The Master of Cultivating Immortals in the Last Days Starts with a Grocery Store

It's okay. The male and female protagonists are well designed and the characters are micro-group portraits. The ending feels a bit rushed. . . The male and female protagonists are so happy and should have a better ending. The male protagonist is indeed a background, but he can't have a background. They didn't explicitly say that they are together at the end. [What] Now I feel that non-CP people will be unhappy after watching it, and those who love watching CP will be choked by it. The overall plot is pretty good, and it's a very interesting article. The author's writing style is okay, and the extras are also good to read. It completes the story of the hero and heroine when they first met, and the emotional description is very delicate. But I really can't accept this ending. I feel like the heroine is also emotional. I understand that love is not as important as career, but I really can't accept this ending [crying]

It's good that the subject matter is very novel and the plot is not procrastinating. It was a pleasure to read, and there was no stupid plot between male and female protagonists. Deliberately delaying time. Or there was a misunderstanding and I didn't say it on purpose. Very good, the subject matter is very novel, I loved reading it. Okay, it feels a little bit unfinished. It ended very hastily.

It looks good. It looks good. The male protagonist ends up with the female protagonist. It's really good. The ending is good for me. Even the female protagonist is too ruthless. She abandons the male protagonist and leaves her lonely for a hundred years. In the end, she spends her life to find the female protagonist ten thousand years later. I don't understand this. Although this is just for the sake of bluntness and for the future, the female protagonist is too ruthless and a bit abusive to the male protagonist. The male protagonist can be said to have fallen in love at first sight. Well, the name of the male protagonist is not very good, a bit unpleasant. Although the ending is good, he left with the female protagonist in the end and there is no information about returning to that world. I personally think this is a new theme and it is very interesting to watch. ! ! ! !

The story setting of this book is not bad, it is really good-looking, and there are no flaws. The heroine is cool, lively, and a little bit evil. She is not merciless and will take action when it is necessary. Moreover, the heroine practices immortality and killing, which is great ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧ The so-called salvation and opening of a store in the apocalypse are related to the heroine's chance of ascension. It does not mean that the heroine becomes a good person and ends the apocalypse, but it is equivalent to her providing resources and people buying the crystal core through their own abilities. This is very good, and the randomly changing locations of the stores in the article are quite fun, and the employees that the heroine recruits are also quite fun, none of them mess around, have no flaws, and the supporting characters are not brainless. There is a male protagonist, but his role is not that important. Just like the female protagonist's minion, the character design is also okay, and occasionally there are interspersed with their previous acquaintances and encounters, which is quite sweet [blowing kiss] Six hundred and sixty-six, it's finished so quickly, with just over a hundred chapters... Heartbreak, such a good subject matter and the male and female protagonists

It is a fairly new subject matter. Although the author said that he is not good at writing emotional dramas, I think it is precisely because of this youthfulness and immaturity that it fits the emotions between Baili Xingci and Xun Mo in my heart. In my opinion, Xingci has actually been soft-hearted towards Xun Mo for a long time, but he still has a soft heart. I didn't notice much, um... To be honest, the writing style on the main line of post-apocalyptic management is indeed lacking. Sometimes the description is a bit over the top, but it's still acceptable. Anyway, it's a pretty good book, and the extras are also particularly sweet [shy]

It's pretty good. There are no surprises for me at the moment. I quite like the heroine's character. She is the best in terms of her cold beauty. She rarely speaks provocatively but is direct and unkind. Sometimes she has a bit of a bad taste. Hahahaha. The funniest thing is that the cool guy is no longer the cool guy. Hahahaha. The male protagonist is also a human being. For me, the male protagonist doesn't have any surprises at the moment. I hope the author will continue to update and the heroine's character will not collapse.

