Apocalypse: Starting from Death Train, I Have Space

The writing is pretty good. Although the front part is a little unsatisfactory, the advantages in the back outweigh the shortcomings in the front. Each of the heroines in the back has their own personality, and there is almost no show-off plot. The overall plot is written relatively smoothly. As for the shortcomings, it feels like there are too many coincidences. It feels like the character who just disappeared in the previous chapter reappears in the next chapter, so the ambush can be added to the daily routine (you know the author) [smile]

It's pretty good. I don't know why the score is so low. Has it been suppressed? Is it because it's too short? [Laughs and cries] But it's a little short. But it's short and sharp, so it's not like no one will watch it, right?

Apocalyptic Train is by far the best book I have read on Tomato, bar none. The protagonist is decisive in killing and the content is lively and interesting. There is still space, but it is a bit lacking. The author should work on more. This is not enough. It is not enough at all [laughter]

It's very interesting, especially the plot in the early stage while still on the death train is very well described. After leaving the train in the middle stage, the direction of the plot becomes a bit subtle. The main line is not very important and not very clear. The little girl in the middle who speaks freely does indeed expose a lot of poisonous points, and the character portrayal there is not very good. Generally speaking, the plot of the train is very novel, with clever ideas and reasonable logic. That part alone can get 5 stars.

A five-star book with appropriate length and moderate human nature.

I don't know why there are so few comments. To be honest, this is the best apocalyptic article I have ever read. Unlike other novels, there are all kinds of betrayals, all kinds of recklessness, and all kinds of selfishness. The protagonist here is humane. He will help those in need if he has the ability. He does not bully others deliberately and has normal views. It is indeed a good novel. It would be better if the third person "he, she" expression could be used more appropriately. It's humane, has its own nature, and has good writing skills. It's a good book. I don't know why the rating is so low. Do readers like reading dark novels where the protagonist is invincible, selfish and cold-blooded? Although they look cool, they are all the same and really not interesting. This book is really written in a way that is more in line with normal people's views, and it also has a touching feeling in the end of the world.

This book is very well written, especially at the end. I almost cried when I read it. It's great. This book is so well written.

Come on, it's very well written.

Is this the end? Very good book

How should I put it? Don't make the ending of the foreshadowing too bleak. Although I'm a bit jealous, I can still accept it. The RV part was too uncomfortable to watch. I hope it will have a perfect ending (support! Support!) [Please update][Please update]

Fresh taste, different ideas, looking forward to the next chapter

10 Points, classic apocalyptic novel, especially on the train, all the tips in life are learned

It feels pretty good, if it could be written better it could be comparable to Tower of Dawn.

The story structure is reasonable and logical, the narrative is smooth, and the emotional description is delicate and touching! Not sure why the score is so low?

I just read Chapter 20 and asked if there are any knives. I am too kind-hearted to see any knives. Please let me know.

A good post-apocalyptic novel with an okay storyline. Maybe it's because the author didn't want to write a long article, so he didn't have the idea of ​​setting up a shelter. Secondly, the writing style of this article is still a little rough, but there is still a lot of room for improvement. Come on!

It's rare that I didn't skip a chapter. Although the ending is a little rushed and the world view is not grand enough, the protagonist's personality is like this. There is no need for all the protagonists to be saved by a grand world view. Small people and small actions can also change the world. Small thoughts and small happiness are also a kind of happiness. This kind of atmosphere is more grounded and more popular with mortal readers. Come on, the author, and look forward to better works.

The emotions are delicate, and the details, especially the description of the inner world of the characters, are impressive. I believe that the author has experienced hardships in life, otherwise he would not be able to write such a good work! Keep up the good work! !

There's just a bit too much suspense.

It looks good, keep working hard

It's really interesting!

It's okay, it's really okay

Well enough. Hope to finish writing

I like listening to it at work

It's nice to watch, but I don't like Yu Jing. Can you write her into a space?

It's very good, I won't get bored watching it and can't stand it anymore.

A very interesting book! Thank you author

Looks good, not bad, although I haven't read many chapters yet

The writing is very good and the content is very substantial, but the women the protagonist meets have mental problems.

The author is imaginative, well written and engaging.