Glacier************

I thought this book would be disappointing, but it turned out to be beyond my expectations and extremely interesting. The changes in this book are relatively large, but I think it's just right. The change in perspective in the whole book is the most shocking to me, which is the change in the protagonist's concept. When I reached a consensus on my ideas, I was angry at the beginning of the change. I almost thought it was a poisonous point. It turned out that I underestimated the author's writing level. You convinced me with a chapter of great principles👀You can read the specific content for yourself It is from here that the book begins to reach its climax. The first part is a little dull, but it is also interesting. It is similar to the scene at the beginning of most apocalyptic novels, where the conflicts between the survivors directly change the situation later on. However, I still have something to suggest: "None of the following plots have happened, they are purely personal suggestions", How about hiring more robot minions, making them more capable, and then delegating some authority to ordinary people to do some security and play around. The main thing is that the feeling between humans will be more shocking and the emotional expression will be more, similar to the feeling of a young master and a bitch, but a little more sublimated. This cannot be replaced by robots, but the focus of security is still left to robots. The safety of the protagonist is definitely no problem. Needless to say, I suggest you add some identity bracelets. The new currency system. Currently, there is no heroine, but my advice to the heroine is not to be too accustomed to it, be fierce yet soft, soft yet strong, cold yet warm, I'm afraid you won't understand. "The following plot is strongly recommended to be read carefully by the author" Let me explain, the heroine usually has a fierce temper. These only reflect the flirtation in the plot, but it is not the temper of a young lady. You can reflect this kind of personality, but you cannot reflect his negative side. This needs to be controlled. A strong female character knows martial arts, but the protagonist cannot beat her. If she is a female protagonist, the next point is Write simply 1 is to let him do nothing. The heroine is only responsible for ordinary flirting and does not participate in any management or rescue plots, because overflowing sympathy will lead to madness. This is a simple method, very direct. As long as the heroine's plot is controlled only between the heroine and the protagonist, the heroine's error tolerance rate will be very low. 2. If the plot requires it, the heroine has 3 external viewpoints. (1) I listen to the male protagonist, (2) I listen to the male protagonist but I give him advice (3) I support the male protagonist no matter what. The female supporting character should also try to be like this. If not, then write him to death. The above content can also be suitable for the subordinates.

You can see, but I don't like mechanical body modifications

Remember Zheng Yuanjie? That fairy tale writer once published a story. Do your words have to be so vulgar?

So far, I can see that

It's pretty good. Apart from the fact that his character is a little bit crazy [laughing], he can be made a little more mature, so that he has the temperament of a person in power and in a superior position.

Keep up the five-star rating.

A new beginning, come on

Not bad, I finally have a good book

It looks good, come on author(ง •̀_•́)ง