The Cultivator Turned into a Magical Girl
修仙变成了魔法少女
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 183k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- European Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
914Reads
113Shelves
90Chapters
20Listens
24.1kReads · all time
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Male to Female, Magical Girl, Original, Hiding Identity, Occasionally Taking Action
The protagonist is a male, but her identity is the original magical girl. She lives an ordinary life in hiding for some reasons, but she will take action from time to time if there is danger.
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Have You Ever Transformed + Cultivated Immortality?
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How to say it? The beginning is pretty good, the introduction is also pretty good, and the cover is also pretty good, which basically attracts people to read it. However, it stops working in Chapters 3 and 4, and it starts to feel like a running story. The main reason is that the author has not planned the most basic plot and positioning. If the content is about life, the ordinary plot should be written in detail to make it more beautiful. If the content is in the plot, a lot of foreshadowing must be made coherent. The author dug too many holes in the front and did not explain it, which made the later part look confusing and not relaxing. Readers read books for nothing more than a sense of satisfaction, plot, cp, and characters. If you don't do a few of these things, it will be difficult to read. The characters are not fleshed out and cute. There is no plot, it is just a blur. There is no sense of refreshment, and it cannot be that unexpected. If you want to use CP, the protagonist and the master have not met, so you can't use it. So the author keeps up the good work and hopes for the next book [sending heartfelt wishes]
The story is about a hundred changes, the writing is excellent, and there are almost no descriptions of women's clothing, women's bodies, and women's degeneration. A story about a master who rebelled against his apprentice and turned into a loli magical girl after his death, and then went to find his master to post. The daily life is very sweet, but the appearance of the characters is a little lacking. Other than that, there is nothing wrong with it, and the emotional lines are okay.
Why is there no one?
Although short, it is impeccable and has a quiet and peaceful atmosphere. It has washed away the anger and discomfort I felt from reading a few novels before. It is smooth, nothing obscure, and the posts are good.
It's very interesting, but a bit short. After the main plot ended, I still wanted to see some interactions, but it ended too quickly.
It seems like there are two heroines for a long time,
It's a really nice two-dimensional style. It would be better if it wasn't about cultivating immortals.