God-Killing************

Dear author, I can feel your most devout love for virtual characters in your writing. I also feel that you want to share your wild imagination. Please allow me as a reader to express my most sincere gratitude to you. Even the flaws in the writing make this novel even better. But please allow me, as one of your followers, to point out to you the analysis of bystanders, so that your writing can be sublimated, and let us be recognized by your imagination. Do you think some of your descriptions are too complex? I mean, can this kind of gorgeous description only be applied to Yinzhi? I'm really sorry. Each of your sentences has its own unique charm, but don't you think that only Yinzhi needs this kind of language? With all due respect, the dozens of chapters so far can be written within ten chapters, but your description of things other than Yinzhi is too prosperous... Just like I can summarize this comment in two sentences, but I still choose to express it to you in this form. This is undoubtedly interesting as a writer and reader, but I think the description that is too full may be... A little tiring. Anyway sir, thank you for sharing. I wish you endless success on this journey and find the recognition that is most important to you.

Okay, very pure and beautiful. The protagonist doesn't look like the actor, but he looks like himself, but the setting is a bit... You can set the protagonist to be Yin Zhi's peer, which would be much better.

It's good to see. Among the few protagonists of Star Railroad fan fiction, they are not just low-quality Destiny Walkers with appearances, but real Destiny Walkers who have their own path from the inside out. However, I hope the author will not design the protagonist to be an agent of the gods. After all, the agents of Star God's gods are those envoys, and the prototypes played by the protagonists are Silver Branch and Jeppa. De, Potio and other pure beauty knights have not become messengers, which makes the protagonist feel a little separated. Of course, it is not that the protagonist is not good, but that pure beauty is a messenger. All the pure knights seem to have that feeling. I feel that the author should give Yinzhi a chance to introduce the Star God system to which he belongs to the Night Watch.

Ah! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Is this a novel I can see on Tomato! ! ! ! ! Totally non-ooc acting! ! ! ! ! The faithful woman hopes to keep her integrity intact throughout her life, allowing the author to have endless inspiration and pure beauty! ! !

The protagonist is suspected to be Yinzhi himself, and it doesn't feel like he is acting. The overall pace is slow, but I really like this kind of daily feeling. It is much better than other fics where the character of God and God is broken. The way the protagonist and Qiye get along is really like the original. I just hope that the protagonist's abilities can be described more. This is really the most authentic Zhanshen fic I have ever seen (it doesn't feel like it was acted).

When I read this book, I felt that Yin Zhi was alive in this world. In ordinary moments and awareness of pure beauty, especially when Yin Zhi saved Zhao Kongcheng, I seemed to see Yin Zhi standing in front of me. Reminds me of the scene in the game where Yin Zhi faces the giant stingworm alone in order to rescue the train crew. It's so cool.

Author, my best friend! Thank you for highlighting the pure and beautiful music with your writing style as delicate as spring water! You are a well-deserved pure beauty knight! To be honest, every time I sit on the bed and read your new chapter, I will feel that my soul has been deeply baptized, washing away the fatigue and the haze in my heart... Finally, please let us shout together: "The pure beauty goddess Idrila is unparalleled in beauty!" The most devout believer of the goddess, would you like to follow another chapter?

It's too pure and beautiful, but the progress is too slow. Is the author just focusing on pure beauty? To balance it, the progress of pure beauty is already 100% and is even being refined [like] but why is the progress of God Killing only 3% [face covering]

I am amazed by the author's pure will! He wrote the pure and beautiful words of "Silver Branch" without exaggeration, perfectly displaying the pure beauty of Silver Branch. He is so pure and beautiful. But the path of the pure knight will never stop. On the way to pursue the pure beauty goddess Idrila, he will never forget to promote the name of pure beauty, and may pure beauty last forever. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

It's quite good. It's not like other fics where everything about gods and characters has collapsed. The description of the protagonist Yin Zhi here seems to be like Yin Zhi's instinct to write an autobiography, but it's a bit small. The pace feels a bit slow, but acceptable.

Although the character design is very consistent and is the most like Yin Zhi I have ever seen, it is a complete mess. Eighty-ninety percent of the chapter is pure beauty. I believe that not many people in the game will read what Yin Zhi says every time they meet him, let alone fan fiction. And like other fan fiction, they all follow Lin Qiye, follow the dream, follow the adoption, follow the night watchman to buy one get one free, and follow the newbie training. It's completely the same, and I'm tired of reading the routine. I read the original novel once, and then read the fanfic again with basically no changes. I think fan fiction needs to have some changes, at least it cannot completely follow the main line, it must have its own plot. I believe that not many readers like to watch the protagonist level up bit by bit. After all, I have already read the original work once, and it is even more exciting. Also, although the entire story of God-Destroying revolves around Lin Qiye, they are all the same person. Without appropriate changes, there is actually no content to watch. As the same saying goes, it's all about the same person. It's not really necessary to have a female protagonist. If someone writes a fanfic for the work, it proves that the characters of this work are successfully cast. If you don't want to tear down the original CP, you can accept popular single characters. The reason why readers don't want to read novels with female protagonists is because many authors' character settings are too eye-catching, and fan fiction can avoid this very well. Come on [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

