(No heroine + no system + probably an Ultra spirit + it shouldn't be a cool novel)
[This is a story of light defeating darkness]
[Hero, we need a hero, heroes are necessary]
What is the beginning of the mutation? Maybe it was Gomes who appeared that day, or "Ultraman", or the shining Ultra Star in his hand, all of this is unknown.
(The introduction is weak, please read the text)
Reader comments
Well written, support King Red
Now that I've finished, let's just say a few words.
The book Tomato is most similar to him at the moment is Tiga's Weird Ao, followed by Lao Ma's Saiwen and his neighbor Meng Yao. The small competition also makes the plot of this book very novel.
But this book also has shortcomings. The first one to bear the brunt of is the update problem, which is unstable, small and short.
Then there is the writing style. The turning points in many places are too stiff and feel weird, making it uncomfortable and unnatural to read. After the author has finished writing, you can read it again, polish it, add a little embellishment, segment it, and add punctuation. This will be much better.
I can't see the rest at the moment. After all, there are only twenty chapters, so don't stop updating them.
Can the author update 10 times a day [smile][smile][smile]
I wish the author an endless supply of imagination and inspiration. The update speed is explosive, with each chapter containing several thousand words.
Well written, support King Red
Now that I've finished, let's just say a few words. The book Tomato is most similar to him at the moment is Tiga's Weird Ao, followed by Lao Ma's Saiwen and his neighbor Meng Yao. The small competition also makes the plot of this book very novel. But this book also has shortcomings. The first one to bear the brunt of is the update problem, which is unstable, small and short. Then there is the writing style. The turning points in many places are too stiff and feel weird, making it uncomfortable and unnatural to read. After the author has finished writing, you can read it again, polish it, add a little embellishment, segment it, and add punctuation. This will be much better. I can't see the rest at the moment. After all, there are only twenty chapters, so don't stop updating them.
Can the author update 10 times a day [smile][smile][smile]
I wish the author an endless supply of imagination and inspiration. The update speed is explosive, with each chapter containing several thousand words.