After Making Players Cry, I Became the Final Boss

╭( ๐_๐)╮ It's so sweet, especially the relationship between Ruola and everyone in Mondstadt. She is simply the darling of Mondstadt, and she is so strong that she can even make everyone cry for her and be conquered by her strength (definitely not a knife, don't listen to their nonsense (⑉°з°)-♡)

The writing is really awesome, there is no moisture, the game characters have not collapsed, the newly added game characters have no sense of distortion at all, and the players outside the game are not disgusting, there is no poisonous point. It really made me cry and laugh. The knife gave me numbness, but I couldn't help but laugh [cover face] [cover face] The writing is really, very good. The two words "The writing is really awesome" make me feel like I could become a screenwriter in Midea

Beautiful and so sweet! After Ruola became a hero, her heart was ripped out. Qingge was guarding Liyue, but his left arm was cut off, and he died in battle. In order to ensure the safety of her companions, Yunling Baby cosplayed with Shang Yang. Xiaoya saves the Tree King instead of being forgotten by the world. Even if Fidel dissolves, she still stands by Funina, burning her soul to let the abyss notice her, and using her soul to blackmail the abyss to save Fukalos. It's so sweet, hee hee😁.

It's really beautiful! ! ! I've read this book many times, but never clicked in. I've read a lot of Genshin Impact fanfics, but nothing caught my eye. It's even a bit OOC and has some shadows. But the book you wrote, teacher, is really suitable and very beautiful! The relationship between the characters is also handled very delicately. At first, I was still thinking about how the protagonist can bond with other characters of Genshin Impact without being stiff. This book solves this problem very well. The protagonist's vest and other characters get along very harmoniously in daily life, and they are not abrupt at all. The teacher is really good at writing 5555. The one that impressed me the most is Ruola's, You are really strong 55 55. When I think of the scene where Ruola died, it was really a myocardial infarction. It was really scary. It was obviously a very warm place, but there was something wrong with it. I cried loudly. Teacher, you really wrote it very well. Can you not update it? (Please) I finished reading it in half a day. I am really looking forward to the follow-up development. Teacher, you must keep writing. This book is really, really good! The details are very well written, and there is also a place called Hutao. At the end, when they are walking in the rain, Zhongli comes to hold an umbrella. Their dialogue is amazing. Teacher, how can you write so wellﾍ(;´Д｀ﾍ) Although I was very sad when I died, I am looking forward to it because the plot is well laid out and I will really get into it. If Genshin Impact really has these characters, I feel like every time I open Genshin Impact, I will feel regretful...

The world view is very complete, and the characterization and emotional description are really amazing! Even though I know that the seven pure souls are all vests, I still like them very much and feel sad for them... The platform Tomato is really invincible. You can definitely win the Easter match, right? (2 Stars) [crying] (Editor 3) It's really a journey of wandering, whether it's the second dimension or the third dimension... Ying has worked hard again. No matter what, this is a mountain that cannot be avoided among Genshin Impact fans. There is no place for me to stay here, I have my own place to stay. No matter where Yingma goes, I will follow it!

It's beautiful, the whole text is uncensored, fresh and sweet, and heart-warming [a heart-warming gift]

It's a good-looking character, and the characters are completely non-ooc. The author is definitely a veteran player. He has a deep understanding of each character's personality. Each vest has its own personality charm. Among them, my favorite is Qing Ge, who died fighting for the country, and the bond with the old man. Maybe it's because I like Zhongli better. I'm a bit partial. Liyue is also my favorite among the country. And unlike other books that completely follow the main line and do not follow the routine sequence, this has a sense of novelty and makes people guess which vest is going to die next? [Still laughing? ! Here comes your knife! Hahaha] The character interactions are very real, as if they are alive, and the author's writing is absolutely superb! ! ! Moreover, he also whipped his body, never wasting repeated sword blows. If he died, he would pull him back and kill him again. There was also a knife in advance. An Qi's Zhidong PV, among which the young master was the worst, his sister died, and his good friend who he had a crush on also died. And Diluc, oh my god, the author really didn't let him go. He stabbed him several times, and when he was dead, he pulled him back and blew his body into a mist of blood. It was a little funny, a little tragic, and it made me sympathize with him a little. His parents are gone, and his brother is a traitor in his eyes [including the incident of his father's contribution to the Demon Dragon Dulong]. His sister who has been with him since he was a child has died repeatedly, and his soul has to be devoured. When he goes out to take revenge and rest in a cave, he can see what his sister wrote about this trip. It is really an all-round sword. Really miserable

Welcome to the world of Teyvat, the great sword. Here, you can see Master Lu's sister's body being blown up once after her death; you can see Zhongli's satisfied descendants turn into zombies and actively seek death; you can see the barefoot little cook from the Arataki sect being cut into pieces alive. In short, this is a sunny, pleasant, relaxing and humorous story. Don't believe it? Anyway, only the protagonist and the protagonist's vest died in the end, while everyone else was still alive and well. In a sense this story transcends MiHoYo's story. The pace of the writing is slow and smooth, the details are appropriate, the plot is wonderfully arranged, the characters are three-dimensional and textured, there are no poisonous points, and the pitfalls are basically filled. The ending is not bad, I personally think it's an okay ending. But I can still write more extras. Oh, by the way, and most importantly, the emotions in this article are sincere and delicate. The characters in the book are vivid and colorful, so when they die, you can't help but feel for them. The pain is deep in my heart. It is a very good emotional masterpiece.

B+, the writing needs to be polished, the characterization needs to be improved, the actual experience is less written, but the knife is good, the level of A-, but not surprising enough, suddenly, there is too much reality foreshadowing, the feedback from the players is a bit fake, and the plot is delayed. The overall impression is tepid, not deep enough, and the knife is too dull, but it's good. As long as you keep it up, you won't be far behind. Updated to 61 photos so far. Chapter 416, has quite the style of Ling Luo + Zack. It is still divided into 1 and divided into 7 (the number of mainland films). It is also necessary to fuse the fragments to create a big villain. I hope the ending will not be complicated, such as a certain living female protagonist and the remaining 6 female protagonists (don't do it)

Wow wow wow, it's super, super good-looking and the writing style really suits my aesthetic point. I hope the author will continue to work hard! I will support you until the end! Moreover, Ma Jiawen is the second book I have read, and it is on par with the other Conan book!