Personally, I feel that this article is well written, but there are some minor flaws in the numerical values. But the short story between the supporting characters is quite well constructed. The heroine is also very straightforward and straightforward in her actions. I like this type of heroine. As for the character of the male protagonist, I think it's pretty average. It's mainly because I've seen so many of this type that I don't feel much about it anymore. Personally, I don't feel that the cp of the female protagonist is particularly strong. Since this is a post-apocalyptic business story, I don't really care about CP. I hope the author will continue to work hard and never play the role of a heroine.

I have read the full text. The male and female protagonists are strong, but the ending is a bit fast. It would be better if it were written more. The male protagonist, the Demon Lord, also traveled through time for love. The female protagonist recruited several clerks who are also strong. The female protagonist saved the final world from destruction after traveling for thousands of years. In the end, the female protagonist's body was destroyed and she became a god. After the end of the apocalypse, the superpowers became ordinary people again.

It's good to read. The emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists in this book are well written. Unlike other books where the male protagonist calls the female protagonist a greasy girl from the beginning, I still hope that the female protagonist can be with the male protagonist. Alas, but the female protagonist becomes a god in the end, and the final ending is not considered a BE, but an OE ending, but it is much better than the BE ending.

The low rating may be because many people think that the male and female protagonists are incompetent, but I think the ending is very good. The female protagonist has no love brain from beginning to end and is very sober. Men are just supplements and career is the most important. This idea deserves five stars.

Emmm, this book can actually be considered an open ending. The male and female protagonists did not explicitly say that they want to be together in the end. It is just that the male protagonist mainly follows the girl, but I will just treat them as if they are together. ˙ᗜ˙ It's very nice, and the whole article looks really cool.

🥰It's a very interesting post-apocalyptic story. I was scared to death when I thought Chi Yao was the male protagonist at first, but now this male protagonist is super good! There are not many emotional lines. Will the author consider writing about the three years they spent in the world of immortality in a side story?

The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and tactful, simple but not vulgar. It is worth reading. A large number of spoken words from daily life are used to make the article more natural and friendly. The beginning is extraordinary and attracts readers. The ending ends with... Point out the end, which is subtle, timeless and meaningful. The narrative of the full text is concentrated, without branches or branches, the language is simple and smooth, and the emotions are sincere and touching. The young author observes carefully and narrates in an orderly manner. The content of the article is novel, the structure is reasonable, smooth and coherent, and natural and accessible. The details are described with great ingenuity. Very knowledgeable. The details are described with great ingenuity. Very knowledgeable. The article will be presented to readers with rich imagination and colorful language. "We all love exquisite falsehoods and are tired of mediocre truths. We wish every novel could have ups and downs of plot and enjoy the sense of immersion in the protagonist's extraordinary life." Under the incandescent light that has the ability to turn everything in the world into a gloomy corpse, Luo Xu is still lifelike. He is so beautiful that even being in hell cannot destroy his beauty. It's a tragedy, but in the end there is light and hope. The ending, and the meaning of the novel's existence, is nothing more than to strengthen people's beliefs and let people see that life is worth living. Those things that we cannot resist, cannot change, but make us defeated, are called fate. The article will be presented to readers with rich imagination and colorful language. The details are described with great ingenuity. Very knowledgeable. This article is based on real life, with appropriate material selection, very innovative, clear paragraphs, natural transitions, full of interest, and strong readability.

It's so beautiful. I hope the author will update it soon. Don't stop updating. ! ! ! !

A post-apocalyptic grocery store with a novel setting and an invincible heroine. The group portraits and protagonists are a little lacking in the excitement of reading, but they look quite comfortable and distinctive. Basically, they are the latest. Good reviews~

This is a rather special post-apocalyptic novel. The heroine is a cultivator in the world of immortality. She travels through the post-apocalyptic world to save the world and ascend. The hero is not really a hero. There is no emotional line. It can only be regarded as the so-called unrequited love of the hero. The hero and heroine can only be called companionship or follower. The group portraits in this article are well done.

