Navy Admiral, Uzumaki Naruto!

Write more about pirates. If you want to read Naruto, I have other books. The selling point is the story in the world of pirates. The author should grasp this point.

It still feels pretty good. I feel good about redeeming Naruto in his childhood. It would be better if the age issue could be solved. After all, the longer the back and forth time, the older the mental age will be. Even if the appearance doesn't change, it's still weird for a 20-year-old to talk like a 10-year-old.

It's a very interesting story that goes back and forth between two worlds, but the comparison between the two worlds is a bit too cruel. I always feel that the navy is not so innocent, and Shikamaru and the others on the Hokage side did not appear at all. Obviously in this time period (just the Kurama family, but to be honest, I didn't read this part, but the fanfic said that they became friends during that period, but they forgot about it later (?)). In this situation, maybe we should complain about the education level of the "people" on both sides? (On one side are naval cadets, on the other side are ordinary villagers emmm) And the confident Little Sun Naruto is great. It's a bit sad to see his family leave, but after all, Naruto has such a thing as earth reincarnation, and I feel that there will be a chance in the future. There is also the Nine Lamas. When will Naruto be able to become friends with it? I still want to see them working together. With the current situation of robbing power, is there really no problem in the future? (I'm worried)

To add to the setting, Garp will not lose his combat power due to aging. This can be said to be one of the bugs in Oda's works [face covering] I really gave you a big job. Zefa's hand is the only one that must be cut off, isn't it?

The writing is very passionate, and it is a direct original plot of Garp's group destroying the five old stars Im. In other fan fiction, the final villain is not there at the beginning. Naruto's character is very majestic and upright, and he is the saint in my fantasy.

Take good care of your body. I will always support you, author, but don't be like so many authors who write this kind of plot and always end it at the climax and can't think of new content. I hate this. I hope you won't hurt me, my love for you, and my love for your works. Heart, don't hurt me

I give it five stars because this is the only book I know of that is the fastest to eliminate the Celestial Dragons in Tomato. The 100th chapter has not yet been reached, so I can only say. . . . Awesome! It's so cool, so cool to watch! ! !

It's beautiful, I hope I can write it down

The author's writing style of "The Double Passing Through the Sea of ​​Fire" is very good, but I feel that the Kyuubi opened too fast. The author should add more interactions with the Kyuubi later. The author's discomfort should be how Naruto knew the Kyuubi's name. He himself said that what tailed beasts need is respect, and the Kyuubi is a tsundere and does not call each other by name. At first, I didn't know how to develop a communication that respects the Kyuubi and allows him to open his heart. [Cover face][OK]

Such a beautiful novel! I don't know what some people think and give such a low score? Such a good creative novel

I like it very much. Good luck to the author.

It's quite interesting. The reason why it's so short is also quite interesting. The reason why it's so short is that the manuscript fee is too small. The author couldn't write anymore, so I ended it in a hurry, but it's also a complete ending, and there is no unfinished chapter.

Not bad, good, this book is a warm-up, come on, author!

All I can say is that it looks amazing [laughs evilly] It's very well described and exactly what I would consider a perfect naval book.

It's very good-looking. It may be a bit awkward at the beginning, but it's okay later on.

No, isn't this pretty good-looking? Why is it rated so low?

The author writes very well [Adoration], but it's better to go to bed early.

Beautiful and interesting

It's so well written, cheers for the author

So creative and so cool

Curry! Is this all done?

How can I put it, at least the navy in this book is a real navy. Garp is really awesome. Even if it doesn't look good later, I'll still give it five stars.

The plot at the beginning was quite good, and it was a good book. However, the book ended in a hurry because of the author's marriage, which was a pity. Overall it's pretty good.

I'm so afraid that the combat power system will collapse in the later stage.

Very good, so touching [laughing]

The battle scenes are well described.

Come on, it feels great

Not bad, the subject matter is fresh

Very, very ok.

It's Asilamao's.