When You Are at Hogwarts, Copy the Entries and Become a Top Student!

It's a good read. I hope the author will make more updates. I hope the protagonist will slowly get along with Sri Lanka and his friends, and deepen the relationship and bond. But I hope there is no heroine. After all, the cubs are still young, and pure and sincere friendship is good. It's a bit poisonous [laughing] The protagonist has been careless and blamed himself. He is really speechless and whining. Moreover, the protagonist's combat power has developed too fast. The original villain is not enough to defeat, so he has to make a private one. It's a bit off. The writing is okay, but it makes people angry easily.

9 Points, original male protagonist. It's fun to copy this cheat, but the character is a bit reckless. I feel like I want to be stronger, but sometimes I'm not very smart. In terms of words and deeds, it's hard to say, it just doesn't look good, but there is such a cheat. I haven't seen other similar cheat-finger HP articles.

Five-star support, I feel like this entry is a bit too strong, so I strengthened Voldemort, added new villains and elements of the genocide to balance the combat power, and added a lot of things. It doesn't look like a Harry Potter novel, but more like a Western fantasy novel. Personally, I think it's quite interesting. The protagonist's character is a bit like a child, and the change in attitude towards the world is a bit abrupt. Other than that, it's okay. There are no particularly bad points. It's a great book to read! We have started to put humans into the equipment of the magic hospital, and the results no longer look like HP. I have watched it as a magical alien world.

It's very good and must be praised. I feel that Hermione looks like the heroine but there are not many interactive plots. I hope there can be more plots about Hermione [Blow kiss]

It's just a purely enjoyable book, but if it hasn't reached the point where it's enjoyable yet, you can add it to your bookshelf. , People have also watched a lot of Harry Potter, okay. The plot is just a bit bland. But a new villain has been introduced and has not officially entered the theme. A newly opened book. Need to wait. Long wait.

It's good-looking, mainly because the protagonist's strength improves very quickly, and it's a great read.

Not bad, not bad, I'm finally not in Gryffindor. Author, I'm optimistic about you.

I hope there won't be a female protagonist. So far, it's pretty good. Anyway, I'll try my best to keep up with it. I really like it.

This is one of the best-quality Harry Potter books I've ever read.

It is one of the better-looking fanfics in the Harry Potter series. It has a little bit of its own personal setting, which does not affect the viewing. Anyone who has not watched Harry Potter can understand it. Overall, it is worth watching.

In general, although the content of this book is classic, it is novel at the same time. The rhythm and framework are still well mastered. Although there are some unreasonable things, the flaws are not concealed. The logical processing and emotional description need to be strengthened. The rest is a process that a normal author must go through in his development. I hope the author can keep writing.

The setting is novel and the plot is good, but I'm afraid the author will run away. The authors of several Harry Potter fanfics I've read have run away. Don't run away from me.

This is the first time that I am not dissatisfied with a bad work, and I gave it five stars. If the author's health allows, this fanfic, which is almost completely deviated from the original line, should be very interesting later on. I hope the author will have the opportunity to continue writing the following content. This can be considered a blessing!

Come on ✊, there are not enough Harry Potter fanfics on Tomato. This is already very good, come on! [Top post][top post][top post]

The author can rest assured that this is just because there are too few people watching it. The writing of this book is good, and I think the character of the protagonist is also quite good. He is just an ordinary person, he will get carried away, account for gains and losses, and be distressed and irritated. Come on!

So far, the plot has been written very well. Of course, this does not mean that there are no problems, but the author also said that the plot issues in the book will be corrected, and the author updates very quickly, so I can still look forward to the plot in the future. I am optimistic about you, author, so keep going!

HP World➕Shuangwen➕The protagonist is a genius The plot is not poisonous, you can take a look at it I hope the author will continue to work hard and reach new heights

The structure is clear, multi-dimensional, and the content is light but very organized. It feels more in line with the original work. Of course, there are some things that don't quite fit in, but the author is really sincere.

The plot is very attractive to me. Reading this article makes me want to explore the follow-up, such as where the protagonist can go in the end with herbal medicine, what secrets are there about the microscopic world, and many other questions. Having said that, the only problem is that the author writes so slowly, I almost forgot about meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow meow! ! !

What I saw on the recommendation list is very suitable to my taste. Come on, the author, come on!

It's great, I've read more than eighty chapters in this book. Anyway, it looks pretty good so far. In my opinion it's well worth it. The content is not too slow and the pace is just right. Like it, cheers for the author😊

It looks good, I love reading the author is great, come on

Love to watch, nice to watch Personally, I think this subject matter is quite good. The author is faster, but it would be nice if he could be faster [laughter]

It's good-looking and has its own innovations based on the original work.

At present, it seems that there is no problem on the whole. The plot has added elements of crime. Apart from being small in quantity, only a few plots are a bit toxic. It is still okay and can be watched without thinking.

The writing is pretty good, although some of the plot arrangements are rather deliberate, but Goldfinger's planning is quite good.

There are no thunderstorms in the plot, and the author's attitude is humble and cautious. The character design is not broken (completely), in fact it is already very good (on Tomato)

Not bad, the plot is mostly self-explanatory, there are no reading difficulties, and the quality of the content is a rare quality.

It has a very good second set, and the plot advances smoothly, and the characters are quite fleshed out, at least not annoying. I really like this work! Please keep updated!

It looks good, at least 8 points or above. The golden finger setting is also very interesting. The storyline is also very good. I want to tie it in one go. I don't follow the original plot very much. There are quite a few private settings. I feel that the original plot is just the background of the story. The content of the novel is a new story. The author's writing style is very good.