A Time-Traveling Loli Undead Knight Summoned by an Evil Witch

Changes to a hundred, the writing is excellent, the description of women's clothing and female bodies is perfect, and the description of female abduction is zero. The heroine and the second heroine have smooth emotional lines, and the emotional values ​​and outlook on life are well written. The author has something, a Western sword and magic worldview, and the perfect writing is worth collecting.

Recommended by the group, it's exactly the type I like. A week has passed, can you win the Easter match?

I'm a newbie, I hope you guys can give me more feedback.

It's a good book. It has a great world view and a lot of pitfalls. I like the character description very much. I hope this book will become more and more popular. It is one of the few high-quality books in Tomatoes.

Come on, your wild imagination [blowing kiss]

It boldly attempts a diverse and rich worldview. Various elements are not just symbols, but are actively embedded in the world as part of the world. Many settings that would be used as expansion points in other works are even thrown out casually in this work, which shows that the author has a broad range of knowledge; he has a good understanding of social relations. It has certain insights and uses a relatively natural trick setting to avoid some complex problems. It can be seen that the author has the idea and talent to use skills; compared to works with severely flat supporting characters, the characters have their own ideas and action logic. I hope that the further development of the world view will not let down the complicated elements that have appeared before.

Currently reading up to chapter 38 It's quite an interesting book in the game of whitening. It's a very modern and classic book for whitening at the beginning, and its value seems to be very classic starting from the middle stage. At present, it seems that the protagonist group has a standard value of win-win and self-interest, which is a relatively safe way to deal with it. If the author does not go crazy and suddenly upgrade his brain, at least he will not explode such abstract incidents as internal fighting among the protagonist group, which is quite good. Multi-perspective narratives take up a bit too much ink. In many cases, multi-perspective narratives feel like they can be dealt with in a few strokes and then described. Sometimes too much information is given to complete the world setting, which will affect the sense of immersion and substitution. There is too much literature and drama, and the world setting is too gentle at present (let me first explain what a gentle world setting is. In this book review, the gentle world setting does not represent the cruelty of the overall worldview, but means that the concept of the protagonist group is consistent with the underlying logic of the worldview - that is, when I evaluate the world setting, I mean that the protagonist group has an obvious path to achieve their goals and ideals, and there are even many companions in the author's gentle handling. It's not that it's hard to die in this world), which makes the drama seem too complicated and empty. At least in the early stage when the author wants to write an adventure story, it is better to mention this grand idea only when it is first proposed and the idea changes. After all, it is difficult for the protagonist group of the adventure group to design and discuss the form of government and decrees at this stage (although the politics of light novels with extraordinary power are mostly just various spoofing philosopher kings) All in all, it's quite interesting and better than most of the current main storylines. It's not as interesting as just wanting to write a post and turn it into a hundred articles. The worldview that borrows from Invincible Heroes and then redesigns it is also quite interesting. I can look forward to the future.

Good guy, that's interesting.

Is the relationship progress a little abrupt? But very cute 😊

It's a pretty good Lily article, but sometimes it feels a bit off [face covering]

Good-looking, but a little lacking

The author hurry up and update. I just read it and you are already cold [what][what][what] not long after I read it.

What a wonderful plot

Imaginative, young people's adventure group

Very funny, entertaining fantasy novel

The subject matter is relatively new, and the content is good. I am really looking forward to the follow-up, but the content is too little and I dare not read it. Speaking of which, where is the consciousness of the protagonist Yuan Shen?

I think I saw it a long, long time ago, and it was a little bit slow?

The subject matter is good, the plot is okay, the writing is average, I hope the emotional line is better.