Play the Role of Genius at the Beginning, and Become the Eternal Supreme in the End

The writing is quite good, but the leveling up is a bit too slow. The speed can be improved a little. With so many good treasures, you can only level up one level. I feel like it will be more difficult to level up later. It looks pretty good in the later stages. But what happened to 276 [crying] I always thought there was no heroine, but I don't know if there is a heroine. It seems...?

It looks good. I like the setting of the protagonist pretending to be a genius and the character of the protagonist. It is very well written. I just hope there is no heroine. After all, the situation of the protagonist is not suitable for a heroine. If there is hope, the author will tell me earlier, I will not bother.

I quite like the female master the author wrote. She has a kind of chivalrous attitude and makes people feel cool. Unlike what I have seen before, he is either drinking or sleeping, hugging the male protagonist at every turn, and feeling tight in the chest. The male protagonist is like a child, and there is a sense of frivolity.

It's okay, but there are a little too many exclamation points. In some places, the exclamation points are used very abruptly, giving the impression of forced excitement. The sentence that the protagonist said for the first time, "I have my wish, but I don't dare to ask you to listen" is completely separated from the character setting. This sentence mainly highlights humility, politeness or fear of rejection, but it is completely inappropriate for the protagonist at this time. Generally speaking, the protagonist wraps himself up with "proud" and "arrogance", so in the situation of apprenticeship in public places, even if the protagonist thinks "I have my wish, but I dare not ask you to listen", he cannot say this sentence out. A very good subject matter, I hope the author can polish the writing more carefully.

A very good subject. An ordinary ordinary person pretends to be a genius and enters the world of immortality. He uses causality to increase the speed of his cultivation. I first raise the level, and then use the gifts you gave me and my own adventures to make up for the time it took to cultivate to this level. Then I used items to shorten the cultivation time, which proved my genius. This also avoids the situation in other books where the hero starts off as a genius, and then others give him all kinds of good things, and the protagonist soars all the way, but after writing and writing, the plot cannot be written, and then the author can only give the protagonist a stuck state, and even complete, half-step, and these ridiculous states appear. I have reached the peak, but I can't write anymore and I have reached the perfect state, with half-step foundation building, half-step golden elixir, half-step Nascent Soul, etc... It made me laugh at the time. What I said before about physical fitness, there is no bottleneck in cultivation, and now I can't rise... This book can avoid these ridiculous poisonous points. The only bad thing is that there is no finished book. What I am most afraid of when I am chasing books is this shitty yellow button! ! !

Yes, although the cannon fodder who is looking for trouble is a bit brainless and a bit blunt, it is fast-paced and is fun to slap on the face! I will keep following up as I write this. (Ps. I hope to improve the IQ of the supporting characters)

The writing is okay, and the setting that can set the plug-in to advance consumption is pretty awesome. The current tone is to manifest the saint-cultivation (pay off debts). The plot is relatively weak, and the character creation is quite successful. I even feel that I can try group portraits. Overall, it is considered to be in the middle and upper reaches. [Thinking] It is a bit lacking at the moment.

A fairy tale that is more suitable for the physique of Chinese babies. The first grade is the most critical period, the second grade is the most critical period... The first grade of junior high school is the most critical period, and the second grade of junior high school is the most critical period... The first year of high school is the most critical period, and the second year of high school is the most critical period... The age of 20 to 30 is an important node in life. The age of 40 to 50 is an important node. Life 60 has just begun. If you haven't reached Chaochen by 70, you will be too late. It is too late to reach the Dharma image at the age of 500.

This book does not inexplicably write about women wearing breasts like other male videos. You have to describe the breasts before killing someone, and it does not insult the female characters. This is the most normal male channel article I have ever seen [crying]. Girls can also read it with confidence, and the writing has a classical charm. It is very comfortable to read, and the plot is also very novel! [Blowing kiss] Finally, the author will update soon! Not enough [crazy]

The alcoholic female master, a mountain with only one person, has a classic start👍

The writing is very good, the plot is eye-catching, and it made me sleepless and forgetful about food and sleep. However, the update speed is a bit slow, it should be 100 updates a day. If it is poisonous, I should not have it. Even if it is, it will not have any impact on me. After all, it is invulnerable to all poisons. The realm setting of the protagonist is very good. , And there is no harem and no heroine. This is the only place that I am very happy about. For people like me who like to find treasures in cesspits, it is too damn rare to see. There are also some people who think that the protagonist is not written well enough and the realm is too high. I think they should look at other movies. I have reached Nascent Soul at every turn, and after a few pictures I have reached the Avatar. Although it is very satisfying, it always feels a bit awkward. After all, the realm improves too fast, and sometimes I don't pay attention. You've already changed the world, which makes you feel weird. Besides, you'll get tired of it after reading a few hundred chapters. You won't have to change novels and run away later. In short, if you like it, read it. If you don't like it, just change it.

The plot of this novel is ups and downs, the writing is beautiful, and the characters are very rich. It is immersive to read and you can't extricate yourself. The structure of the novel is exquisite, the plot advances naturally and smoothly, and the author uses delicate brushwork to outline a gripping story world. The language is vivid and lively, and the emotions are sincere and moving. The novel is not only rich in content, but also brings profound ideological enlightenment to readers. The characters are distinct, the plot is compact, and the climax is repeated. This is a masterpiece worth reading again and again. The novel unfolds the narrative from a unique perspective, with clear logic and clever foreshadowing, which makes people constantly surprised during the reading process.

