Harry Potter: Starting Over in the Second Round, My Genius Son

It's a great fanfic, with a lot of the author's private works, but I think it's innocuous. Before reading it, I once saw a comment saying that it was uncomfortable for Sri Lanka to become friends with the foursome. Before reading it, I actually agreed with this point of view, but after reading it, I thought it was normal. After leaving his drunkard father, having a stable and excellent mother, and a child with a huge family behind him, his life would be completely different. When Sri Lanka didn't have this, even the people of the Snake Yard itself didn't have a very good attitude toward him, let alone James, who regarded him as an imaginary enemy. Moreover, the author also made Lily understand some truths at appropriate times in the article, such as that it is not magic that is evil, but the people who use magic. All I can say is that mothers can really influence their children for a lifetime.

In this book, Eileen Prince became a good mother, fulfilled the responsibilities of a mother, and gave Severus a happy childhood. It was very touching. However, it was not written as a whole, just from Eileen's perspective, but from everyone's perspective. Moreover, Severus's relationship with the foursome was also different from before, including the fact that he and Lily also changed from a secret crush to a tolerable one. The friendship is very good. I was a little worried before reading this book. I decided to make the relationship between my wife and Lily a CP. But to be honest, the two of them are really not suitable. They are only suitable for being friends, but not suitable for being lovers. In terms of character, I have not finished it so far. I hope that the subsequent development will be more interesting. I am very much looking forward to this book by the author.

It's not bad. There are no big bugs. I don't deliberately criticize Dumbledore and Gryffindor, and I don't praise Snape to the sky. It's okay, but the relationship between ggad in this article is different from what I understand. I think they are both a little low-key little old men. They can't bow to each other just because of a trivial matter that doesn't even count. But it will only be mentioned in the next few chapters. It is a small space and the previous chapters are very good.

I have read many fan stories about the professor who suffered so much, and I feel refreshed after reading this article. The professor finally has a mother who loves him and is able to protect him, and he can live a normal life. The writing is smooth and the style is relaxed and warm. I like it very much. Five-star recommendation!

This is a great Harry Potter fanfic. For the first time, I saw the Snape redemption text that changed Irene, which reduced the shadow of Snape's childhood and resolved the grievances between Snape and the foursome in a clever angle. It's really great.

"It doesn't make much sense for a so-called savior to appear after suffering. There is no savior more suitable than his biological mother." I really like this paragraph. The rescue at the beginning of the story is really awesome and family fun lovers are ecstatic

This book was written by Si's mother to save him. His mother got rid of her love brain and returned to the family. Sif has become different from the original book. He became good friends with James and Lily👫 The plot written by the author is smooth and fascinating. It makes up for a lot of regrets from the root. It is super beautiful. If you like fan fiction, you can read it. Recommended reading📖

The theme is good, but I don't quite understand why SS and JP should become friends.

Overall, the writing is okay, and the writing style is good. Compared with the two protagonists in the title, the novel is more like a group portrait. The protagonist is not limited to any one person, but more about the people and things that happened around him during the time when Tao Sijiao was growing up. There are a large number of [emphasis added] private settings that are inconsistent with the original work. The research party may feel a little uncomfortable 🤦. However, in this novel, these private settings are basically logical and self-consistent. They are not the kind of background setting of Mary Sue or Goldfinger, etc., Which is quite acceptable. The full text is basically about daily life, but the ending is a little rushed. It hastily explained a lot of foreshadowing that I thought I would write well after reading the previous text, which is a bit regretful.

Super pretty! I hope ss will be beautiful this time, and think he is more suitable for a career (?)