Kill the Time Traveler: Obtain Double Portals to Return to the Previous Life Planet

A few comments said it was confusing, but I think the development is quite normal. In addition to adding a lot of cheats, it also further makes the protagonist stronger, which will also be very useful later. Where is the confusion? The main line of the plot, fantasy, is to become stronger and develop eternal power. What else can be done? I have been making progress towards this goal. Maybe the author is currently at a low level and does not understand what they mean. I admit that it was not well written at the beginning. Many people later said that it was well written, but I did not feel the confusion. Sometimes describing some corner characters makes this illusory world more real, and their perspective on the protagonist's power is also very interesting. For example, an ancient person suddenly entered modern society and was shocked. The author may not realize his own shortcomings yet, but I will work hard to improve.

[Two Realms + Heavens + Struggle for Hegemony + Chat Group + Various Cheats] Fang Li traveled through spiritual energy to revive the world of martial arts. He was born in poverty and struggled to survive in troubled times. Fortunately, he had a clone in the wizarding world. The art of detection makes you rich by catching fish, and the art of necromancy deceives the emperor into immortality... The transformation technique creates a bloodline warrior! Healing is a wonderful way to rejuvenate! Also got a chat group. I thought it was just an ordinary martial arts world, but in the next continent, you come to a modern world and a martial arts world as a reseller? The person who snatched the golden finger turned out to be a fellow countryman. He traveled back to his previous life and discovered that Blue Star players were growing up somewhere in the martial arts world? Obtain power and wealth, and capture the true identity of players in the modern world. Life seems to be getting better, and suddenly everyone is transported into a fantasy world... (I still have a lot of imagination. I can sew together various cheats, such as reborn, national time travel, summoning, portable space, mist territory, etc., And I will write it more reasonably) Finally start the journey to the heavens and the world The doomsday universe absorbs starry sky technology Modern spread of martial arts beliefs into gods In troubled times, Gaowu comes to the interstellar battleship The consciousness is reincarnated and cheats to become a boss, and the game world releases the fourth natural disaster player I'm forcing you to end the bad review. You're already castrated. There's nothing to say about it.

It can be said that a lot of things have been sewn, and it looks pretty, but the frequency of the Wizarding World appears a bit less! Although this world is considered a backup hidden energy source, it can be said to have great potential. By the way, let me mention again, the "protagonist" who has been cultivating immortality for hundreds of years, don't give him a role, it will be more poisonous if he is resurrected.

This kind of subject matter is very interesting, especially the golden finger that rapes a fellow villager at the end, which can be worn back to fuck other fellow villagers [laughing evilly]

Sometimes some useless content is added, which I can accept, but can the punctuation and sentences be checked before publishing? Urban World Live Stream King of Glory The Dragon King of the Martial Arts World returns (slightly behind) The classic high talents in the world of beast control are looked down upon by people as junk talents for various reasons. There is also the classic high talent sister. The above mentioned are all the protagonists To be honest, it feels like it was written by someone else.

Okay, it doesn't stress the combat power, it's neat and tidy, and there's no bloody plot. Very good. . .

Don't pressure the protagonist to take off quickly, and plunder the other golden fingers decisively without the mother-in-law.

Chapter 33, except for two or three chapters of pretending to slap someone in the face, it's quite interesting so far.

It seems quite satisfying so far. After looking at multiple systems, I feel that it looks reasonable. I haven't found any big poisonous points so far. I read the whole book in one go and it feels a bit uncomfortable to catch up. Can the author update more every day?

The various cheats in the early stage were very creative, but the plot was average. Later on, the writing got better and better, especially when the player was in Blue Star and was caught everywhere by the protagonist using his rights [to cover his face]. It was very exciting. Please keep updating.

The author writes well, and author, have you changed the introduction? Why is it different from the first one?

It's not bad, but as I write it, I feel like I forget the world in front of me.

Get used to good reviews. I listened to the author and didn't read the first two pages, but read the third one. Although it's a bit messy, I can understand it later. Continuously adding new worlds, golden fingers and the like, but your writing skills are not strong enough and you don't have the details. How about it being more fun?

The writing is okay. The subject matter is also good. As long as it doesn't collapse.

The author arranged a golden finger for the protagonist in "How the Universe Was Made".

Not bad, the stitching is pretty good.

A very good book

Very complicated, but I like it very much [admiration]

There are several worlds now, and the author actually didn't mess it up. He should have a more detailed outline.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

It's pretty good, but it looks a little bit lacking.

"The Immortal Wizard Starting from the Martial Arts World" Qiubei

There are flaws, but overall it's still good. Generally speaking, there are very few reviews. Since there are so few reviews for this book, I will give it one review.

This cosmic hodgepodge novel is great, I like it so much, and the author writes it well.

It's very imaginative and novel. Looks very comfortable

Yes, there are basically no poisonous points, and the plot development is relatively reasonable. It can be said to be very beautiful.

The writing is very good, but the first twenty or so chapters may be average. But the back is really nice. ##Recommended by a ten-year old bookworm

A pretty good book. Anyway, so far, it looks okay.

I have seen the latest chapter 66 so far, and I feel very good. [Facepalm] There are very few novels on Rotten Tomatoes that have normal IQs. This book doesn't seem surprising at first glance, but if you compare it to something, compared to most other novels on Rotten Tomatoes, this book is simply too good. Compared with most Rotten Tomatoes, it's pretty good.

It is indeed well written. Although it is a hodgepodge, it is enough to keep people interested in reading it.