Zhan Shen: I Am a Watery River God.

Come on, the author💪The writing is very interesting. The character and appearance of the protagonist can be referred to the River God in One Hundred Thousand Cold Jokes [laughing and crying], and there is no change in the character and behavior of the original character in Beheading. It makes me feel comfortable watching it, and there is no sense of fragmentation. When I read other authors writing about God of Beheading fanfic, they wrote all the female characters in such a way that the protagonist is always shy and blushes, which makes me want to curse. After the 100th chapter, it becomes a bit boring and no longer exciting, and the plot starts to drag. For example, the protagonist is a time traveler who knows the whole plot, and his friends around him are killed one by one. The official organization of Daxia is written as if he can't live without the Baili family. In order to highlight the extraordinary strength of the protagonist, the author has to make a rescue every time, just to highlight the handsomeness of the protagonist [laughing and crying] ] There is also the summoning magic. I can accept conceptual characters such as Mario, Tom and Jerry, and Baidu. However, you summon a spider from Demon Slayer and a spider from Kitsune Matchmaker, which are still character-conscious. When I see the character Shimogōgo, I always talk about my family. For the sake of my family, the sense of separation is too strong. People who don't know think I am watching anime.

This book is really good. I found it after watching the video of Jiu Yao Wan. I really like He Fan. [Admiration] It's also fun to interact with the original protagonist Lin Qiye (allow me to take a sip secretly)

Good review! The main character is really cute! Baby He Fan, you are a piece of sea salt-flavored cake (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤. The protagonist has a hot-faced and mean-spirited character. He usually has a dull and fun persona, but he really does it when something happens! It's really easy to get along with Qiye! Cangnan Twin Gods 99 I have finished reading the chapter "God Bless the Mountains and Seas". Fanfan has made many friends along the way! The author actually connected with his own dream. I didn't realize it at first, but when I saw the name Dongqing, I realized it. Fanfan is the greedy cat. I can't help but it's so cute₍^˶ ╸𖥦 ╸˵^₎⟆ ＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿＿ I've finished reading the post-disaster room chapter. The main story is that Fanfan went to a singularity world called "Disaster Recovery Afterlife". On the way, he went back to the God-Slaying World to manage Pangpang wholesale some forbidden items. Then he went to the disaster recovery room to sell forbidden items. Fanfan's friends were also picked up! ୧(๑•̀⌄•́๑)૭ And the rescue by the Nuwa Empress after reaching 100%, I was so happy to see it!

No! Why is it so beautiful! The character design should be based on 100,000 Whys, but this kind of cute and cheap person is really fun, funny and interesting! The only drawback is that there are so few, I can see the latest one at once, please hurry up [cry][cry][Please update more][Please update more]

I have watched it for a long time, it is very funny and has a very cheerful atmosphere. The protagonist is also very abstract, which gives you the feeling that there is nothing like a knife. I really like this book, it has saved me from some difficult situations. Recommended to watch. If you like comedy, you can watch it. Normally I would be very happy to watch it when I have nothing to do

It's been a long time since I've seen such a crazy God-Decapitating novel [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] The protagonist is super funny [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] As long as I think it's reasonable, it's in the river, and everything in the river is under my control [laughing evilly] The Milky Way is under the control of the God of the River [laughing evilly] The Milky Way is also under the control of the God of the River [laughing evilly] Lin Qiye is under the control of the God of the River, so the fifth universe is also under the control of the God of the River [laughing evilly]

There are some subtle knives mixed in the middle of the funny novel, which is not bad. There is still some poison, but I don't care after reading it. After all, I have watched the laugh scene and I have forgotten where the poison is [face covering]

It's so funny. Hahahaha. It made me laugh so hard. I didn't dare to laugh out loud in the middle of the night. I like the image of the river god so much. When I speak, it feels like it's so slow and annoying that it kills people. Hahahaha. I like it! Super love [admiration] [admiration]

It's a very interesting God-Slayer fanfic with its own plot and rhythm. The plot is interesting and lively (I'm used to formulas). I personally think this book has more than a 9.4 Rating. Anyway, I really like this novel.

I just read Chapter 20. It's quite interesting. I also like the river god setting. I checked the comment section and it was mentioned that the highlight moments of the original protagonist have been weakened! I haven't seen it yet, but we definitely write fanfics because we like it. I hope that the original protagonist will not be hidden. Multi-protagonist group portraits are actually good. Of course, these are some small suggestions. One thing is that the author should not have a cp. Every time I see someone with a cp, I feel weird. Maybe it's because in the past, I saw Zhan Shen and they were mostly for the sake of their family and country! ! ! Of course, this is just a suggestion, and the author's writing is very good.

There are only a few good-looking fanfics, the plots are novel and non-invasive. Please support the author. The character of the River God is particularly interesting, and it is reasonable but also a little unreasonable, and unreasonable but also reasonable. Highly recommended

This book is really good, if it is a concept god, it is related to river water. As long as the river is okay, clouds are made of condensed water vapor, water molecules are dense, and high-speed collisions will form electromagnetic fields. Then the author can also use the power of lightning. If Lin Qiye is directly thrown into the river, I think something more interesting will happen.

