Reborn, I Am Ye Wang's Number One Career Fan

This is posted by a newbie. I was afraid that the comments would be invalid, so I checked for three more days. Judging from the detail of the article, I can feel that the author wrote it very seriously and professionally. When I first saw Xuanxuan's feelings for Yaozi, I thought it was very attractive at the beginning. It felt like the rhythm of a sour story. But as I watched it, I suddenly realized that the love affair was in the majority and the feelings were in the minority. I felt that Yaozai was cool, and it was a bit difficult for Xuanxuan to pursue her husband. Then the author's writing style should not be read by anyone. You can try to push the book shortage, and the alley is afraid of the deep wine. Secondly, I feel that the author could revise Xuanxuan's life experience or character design, because although Xuanxuan is the male protagonist, I feel that the character design lacks a cuteness. For example, well... I prefer the kind of beautiful, strong and miserable or the wife-human-machine character. Once I see this kind of character, I can't help myself. I like it very much and pity him. However, Xuanxuan is too soft and smooth, which makes it difficult for me to feel pity and love for him. The author can try and read some representative novels about being pursued, and depict Xuanxuan's love in detail. Because I am also a little transparent, the above are just my personal thoughts, you can also ignore them. I think the author has great potential. You can consider it carefully and make revisions when there are few people. I believe you will be able to write better and better! Come on come on

The advancement path of professional e-sports players is added to the rebirth plot, so that the great gods on the field become flesh and blood and come alive. The author loves e-sports very much, and their lives also have ups and downs. Each team member is also growing rapidly through training, and will also face the difficulties of network information.

I finished reading "Rebirth: Jungle Brother, How about I Become a Shooter for You" in one sitting! From silently chasing stars to walking side by side, Lu Xuan's journey of rebirth is full of passion and emotion. The two male protagonists interact with each other very lovingly. One works hard to get closer, and the other responds gently. They achieve each other's success in pursuing their e-sports dreams. The author interweaves dreams and emotions, making people immersed in it, awesome!

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It's a very good e-sports article As far as the characters are concerned, there are traces of growth that don't make people feel reasonable. The writing is realistic and the story is very reasonable. The emotional line is developed very well, the plot is also full of twists and turns, and the author is very attentive.

This book is rich in content, fluent in narrative, and unique in perspective. It is worth reading.

The plot and content are really great, the writing is super good, and the CP is also very good.