Kill the God****************

The author doesn't want Lorelei and the protagonist to form CP｡°(°¯᷄◠¯᷅°)°｡

I feel pretty good, but the author must insist on not having a female protagonist. (ㄒOㄒ)

This Luo or something, I forgot [cover my face], I hope there is no heroine [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

It's human nature for Lorelei to fall in love with the protagonist under those circumstances, and it's good that he didn't get entangled with anything. Moreover, when the protagonist wants to go back for his family, having a heroine in the end is another kind of let down. (If the author didn't want to arrange a heroine, I think it can be a firm choice. After all, there is no need to listen to all readers. Everyone will have different opinions. At least I see that the smooth writing and plot are pretty good online now. I don't understand why the rating is so low.) I still like the character of the protagonist very much. He values love and justice and is decisive in killing. The content is also quite creative. All in all, I still hope that the author can write according to his own ideas (because there are so many bad reviews for Lorelei, I am a little worried that the author will not stick to it). The overall feeling after reading Chapter 72 is quite good (Secretly Wish There is no female protagonist)

This article is written very delicately, especially the relationship between the protagonist and his parents, and the sense of responsibility between the country and society. There are also some very funny jokes in the middle, but they are not surprising. It really brings people to life, so that we can deeply immerse ourselves in this novel and feel the joy and sorrow of the protagonist, so it is highly recommended🤗 But it is a collection of knives, which makes people's hearts twitch. I hope the author can change it. I mainly read novels. The main purpose of fan fiction for entertainment is to make up for flaws, not to create regrets.

Please set up an inner demon for the protagonist, who makes him so cowardly.

Is the killing decisive? It is indeed in line with common sense, but it is uncomfortable and frustrating to watch. As soon as the white-haired heroine came out, I couldn't stand it. The fan novel added too many inexplicable characters and I felt a little speechless. It's better to just start a systematic novel. There is no need to enter the world of killing gods. If you want to write a cool novel, you still have to have a heroine. Long Aotian is a thing of the past. Nowadays, the character of Mazi, the Immortal Rebel King, is popular. In fact, there is not much plot between him and the heroine in the novel, but the whole novel revolves around resurrecting the heroine. This idea can be used as a reference. If it is difficult to write, you can give up writing the heroine and let this character be a friend without giving too much plot. It feels like too many unnecessary characters have been added to build a team for the protagonist. It's also good to join Nightfall directly or go for the extreme individual support stream. [Cool] As for the description of some details in the article, especially the emotions and inner activities, it is too detailed, which makes it incomplete and a bit abstract. But it is indeed a normal human psychological activity, there is no doubt about this. But as a bookworm who has been reading books for more than ten years, the purpose of readers reading books is to bring themselves into the world. Sometimes they cannot be too reasonable, otherwise they will be more or less aggrieved [Thinking] No matter how exciting the rest of the article is, it won't mean much if people feel uncomfortable after reading it and abandon the article, no matter how exciting the rest of the article is. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Everyone has different preferences and there is no need to accommodate everyone. The author's writing style is quite good, but when I saw how low the ratings were, I took a quick glance and felt almost unsatisfied. Also, abstract writing is popular nowadays, and many readers may not see the protagonist or two male protagonists. Believe it or not, the author made Wife Ye and Shen Qingzhu an official couple, and maybe it would be quite popular [laughing and crying] It doesn't involve the main character. In fact, the general public is quite tolerant, but straight men will feel disgusted when novels with two male protagonists are introduced to them, and they will only find it strange and interesting when seeing them around them. This is also a small opinion to attract people. I don't want to see the same thing as the popular God-Slaying fandom. I think about it, this kind of topic may be quite interesting [laughter] I was so angry that I wanted to give it two stars, but I really enjoyed writing the article. I was going to give it three stars, but I thought the author was very detailed in describing the dynamics. I gave it four stars. It was a pleasure to write and read the article. There is no need to embarrass the author too much. It was also very hard to write. If I were to write the article I scolded those who were criticized for being useless [laughing and crying] I don't know why posting a comment is like writing an essay. Anyway, it's just my little opinion. The beholder sees the benevolence and the wise see the wisdom. [Thinking] Everyone has their own preferences, and being happy is the most important thing [making faces]

I like the style very much. The Classic of Mountains and Seas and some of the original plots, as well as the monsters in it, and the character of the fighting protagonist. I quite like it. It's not as pure and refreshing as other Zhanshen stories. The plot is well connected. I suddenly thought of a way to end it, just like Kamen Rider Blued. In that way, the two worlds merged. I forgot about the protagonist. As for who else remembers it?

Author, I really want to see Lorelei and Jiang Zhao together.

It's okay, but as for the female protagonist, um, actually, the arrogant sister Chang'e is also okay [shy]

In fact, the writing is quite good, but maybe I personally can't stand the part where the law punishes him. I still hope to get rid of the inner demons directly before talking about it later. I just want to have a clear idea now. Well done! Thank you to the author for the great changes. Thank you for your hard work. [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

I hope the author will work harder and write more emotional lines. We are not cold-blooded animals. No one in this world will treat you well except your parents, right?

Personally I hope the heroine is Lorelei

I want a heroine

I don't know what to say, anyway, I think the writing is good, the plot is compact, and it also incorporates Chinese gods. Overall, it's pretty good [Blowing Kiss]

Is there a female protagonist? If so, I hope it's Lorelei

It's really good-looking. I feel that Jiang Zhao is really a good person. What he went through after losing his strength made me cry when I saw it, but he also accepted it calmly. I hope Jiang Zhao can regain his strength soon.

I can only see before joining the Night Watch, but not after joining the Night Watch.

This book is a bit different from other God-Slayer fanfics. It makes it more readable with a lot of my own ideas added in. Come on

Is there a female protagonist? Who is the heroine?

Very exciting, two male protagonists, multiple worlds overlapping

It's okay, remind the author, you can have a female protagonist. You are the author, don't waver because of the readers. I quite like having a female protagonist, as long as it's not a brainless harem @Mo Tzero

It's okay. The author has some writing skills and has written his own style and content - which is different from the alternative Chinese and prehistoric immortals and spirits in Zhan Shen. It is also humorous and occasionally makes some internet memes. It's here that the pig's trotters' combat power is said to be slightly better than Lin Qiye's.

It's really good-looking. I'm sorry, can you do more when you feel better? [Shy]

The structure is clear and the thoughts are thoughtful. I have seen very few authors who write fan fiction so well.

It's super good-looking. I like the male protagonist of this article very much. I hope the author can continue to update. Please, please [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Very good, very good, very good

Come on come on come on come on

Novel structure and surprising beginning

Come on and work hard