The most like a silver branch! Others only write a few fixed lines, which is very human-like! My wife is really awesome! Presumably she must be a member of Pure Beauty in reality! ╰(*´`*)╯

The writing is pretty good, and there are quite a few small combos that are pretty good (it just seems like there are too many, but they seem to be consistent), and there's not much OOC. The progress is a bit slow, I hope it can be speeded up [sending heartfelt wishes]

I don't know what to say after reading it. But there's really nothing to say about the characterization. It doesn't look like acting. It really doesn't look like the actor, I suspect the author is a pure knight. Writing this article is just another way to celebrate pure beauty. However, the speed of the article is indeed a bit slow, but overall I think it is. I just want to say, Zhimen will last forever! Everything is dedicated to pure beauty!

When I read this book, I felt that my soul was sublimating. I found that his words are full of reason and wisdom. Such a book is worthy of being savored by everyone who pursues wisdom. It not only provides entertainment, but more importantly, it inspires us to think deeply about life, human nature, and the world. Just as we pursue truth in dialogue, this book is a key that unlocks the doors of thought and leads us toward deeper understanding. Therefore, I highly recommend this book

Everyone who has read this book has a majestic figure, admired by thousands of people, and unparalleled. The jade tree is facing the wind, both internally and externally, talented and noble, super invincible, proficient, reaching the peak, flying sand and stone, uncanny workmanship, inspiring, candle lighting the world, seeing thousands of miles, rain and dew on the common people, bedding all directions, dragon walking and tiger walking, majestic, majestic, lofty, benevolent and moral, elegant and suave, Selfless, looks like Pan An, but is more talented than Song Yu, flowers are more beautiful than Begonia, you have it, you have it, and you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have the wind on your sleeves, you are virtuous, you have a pure heart, you travel to the mountains, you have high feelings, you have great virtue, you have immeasurable merit, you have good gold and jade, you are bright and virtuous, you have a beautiful heart, you have a pure heart, you are a noble person, you are a person with lofty ideals and a benevolent person. A white crane in the clouds, a man of great splendor, a romantic figure, a dragon and a phoenix, unparalleled in the world, an unrivaled hero, unparalleled, a branch in Guilin, a man of cranes, one of a kind, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, Kunshan tablet jade, peerless and transcendent

It's very, very good, and the characters are very personal. I hope it won't stop updating. It's so delicious. Boss, you must finish it! Never be a eunuch!

I felt a little embarrassed when I first read it, but then I discovered that this kind of writing makes people feel very comfortable when reading it. I am looking forward to the following content, whether I will have a new understanding of pure beauty, just like the snow in winter melting in spring, new insights will be presented, and finally everything is dedicated to Idrila.

The author actually updated it! [Shocked] After reading the second chapter of the Railway New Year, Silver Branch, I was waiting for the update of Silver Branch on a whim. Unexpectedly, ah! Zhimen! The boss of the silver branch chapter really thinks that the scenes in NB are so innocent and beautiful~!

Not to mention anything else, the author is really pure and beautiful. This is a real fanfic. I definitely went to the Pure Beauty Knights to study.

It's not like fake, I got the sublimation of pure beauty, I admit that the pure beauty goddess Idrila is unparalleled in beauty! ! !

One thing to say, the protagonist is really too realistic. This is no longer about the protagonist playing the role, but really bringing a silver branch into the world.

Before I see that light again, I will defend all the beauty in the galaxy until the last moment! Please allow me to declare here that the pure beauty goddess Idrila is unparalleled in beauty!

I was touched by the behavior of the protagonist in this book. I haven't seen such a sincere protagonist in a long time, so true, kind and beautiful, like a real pure knight! Ah~praise the pure and beautiful Star God~!

Although some parts still look weird, it turns out that the author has a very deep understanding of pure beauty, so for Idlila's sake, I give him a five-star [smirk] [blow kiss]

Not bad, there are no problems in all aspects, please come on, author [shy]

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Okay, this is very pure and beautiful. Finally, I have a fanfic that can live up to my imagination and match the original character design.

It is really pure and beautiful. I suspect that the author is a pure knight (there is a picture at the back where all the names are written as silver branches, which is a revelation). Silver Branch (Zhi) is not OOC at all, but because the language is too pure and beautiful, the overall progress is relatively slow. I watched this book slowly until about 8 o'clock, and it is just around the corner!

I admit that the "pure beauty" goddess Idrila is unparalleled in beauty! ! !