Slay the Gods: The Pure Beauty Journey of a Galactic Street Bum

Dear author, I can feel your most devout love for virtual characters in your writing. I also feel that you want to share your wild imagination. Please allow me as a reader to express my most sincere gratitude to you. Even the flaws in the writing make this novel even better. But please allow me, as one of your followers, to point out to you the analysis of bystanders, so that your writing can be sublimated, and let us be recognized by your imagination. Do you think some of your descriptions are too complex? I mean, can this kind of gorgeous description only be applied to Yinzhi? I'm really sorry. Each of your sentences has its own unique charm, but don't you think that only Yinzhi needs this kind of language? With all due respect, the dozens of chapters so far can be written within ten chapters, but your description of things other than Yinzhi is too prosperous... Just like I can summarize this comment in two sentences, but I still choose to express it to you in this form. This is undoubtedly interesting as a writer and reader, but I think the description that is too full may be... A little tiring. Anyway sir, thank you for sharing. I wish you endless success on this journey and find the recognition that is most important to you.

Okay, very pure and beautiful. The protagonist doesn't look like the actor, but he looks like himself, but the setting is a bit... You can set the protagonist to be Yin Zhi's peer, which would be much better.

It's good to see. Among the few protagonists of Star Railroad fan fiction, they are not just low-quality Destiny Walkers with appearances, but real Destiny Walkers who have their own path from the inside out. However, I hope the author will not design the protagonist to be an agent of the gods. After all, the agents of Star God's gods are those envoys, and the prototypes played by the protagonists are Silver Branch and Jeppa. De, Potio and other pure beauty knights have not become messengers, which makes the protagonist feel a little separated. Of course, it is not that the protagonist is not good, but that pure beauty is a messenger. All the pure knights seem to have that feeling. I feel that the author should give Yinzhi a chance to introduce the Star God system to which he belongs to the Night Watch.

Ah! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Is this a novel I can see on Tomato! ! ! ! ! Totally non-ooc acting! ! ! ! ! The faithful woman hopes to keep her integrity intact throughout her life, allowing the author to have endless inspiration and pure beauty! ! !

The protagonist is suspected to be Yinzhi himself, and it doesn't feel like he is acting. The overall pace is slow, but I really like this kind of daily feeling. It is much better than other fics where the character of God and God is broken. The way the protagonist and Qiye get along is really like the original. I just hope that the protagonist's abilities can be described more. This is really the most authentic Zhanshen fic I have ever seen (it doesn't feel like it was acted).

When I read this book, I felt that Yin Zhi was alive in this world. In ordinary moments and awareness of pure beauty, especially when Yin Zhi saved Zhao Kongcheng, I seemed to see Yin Zhi standing in front of me. Reminds me of the scene in the game where Yin Zhi faces the giant stingworm alone in order to rescue the train crew. It's so cool.

Author, my best friend! Thank you for highlighting the pure and beautiful music with your writing style as delicate as spring water! You are a well-deserved pure beauty knight! To be honest, every time I sit on the bed and read your new chapter, I will feel that my soul has been deeply baptized, washing away the fatigue and the haze in my heart... Finally, please let us shout together: "The pure beauty goddess Idrila is unparalleled in beauty!" The most devout believer of the goddess, would you like to follow another chapter?

It's too pure and beautiful, but the progress is too slow. Is the author just focusing on pure beauty? To balance it, the progress of pure beauty is already 100% and is even being refined [like] but why is the progress of God Killing only 3% [face covering]

I am amazed by the author's pure will! He wrote the pure and beautiful words of "Silver Branch" without exaggeration, perfectly displaying the pure beauty of Silver Branch. He is so pure and beautiful. But the path of the pure knight will never stop. On the way to pursue the pure beauty goddess Idrila, he will never forget to promote the name of pure beauty, and may pure beauty last forever. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

It's quite good. It's not like other fics where everything about gods and characters has collapsed. The description of the protagonist Yin Zhi here seems to be like Yin Zhi's instinct to write an autobiography, but it's a bit small. The pace feels a bit slow, but acceptable.