Pony*******

Give yourself a five-star rating, even though it may not be well written. . .

So now the protagonist is male or female?

When will the protagonist start conquering Nightmare Moon [Sending Hearts]

There are candies and knives, but there are more candies and more knives, although it is not written [face covering]

It's good to watch. If you like it and don't follow the plot, cheers for the author [Adoration]

Looks good, when can we start teaching and training?

My yandere Luna

Does the author have a perfect ending?

Currently seeing electromagnetic signals. Author, do you want to write to EaW? It feels very dangerous [laughs evilly]

I think it's well written When will those two lovers get married (I don't need to tell them who they are [smile])

I personally feel that the author's emotional lines make me a little anxious, and are not very coherent and natural, whether it is Luna or Nightmare Moon. It was the plot that attracted me. In terms of narrative skills, I feel that the author is very good. As for character creation. Ai Yin is not very typical, nor is her image very vivid, and she looks a little anxious. However, it is difficult to create original characters in pony fanfics, and few pony fanfics have good original character creations. This is due to the fact that Hasbro's My Little Pony series is a work about a children's utopia, and I believe that most readers, like me, only know ponies from the nine seasons of the series. I'm sorry that I can't give examples to discuss the above points one by one. Maybe I was careless and omitted details in the original text, which led to biased understanding. Please bear with me. I still think it is well written, and I hope the author's writing skills will improve day by day.

It feels very good and a lot of fun. As a Lezi person, I look forward to the follow-up fun [laughing]