Zhanshen: I Became Lin Qiye's White Moonlight

The author's writing style is not bad. Lin Qiye joined the Night Watch because of Chen Mo. I was completely offended. The author should develop their emotional line quickly and write more about the interaction between the two of them. It is very interesting. Please update it quickly. I give you full marks! [Cry]

It looks very good so far. Slowly change your feelings instead of blindly falling in love right away. Lin Qiye, please kill this Doctor Chen quickly. [Sending my heart] By the way, the protagonist of All is also very sweet, and An Crucian and the protagonist are also very friendly.

It's a very good story. I hope to add more details about the identity of the Lord of the Red Moon, and the protagonist gradually regains consciousness. Of course, it would also be good to add some chatter with Lin Qiye, but I hope the protagonist is a heartthrob. The one with the Shura field is the best [shy]

I think this book is worth at least 9.8! ! It's beautiful, it's really nice, it's really nice, it's really nice (say important things n times)! ! ! ! 💗Qi Mo Xiao CP and the two of them are so sweet! So sweet! That is to say, the author will cheer you up ^ω^ and will always support you! And all the supporting characters are great assists! People watching are in a good mood.

I really like it, the setting is okay, there are not many obtrusive things, and the daily interactions are very natural. I only have one wish, and that is Qiye x Chen Mo, not Chen Mo x Qiye. Nothing else matters, please keep writing Although, I am Brother Yan and Du Wei. Xiao Chen Mo can be with anyone who has cp feelings, but I feel a little uncomfortable having an affair with Brother Yan, but this article is okay and I can accept it.

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The plot is very interesting. Although the writing style is not very good, it is just within the range that I can accept. Moreover, the last two chapters feel better than before. I feel that the author has made great progress [Thoughts]

This is the best one I've read so far among the God-Zhan fans. There's no serious OOC or a lot of memes. The characters are well-developed, the emotions are conveyed naturally, and the writing is also good [Love] I hope the author will update it soon. It's not enough, not enough at all. Author, can you finish it all at once and scare us [shy]

It's very interesting, CP Lin Qiye. Currently, Lin Qiye has awakened, but the protagonist has not yet... The content is very rich and creative... I just want to find out the identity of the protagonist when, I am so anxious! I both understand and I don't understand...(｡ò ∀ó｡)

It's good to read. I finally found a CP about two men in the Seven Nights. It's not easy [crying] (the previous one was blocked before I finished reading it). I hope they can have more sweets [blowing kisses]

The fried chicken looks good! 1. It is one of the best love scenes with 071 among all the fics I have seen. 2. The storyline is also very coherent, with echoes of the previous and later ones. It is very good and does not have the feeling that the plot is too messy. 3. Although this book has elements of cheating by the protagonist, I feel good about myself and not very Long Aotian. 4. The only drawback is that I just have to read it! Although the author updates it twice a day, it is so good. As soon as I saw the update, I clicked on it to follow the update. Who knows me, I am not a person who likes to follow the update, but I really can't help it. 5. The plot progress is a bit slow. Actually, I have read the latest version now, and I have some doubts and worries about whether I will write hundreds of chapters (a little scared), but I still like it very much and don't want the author to end it hastily. All in all, it's super, super good-looking. I hope Chen Mo and 071 can make a dark room Having said that, the title is Bai Yueguang who became 071, will Chen Mo be okay? But it is indeed in line with the relationship status of 071 and Chen Mo.

Knock well! ! ! What a great year! ! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] The author will update it soon! ! !

It's good-looking. The corners of my mouth turned up unconsciously when I saw the interaction between Dr. Chen and Qiye. It made me smile so much that my mother thought I was going crazy. The content was too little, and I couldn't watch it every day.

It's so beautiful! Forgive me for my lack of words, but Lin Qiye and Chen Mo are so cute!!! My aunt couldn't stop laughing throughout the whole thing. ૮(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)ა

Ah ah ah ah, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good, give me fire [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] My favorite Zan Shen fan [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

It's still very good, although it's a little OOC occasionally, but it's still very good for people like me who have been reading fan fiction for a long time [Love] [Like this post] [Please update]

I've read a lot of God-Slaying Shuangnan Lords, and this one is really good to read. At the end of the year, I pull to the extreme, I like this feeling The author said that 071 may play forced sex in the future, and I like it even more

Beautiful, love watching. I just don't know when the protagonist and Lin Qiye will be reunited

It's very good-looking. As long as you can accept that Lin Qiye is gay, I will directly recommend it. It's good-looking.

It's beautiful, it's sweet (for now), and I can't wait for when it comes to forced love. . .