It's good, but the love line is not too sweet, but it's not sad either. How can I put it, it can be considered as a companion forever. I only watch sweet ones with love lines. This one is stuck between what I can accept and what I can't accept [face covering]

It's very interesting ~ the female protagonist is very strong, the male protagonist devotes himself to her, respects her very much and listens to her ideas. The heroine is also calm, has great love, and is not the Holy Mother ~ Very good Baili Xingci Very good Xun Mo~ Recommended!

Very good, the heroine was well portrayed, and all the foreshadowing was filled in. Although the heroine existed in another form and did not fall in love with the hero in the final ending, it was still a happy ending. Moreover, it leaves room for our imagination. Will the male and female protagonists have an outcome? I am looking forward to a small side story [Thinking]

The heroine is powerful and has the compassion of God, but if she is not the Holy Mother, she will not be punished if she should be killed. The male protagonist is also strong, and he especially likes the female protagonist, but he is not the kind to take things by force. Until the end, the male protagonist is like the shadow of the female protagonist, silently accompanying her

It's really beautiful. I cried when I saw it at the end. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Brother Mo finally got a beautiful sister, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Overall, I feel very comfortable. He is just a boss. He has strength but does not show off. He does not fail to take action when it is time to take action. It does not make people feel ink. Unlike some saviors in some stories, he is involved in everything.

The writing is very good. The plot is very exciting, the male and female protagonists are powerful and strategizing, and everything is under control. The heroine does whatever she doesn't like, and sometimes helps others if she likes her. Everything depends on her heart. Although she is here to save the world, she is not a saint at all and only grasps the general direction. The emotional line is also very natural, not too greasy, but the affection can be seen. The male protagonist is like a clingy big dog, and even though his soul is damaged, he chases him from the world of immortality. Everything puts the female protagonist first.

Open ending - Qing Leng, the female protagonist who is about to ascend to the top of the killing gang, falls in love with the male protagonist at first sight. Overall, it's a heart-warming short story about saving the world. The female protagonist is the strongest and she doesn't hesitate in her actions. It's so enjoyable.

It was a good read, I finished it in one sitting. The ending is a bit regretful. A Ci and Xun Mo are equal in everything except their feelings. She is cold and he is restrained. In A Ci's heart, her path definitely ranks first, and it's pretty good, but the ending is not a happy ending in the traditional sense of getting married, getting married, and having children. The two of them finally spend time together. I am very grateful to the author for allowing me to read this novel with clever conception, delicate description, and novel plot. This is only the first novel. It is amazing. I wish you write better and better, and the data of your works will continue to rise! 🌹🌹🌹

Let me give you a good review first. Although it's only 63 chapters, so far, it's the one I like. It doesn't have many ups and downs, but it's stable and reassuring [laughs] The female protagonist is very strong, and the male protagonist is refreshing and not greasy. The way the two get along is the kind of companionship that I like. You can understand each other's meaning just by looking at each other or saying a word. I really love this kind of silent companionship and tacit understanding of each other [Sending Hearts] The names of the male and female protagonists, including the names of many of the supporting characters, are all very nice. I'm really looking forward to the plot behind it. Good luck, author! !

I have read 70 chapters so far, and the subject matter is relatively new. The first few dozen are quite attractive, but after reading dozens of chapters of upgrading, collecting employees to sell goods, someone causing trouble and showing off their skills, solving the troublemaker and continuing to upgrade, it gave me a sense of repetition. But in the future, I guess it should be a story about finding the other four stones. I think there is nothing interesting, mainly because there are relatively few emotional lines, but the occasional interaction between the male and female protagonists is also quite sweet. I recommend this if you want to see a career-oriented heroine.

The writing is very good, very good, very good. The reason why I didn't give it five stars is that I don't really like the ending of the emotional line. Although I don't know how to write this ending to be reasonable and make me like it [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

It looks good, and the writing is also good. One star is missing because the ending feels a bit rushed. I don't think it's a he, but it's not a be either. Maybe it's an oe [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

The heroine has a clear goal, and the ending is predictable and reasonable. As long as the hero feels sorry for the heroine, I won't find it difficult to let them go. This ending should be considered the best ending. It's good to be with her forever.