My Wife Ran Away When I Was over 100 Years Old? I Started Cultivating Immortality!

Not bad, this fantasy novel is well written, and the plot development is quite in line with my wishes. There are just some unreasonable things that still need to be improved, but they don't matter anymore [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [stunned] [stunned]

How to put it, first of all, the process of acquiring a girl is very obscure. If it were not for the subsequent dialogue between the characters, no one would know what they are doing (I think other novels directly tell the readers what they are going to do next, but the process is not written. Why doesn't the author write it?); Secondly, although this system is not a villain system, it has the disadvantage of the villain system [face covering] that it cannot directly kill the son of luck, and Xie Qiu was not killed immediately. I was shocked when I saw this; Finally, the advantage of emm is that it is a harem story. The protagonist does not have any ink when he takes in a daughter. As for the level, it feels like it increases with the needs of the plot, similar to how Xiao Yan likes to save people. I will continue to read and comment on the rest later.

Not bad, not bad, much better than some of the same type [face covering]. Some divorced in their later years, and their ex-wives appeared in the first chapter, but never appeared again.

The plot progress and logic are very good

Not bad and pretty.

Very interesting article

So pretty