It's good to watch. The main character is Shi Leng, the river god. Shi Leng's fighting power is reassuring. It turns out that "the Milky Way is also a river" has atrophied by the cerebellum. The author is very good at writing. The taste is still familiar, and the river god is still a familiar river god [laughing]

More interesting than other river gods, the author will update soon, it's so funny!

It's really super pretty! ! ! Come and show them to me! ! ! ! I haven't seen high-quality ones for a long time, and I'm catching up now! To be honest, there are not many God-killing novels that I can read so many chapters in! I really like Tianzun Team! And the one who plays the role of the Four Great Masters, the setting of Cao Thief is also eye-catching! All I can say is... He Fan really loves to poke CP! ! ! My mouth substitute! Young Lin Qiye ~ At the beginning, He Fan made me laugh when he gave Zhao Kongcheng the krypton gold sword. This is the feeling of krypton gold! ! ! ! I feel like I'm too talkative and can't help it, it's so beautiful! ! ! ! Let me see it! ! ! ! He Fanyyds! Now I feel terribly strong. It is the only book I am following up on. Needless to say, it contains so much gold.

I read the first 30 chapters. Tomato can be regarded as one of the best among the God-Slaying fanfics. First of all, the writing style is humorous and witty, with lots of jokes, and it won't make people feel offensive. Then I respect and restore the original work more. Some of the difficult thoughts in Zhan Shen have come true. But there are also some shortcomings, which are where I deduct points. First of all, the main character is left hanging, which I feel puts the author in a bit of a quandary. The main character is playing the role of a river god, and he is most likely from Shi Lengli. So he has a problem, either he is too invincible, but then the plot cannot be written. Either artificially create some flaws and loopholes in the setting, so that the characters can grow, but readers will complain that they are not so weak. The second thing is that after seeing the River God gradually getting on the right track, as the half year progresses, the awakening ability becomes more and more abnormal, which makes me actually have no sense of expectation for the subsequent plot. This lack of expectations is reflected in two aspects. First, I know the plot behind Zhan Shen, and this book will most likely follow the plot, so I have no expectations in terms of plot. The second is that this ability is so strong that I basically don't feel like I'm overturning. So as Shuang Wen, who knows everything, I don't expect the outcome of every battle. In other words, if the charming characters in the original book die, it is purely because the author is feeding them shit, and then there is a high probability that the book will not die in the end. So I know the beginning and the end, and I know the story at a glance, and I have no sense of expectation for the subsequent plot. Why should I come to see this work of yours? I might as well go see God of Destruction. Therefore, this work, judging from the quality of the work alone, may only score below 80 points. But if you look at the judgment criteria of my first sentence, on the Tomato platform, compared with the fan fiction of Zhanshen, it has a score of more than 90 points. So I hope everyone has different opinions.

I really like this style. Mr. Merlin, please keep writing [smile], I love it so much [shy]

It's super good-looking, the writing style is ridiculous, the thinking is unique, and there are many jokes. I can't stop watching it.

It's great. I love watching it. I found it through someone's short play [Shy][Like]

This book is well written, making up for many of the regrets in the original work, and the protagonist has a funny and reliable style, which looks very good, and the author is very powerful, large-scale and detailed. I look forward to the day when old man Merlin finds the author and see if he can give the author a bangfei [smile]. Overall, it is very good. Although I haven't had time to complete the complete Zhan Shen, but I have read a lot of fan fiction. This book is still very well written.

It's so beautiful. I really love seeing this river god. It's really my original Bai Yueguang (✪▽✪)

It's quite good to watch. The original protagonist's character is not broken. He doesn't look too dramatic. He's very unique and interesting. He doesn't steal the scene and doesn't steal the credit seriously. It's comfortable to watch. The author has a lot of imagination and his abilities are not based on a template. I hope it will be updated soon + it won't be unfinished.

It is indeed one of the best among the God-killing fanfics.

Persimmon has many books about slaying gods and river gods, and the covers are pretty much the same, but this one is the best. After reading this one, I couldn't stand the others. The text is good, frequently updated, the number of words is large, there is no heroine, He Fan is invincible, the character is good, and the regrets are smoothed out. Reasonableness is from the river. It steals the spotlight and the limelight is unparalleled.

It's so funny. It makes up for a lot of regrets. All members are at their best.

What a young author~ The writing is really good~ I'm looking forward to the plot in the future~

This is really good, funny and interesting. It is not like the one written by the fan next door which is embarrassing as hell. Even though I have never read Zhan Shen, I think it is very interesting. The fan next door is also speechless and has no words to say. Some cliche or very embarrassing words. I won't say which book it is from, you all know it.

It's beautiful, I love watching it, it's interesting

Very good 👀, the teacher's writing style is very good, and the sense of substitution is very strong

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