, Irene knew that Lupine was a werewolf, but she had no objection or thought of reminding her son. You must know that in her previous life, Sif almost died at the hands of a werewolf. It is said that love leads to fear, but Eileen did not show any displeasure towards anyone who caused the tragedy in Sev's previous life, which makes people wonder if she really loves Sev🥺

It's good to watch, the plot is bland and ordinary, but it feels like it's lost some of its highlights or excitement because of this stability (? In the early stage, it focused on describing a few self-created prank spells, but it also briefly mentioned Severus's more influential achievements in his youth. For example, the Potion Master did not write about the hastily written Shadowless Blade and the hastily finished Wolfsbane Antidote. He also specifically mentioned the form of the God-calling Guardian and the Boggart before but did not write about it [face covering]. Is it because the ending was too hasty?

Although it has been more than a year since this book was finished, I still want to write a review. I've replayed it many times, yes, I don't get tired of it at all. Until now most of the books on Tomato featuring Severus have been more or less unfriendly to Lily and the Marauders, or excluded Peter from the Marauders. This book can be said to be the first one I have read that allowed Severus to get along well with these people. With the care of his elders, Severus is no longer a sensitive child with low self-esteem. With extremely high magical talent, he should be so confident and generous. Severus deserves all the best in the world. After Irene got rid of the domestic/violent man, she also moved towards a better life. In my opinion, this is the ending worthy of her. Well, what I said in the last sentence is a bit strange. It seems that the meaning is different from what I thought, but it doesn't matter.

It's a good-looking, wonderful story about my parents. I hope there is such a parallel world.

It's a history of Sif's studies [laughing] The plot was a bit bland, so I watched it slowly and it took me a long time to finish it. Obviously it's so short... But this kind of plainness is the most rare thing for Sifu, right? This kind of life that goes through all the ups and downs in the ordinary... The person watching the end is so soft. All in all, it's a pretty good book! (I haven't read the original book or the movie, so I don't know if there are many of these in the plot. However, from the teacher's book, I feel that the teacher knows a lot about potions and magical animals, as if he has really experienced that world!)

The author writes really well, and everyone has a good ending. This is also the only HP fanfic I have finished reading. Severus lived a good life, which can be regarded as a dream come true. He got rid of the tragic fate in the original work, and everyone stood in the sun [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's a very good book. I hope Sri Lanka's religion will live a better life.

Don't be naive, they will not be together, but I hope Lily will not be with James Potter, I am already satisfied. I think James Potter is not worthy of Lily at all, he only brings danger to Lily

It's really well written. Irene and Snape are really my regrets. This book has given them a new possibility. It's really great.

Good to see, Severus has a better life, the author cheers (ง•̀_•́)ง

It's really good, everyone is a good boy! At least among the few HP fanfics I have read, this one by Sensei is the one I can read in its entirety (tears)

It's very good-looking. Readers' suggestions will be adopted. Even if they don't adopt them, they will tell the reasons why they don't adopt them.

It's good-looking and has a novel angle, but there don't seem to be many readers.

Super pretty! @ @( Beast) @OH(hate my younger brother)

The writing is super good, but I don't know why it feels cold. The characters are three-dimensional and the plot is compact.

Severus is so beautiful! ! !

This book is really a school text. The whole daily study life of school is written in great detail. It even looks like you are about to go to class hahaha.