It is a very real realm of cultivating immortals. It does not have an overly exaggerated system. Immortals come from the mortal world, and the setting of advance payment can better reflect the difficulty of cultivating immortals, and it is even more difficult to see it from a real mortal perspective. This sense of substitution arises spontaneously. The long period of repayment can make people feel helpless. The protagonist also relies on various resources, otherwise he will not be able to finish it until his death. Not to mention those who are not even as good as him, he still has the ability to make advances. Moreover, taking risks and playing the role of a genius gives you a strong sense of déjà vu. It is the unique perspective of stealing the feeling. This is also the cool part, that kind of mellowness that seems to be pretending but not pretending.

After reading part of it, let's just say that the protagonist's plan and purpose are simply a cause and effect cycle whose scope shrinks as his cultivation level increases. Wherever there is a cause, there must be an effect. Although the character of the protagonist does not look like an ordinary earthling to me, I have to say that in terms of character, character, and dealing with others, he can be said to be a role model for the earth. Repaying good with good and evil with evil is the most ideal and consistent with his own concept. He is not afraid of hardship, etc. It is an excellent quality that we have been learning. From supporting roles to small villains and protagonists, until I see these characters, everyone is not brainless. Everyone has their own advantages and disadvantages as ordinary creatures. This is very good. There is no brainless plot in the whole article. In summary, I think this is the most ideal, realistic, and most spiritual world of immortality that I have ever seen. Compared with other protagonists who are lucky enough to be fed and become strong, the protagonist of this book has some causal power as the main factor, but many of his own character, habits, patience, and wisdom are also necessary for success. Evaluation, ideal but not unreasonable fantasy

It's good to watch, the plot is novel, the protagonist is decisive in killing, smart and not brainless, the story outline is obvious, it follows the route of pseudo-genius, the story has twists and turns, it is very interesting to watch, there is no heroine at the moment, I look forward to the appearance of an opposite child of destiny in the future [Like]

It's quite ok, career upgrade flow + cool writing, the protagonist's career line is extremely ambitious, his acting skills are superb, he deceives others before he deceives himself, he always walks on a tightrope, reminding himself that he is the genius he plays (well, the author repeated this sentence a bit, which affects the perception a bit, small suggestion) [Grgrievance][Laughing and crying]) Well~ The description of the master can be slightly modified. It feels a bit written in the direction of the heroine. I don't know if it is my illusion or not [thinking]. There can also be more words about the son of luck who has a relationship with the protagonist. Overall, it is worth watching.

The writing is good! It is helpful for improving Chinese language. It uses many four-character words. It may be used in the future when judging whether four-character words are wrong. It's overwhelming. I'm not used to this rhythm. I'm unhappy.

It's like an old man came to practice his incarnation at seven o'clock. I have to admit that the writing is very good and the filling is very smooth.

It turns out to be a cold light, no wonder it feels so familiar, it smells like the birth of a drama queen

The plot flows smoothly and doesn't drag out. The protagonist Zhang Yan has been working hard to become stronger. As the owner of the magical power of cause and effect, he pretends to be a genius to compete for resources. In order to become stronger, do whatever it takes, be brave and resourceful. Not the Holy Mother, but also pays special attention to character design. I am very curious as to why the protagonist is the awakener of the magical power of cause and effect. Is he a true immortal from the avenue of cause and effect? ​​Or is it that the heaven of this world has pulled him here to increase the number of children of destiny and revitalize the destiny of this world? Or is there an irreversible crisis behind this world that needs a person from another world to save?

It feels nice, but too little. If the quality and updates can be maintained all the time, I personally feel it would be above 9 points. Does the author want to create a group? I want to read the content behind it. Two books a day are still too few to enjoy. It's over, the back is like shit [cover face][cover face] Advance cautiously

It was average in the early stage, but I feel like the writing gets better as I get to the later stage. I am the kind of hypocrite who likes to show off. In the middle stage, he becomes a humorous person and the mastermind behind the scenes. I personally feel that it is pretty good. It is a great way to pass the time.

Give every favorite novel a five-star review to help every dream. This is a novel with some formulas. The plot is very classic, but the world view is also somewhat interesting. However, because some formulas are naturally a little bit toxic, it's up to you whether you can accept it or not.

Good writing style The romance of Chinese people is poetry~ Character settings and behavioral habits are consistent This is the true meaning (book) Only the protagonist's character setting and behavioral charm To make people feel good Otherwise, a good plot would just be pure obscenity. [Learned] I can write well Come on, author~

This book is very good so far. There is no bloody plot. The plot is interspersed very smoothly and naturally. There are some cool points that should be there, and all the poisonous points that shouldn't be there are gone. Even making friends with so-called lucky people is natural. I won't do it too deliberately. It doesn't force you to pretend, it's very natural. The details are also handled very well. Not too bad. For now, it's well worth a look. I don't know after that.

The protagonist is quite powerful, but the protagonist also has a system to keep his secrets secret. He is also amazing at being able to keep his secrets secret. Moreover, the protagonist is quite stable and cherishes his life. Personally, I feel like it. If you like this kind of writing, you can read it...

I have read the novel, and not to mention the sense of immersion, it is just a rogue. The description is strong and refreshing, but it is smooth. Although the process of describing the protagonist is slightly forced to increase the sense of mystery and not to mention all the parts, the readability is really good. This kind of writing is really sticky if it meets the right readers.

A unique novel, I have never read this type of novel. Come on, author! ! ! [Praise]

If this doesn't have similar themes, this 7.7 Would be lower. According to Tomato's scoring standards, this should be a 9-point work. I look forward to the following plot.

This is a great book! ! The more I read, the more I get addicted to it. There is no really good-looking book about cultivating immortals that I can read in one go. This is the first one. It's so wonderful. I hope the author will write more.