Oh my god, who can understand? The writing style is really good. No one is a vassal of the two strong men, and Chen Mo will not go back and wait for Qiye to save him. He is the kind of personal charm who will rely on himself to solve problems, especially feeling [eat melon]. The overall writing style is very emotional, not a cliché love at first sight, it is based on what happened later and Brother Mo's protection of Qiye. I personally understand this heartthrob buff, first of all Seeing that Chen Mo is attracted to Chen Mo is just because of the role of Zhuangjing Shenxu. It should just be about making friends, not falling in love with him. This is probably a fanfic that I like very much. It will not occ make fans of the original work (me) feel that the character design is very consistent with the original work. If you want to watch the God-Destroying fanfiction, I don't have much problem with it. . . [Cover face] Well, it's not that I didn't read it carefully because I didn't have enough time. I watched it offline before and couldn't keep up with the progress. . . This book is really good [eat melon] (read more, there is a lot at the bottom [face covering]) If you like it, read it, but some characters in the article are a bit weird, and you can't put it into words, but it's not a big problem, the emotional line is quite obvious, but Chen Mo should not be able to see the thick single arrow on 071, if you want to Watching Fast Food Love (I like it...) Is indeed a bit slow. After all, 071's arrow is quite thick➖Ha, I feel like Chen Mo still can't accept 071's feelings for him. He should have to work on it later, and the progress should not be too fast, but I will still look forward to it if there is force in the future [Thinking]

It's beautiful, I like it very much. I know I can be resurrected, but the writing made me cry😭

It's very interesting and well-written, but it's very special and not enough to read. I beg you, the author, to update it quickly. Overall, the writing is really good, and the relationship between the protagonist and Lin Qiye is also well written. But, right now, there are a few small knives, which is not a problem at all, but why do you feel that there will be a big knife later?

I love watching it, it looks good, I just need more C's.

Fortunately, it's very interesting. The early chapters (the first dozen or so chapters may not be very interesting because they are newly written and the writing style is a bit poor), but it becomes more and more interesting in the later stages. [Note] The protagonist is very powerful, but he is not the kind of invincible one who can fight all over the world! ! (Fortunately not [laughs]), growth type? Probably so. I tied it in two days. The plot of the training part developed slowly (I really like that part hehehe. Small spoiler: the protagonist will become a "deserter" near the end of the training) Come on, author💪💪💪💪

You are simply a miracle of human aesthetics. The snow is deep in winter, the fire is cold, and the water is warm, but you smile and see the spring breeze. What a peerless beautiful girl, with a face that comes once in ten thousand years. I think you are a nobleman with his own halo who came out of Raphael's painting! That's why God is more partial. What kind of clothes do you have? Even wearing a sack can lead fashion. Do you know why the dinosaurs became extinct? Because their forelimbs were too short to applaud your beauty, they were so sad that they died. What kind of peerless beauty is this, with a face that only appears once in a million years? I think she is a nobleman with an aura who comes out of a Raphael painting! That's why God is more partial

This is the 7th Zhanshen fanfic I've read! ! Good-looking! Good-looking! Come on, author! ! Don't put the knife in! !

The writing is very good. I feel that after reading this book, I can't read other Zhan Shen 071 fanfics. As for what is better... Emm, I personally think Chen Mo's image is quite vivid? It feels pretty good anyway! (I don't mean the delicate one) The plot is also very different from the original work of Zhanshen (although there are some differences, but this is normal, after all, there is an extra living person in the plot, and the plot is subtle) The character Jialan has not been kicked out, which is good. One thing is that the author's updates are very regular and very user-friendly without being pretentious (I saw that the author would consider using some good ideas that are helpful to the plot)... I have always felt that the fandom is very difficult to mix. The author's writing is really good... I can't finish it, so just watch it yourself. I got bored and came to follow up on the review. I saw that it's actually a bit tiring now. The relationship line is a bit twisty and we haven't gotten together yet. Maybe it's because I've seen too many fast food romances, but I like the author very much👌🏻

The best fan fiction I have seen so far [Adoration][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses] The plot and the emotions of the protagonist are very well written. Other fanfics are a bit dull and... The emotions are not well written) The author's writing is beautiful. I love [Admiration][Admiration][Flowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses] More to come!!!

The author is beautiful, handsome, kind and generous. He writes very well, his ideas are very original, and his writing style is not censorious. It is normal to score 9.1 Points! But... How do you update a chapter these days? Not enough, not enough at all! Dear author, for the sake of my five-star rating, please give me more [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] please