Traveling Dragon in Another World

I just saw the latest chapter 146, it's great! There is no classic template. For the time being, the author's principles and ideas for developing the protagonist's abilities are very satisfying, and the territory is also managed well. Unlike other similar novels, you can directly learn a certain skill without any details. At least in the development in this book, you can see the development progress and principles, which greatly enriches the content and sense of immersion. The only major shortcoming is that there is a problem with the rhythm. It can be seen that the author wanted the protagonist to have a team at the beginning, but due to physical reasons, his level could not be improved, but the protagonist developed horizontally too quickly compared to other partners. The protagonist should follow the legion style, right? Now the three companions can only be used as elite/hero units in it. Moreover, the influence of the protagonist is too far away from that of other partners, making it difficult for other partners to catch up, making it difficult to realize their personal characteristics and not being up to par with the protagonist. There is also the fact that the protagonist has developed too little of his own abilities, except for the wave of sword intent. Only by improving his own strength can he better match the development speed of the legion. Another suggestion is that based on the above problems, the author can take advantage of the year before the breakthrough time to arrange for other partners to separate and develop their own reputation and strength in their own fields on the grounds that they are too different from the protagonist. The protagonist can also learn on his own, a bit like One Piece and go to the new world together every two years. In this case, there can be a new beginning in the plot, the partnership and status can be restored to equality, and a big goal can be redefined. After all, going to the stars and the sea is barely considered the current goal, but people with a discerning eye know that it will not be a thing in the near future, so during this year, you can write that the protagonist finally develops aerospace technology so that the goal is no longer far away, or the protagonist's power develops to the point where the territory can stably supply resources and supply lines, and then the country issues a mission: short-term goal - organize a group to cross the wilderness plains to explore the opposite side for the country and establish an outpost. In this way, the team relationship that is about to become unbalanced can be reintegrated, or the second option is to abandon the team and form an army directly. It is also a good way to deal with it. After all, in this way, the protagonist's space can be fully utilized without worrying about others finding out. It is estimated that it will have to wait until the protagonist can create a teleportation array to cover up this ability outside, and this option is obviously not achievable in the short term. Five-star praise is presented! Will comment later. I hope the author will continue to improve his writing, as it is very difficult to find template articles that are not so slap-happy.

I'm finally done with my work🥲, and I've started to update recently. My plot is advancing too slowly, and I write a lot at once🤣. I try to update a few more chapters every day. I originally thought that the first book would be one million words long, but at my current pace, it will take one million words to cultivate the 5-line Shadow Dog Corps😀. Can anyone give me some advice? How to condense the content and still make it look good👀

It's well written and has new ideas. I haven't grown up after listening to the book for 372 chapters. The pace is a bit slow, but it's okay. The four-person team of protagonists has always been the protagonists who have given out nothing in return. At first, they said that they had S talent to divert their attention. Later, they made so many big moves, and it was useless. They are still a four-person team. One childhood sweetheart feels that they don't give as much as the other two. They are not the boss, but the other two have no sense of boundaries. Every time I see it, I feel a little uncomfortable, so I just listen to the back.

Sweet childhood sweethearts, extraordinary technology mixed with a bit of novelty of artistic conception, following the legion flow to meet various pet companions, the feeling of one person becoming a leader and being accompanied by the rise of a great country, but it is a bit lacking, the second brush is not enough, and there is also an alien world with a foreshadowing pen. I hope it doesn't trap you after I've buried it for a long time.

Chapter 629, apart from the fact that the protagonist is underage, there is nothing else to comment on.

Not bad, it's a good book and can be read for a while.

It is indeed a new book for a newbie [laughing and crying] I used too many adjectives and metaphors in the early stage, but it got much better in the middle and later stages. It gets better and better after entering the state. It is so rare that pure water starts to turn into water + thunder. I have been following it to the latest chapter. Good luck, author!

Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, so good-looking

The book is much better than most tomato novels, but the title seems to be about a few years old. If it were changed, more people might read it.

It feels very good, at least it is more in line with my personal taste. Why are there so few book reviews?

It's great, the angle is novel, and it's very refreshing

It's very interesting, and although there are some minor issues, it suits my taste.

Overall it's a pretty good read.

Beautiful, very exciting

I hope the protagonist will make some choices and grow up

Personally I think it's pretty good

Champion Flying General Big Baby Big Sister

Let me ask, is the male protagonist's partner male or female?

Author, you have written about popularization even after promotion Author, you have too many typos. Please correct them. Change the name, it doesn't suit tomatoes. Author, you are a bit lazy and don't even think of chapter names.

After reading the beginning, I thought it was good. Come on

The world view is pretty good, but the main character is too awesome.

The plot development is simple, the details are not obvious, there are no major problems, and it is passable.

Very real, patient and showing true feelings

I wonder if the author is writing a novel with a female protagonist?

The law suits my taste