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The Two Male Protagonists Who Cultivate Immortality Can Make People's Eyes Brighter Again and Again, Don't Let the Writing Style Be Awkward
I want to read a book like "Stop chasing the hero, you will be unhappy if he dies".
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Save the Child, I Don't Want to Watch Anymore
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It's a warm little sweet article. I really like the interaction between the high priest and Jiujiu. It's very cute. It's a pity that due to review issues, the author only put an outline at the end, but I still like it very much. Woohoo. The two of you should be happy forever! Don't belittle yourself, madam, I think both the plot and the writing are very good here! Especially the chapter about home, with its beautiful writing style, I really like this delicate but relaxed writing style. Also, I saw in the comments section that my wife said she was preparing a new book? ! When will it be served? The child is hungry. Looking at the last chapter again, I still want to say, how wonderful it would be if I could finish it.
In fact, I am quite surprised that this is the author's first book. From the beginning to the end, it can be seen that the author is making rapid progress and growth, and it is generally very interesting. There are many words that can be seen that Little Moon has been carefully crafted. "A young man's love that ends without illness is a poem about death." I have always remembered this sentence very clearly and I also like it very much. I have also read other readers' book reviews before. Like her, I also love the chapter "A Family". Yan Wugui has actually been living a very hard life. His free and easy and lazy attitude always feels a bit tragic. Only Jiang Yu's passionate, straightforward, and pure "fat chirping" can give him a vivid feeling of life. It's a pity not to see more details of their relationship, but I believe they will still be happy in another time and space. Many other supporting characters are also very vivid. What impressed me the most was the little girl Sui Changhuan. She was so well protected by her family that she was arrogant and had a bad temper. But when the world collapsed, where should she go? This character is not much written about, but I always feel that the author has more to express in her. Hahaha, that's too far off topic. I hope that our cute and warm, sensitive and fragile little moon can become a rising star in the novel world. I have been looking forward to it. Come on, moon, I hope you will never set.
It's pretty good. I specialize in sweet articles and I feel like a cute little phoenix. It's a pity that the author failed because of Tomato's review. It's such a pity. When will Tomato stop being so sensitive? Many articles are like this.
Touch yourself quietly and give yourself a five-star rating. No one should see it.
It's good to read and I like it very much. The reason why it's not popular is actually because of the promotion of the platform. The author's writing style and writing skills are better than most. I have been reading books for decades. A book's popularity is still created by chance. It accounts for a little more factors.
Personally, I think the author's wife has written very well overall. I like this character setting very much. Anyway, I like it very much. I originally wanted to save more and wait for my wife to update more before reading. But I clicked in today and found out that it is finished. I stayed up late and read the seventy-one chapters. Mainly because I like the setting and my wife's writing is also very good. It is a bit sad to end it suddenly, but this is where fate ends. We will see you again next time if we are destined.
It's great to watch. The young couple is super sweet. I feel happy again after watching it. The only regret is that only the outline of the plot is released, but it's understandable. Teacher, please work hard to produce the next book. I will check in every day [laughing] [blowing kisses]
Nice! ^O^ It's so beautiful~
The big words are really, really, really great! ! ! Super super like it! ! ! Please hold on, I will love you forever! Come on, come on (=^▽^=) and look forward to seeing each other in our next book [Sending Hearts]
The writing is pretty good! ! It's nice to see me too! ! Later, when I saw more than 60 chapters, it was almost 70, and it was about to end. I thought it was going to be unfinished, but I didn't expect it to be unfinished. Just like chapter 71, although it was written a bit hastily, everything that needed to be explained was explained, but some details were omitted. Overall pretty good! ! ! ٩(*´◒`*)۶
Super, super, super good-looking (♥∀♥), it's rare to find a novel that suits your appetite in Western Persimmon. Damn it, damn Western Persimmon [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] You can take the medicine. Wow, I really like this book [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry] [cry]
Neither the cookie nor the dog of the two male protagonists... If the dog doesn't look, I won't look! What you can see is this mouthful of pure sweetness with a hint of car exhaust! It seems that I have developed a poor body shape over the years, and I really like the author's character. It's a pity that the ending was rushed due to review after we wrote it together, otherwise it would definitely have become popular! I am very curious about what my wife wrote and was locked up in a small dark room like this. It was an unlucky thing for me to come here and I lost a big bowl of food [crying]
So far it's sweet, the plot line is relatively clear... Well, it's nice [send my heart][send my heart][learned] Come on~₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑
This book attracted me very much when I read it! The priest, Little Jiujiu and other characters are all super cute! It can be seen that the writing is not streamlined and the words are carefully considered. It is a pity that there is an outline at the end, but it is understandable! Writing is a very laborious task, especially when the response is very weak, I don't have enough mental energy to support it. It allows me to know that the subsequent development has an ending instead of just discontinuing the update. (Touch) Come on, it will become more and more powerful, and I will definitely be able to develop enough writing skills to write out what I think! Xiaoyan and Xiaojiu will also always stick to Hehemeimei in their own world!
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, that's so sweet, isn't it? I've been reading for many days, it's really the rain that comes after a long drought, I'm so moved [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] Shuangjie's 1v1 sweet text, running in both directions, I really love it to death [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss] [Blowing kiss]
Very beautifully written
Super pretty, super sweet [adoration][adoration][adoration]
I really like this article. It's a pity that there is only an outline in the end. That's it. The author's writing style is pretty good.
I like it. It's very interesting. Has the author considered opening a book? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying]
It's really beautiful, thank you to the author!
Jian Jian Jian Jian is simply incomparably beautiful. The author should write more. I really like to read it.
I officially declare this book to be my new favorite. My wife is so beautiful, my wife is so beautiful, my sweet pet, my family, hurry up! ! ! ! ! [Laughing][laughing]
Ahhhh, it's so sweet and reassuring, the little couple ate me to death, such a cute little couple.
Very cute article, sweet and reassuring [top post][top post][top post][top post][top post]
It's pretty good, but the ending is a bit unsatisfactory. Do you have time to expand the outline?
It's very interesting, but the ending is too rushed. I like the author.
To the moon I really like the setting of this novel www. Sometimes Tomato's operation is really hard to comment on, which is really bad. Moon, don't be discouraged. Writing articles starts with your own love, so you have the motivation to continue writing. Don't let it add too much burden to yourself, just be happy. Many of the themes I like have very few authors who can write T_T. I repeatedly searched on various platforms to find novels that can impress me ww. The moon is really a cute little moon hahaha. Come on, Moon, this is just the beginning. No matter where you code in the future, I believe there will be friends to support you. You know, the moon also shines (akimbo). The last sentence, I wish Lao Yan Jiujiu, always 99 hehehe (*/∇\*)
It looks great. Thank you to the author for bringing such a good work. Cheers to the author.
Beautiful and beautiful [Adoration] I like the little Phoenix to death [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss]
I didn't expect it to be so beautiful. It's really a masterpiece. Watching it is not enough.