Good Luck at the Right Time

Teacher please update soon! The teacher's plot and imagination are very good, but there are some problems with the word order and logic of the article, and sometimes there are some errors in the text. The teacher can improve it [Sending my heart] Update quickly!

The environment is very well described, very lively and interesting, especially the scene of the happy encounter and the atmosphere. But I think the image of the beautiful sheep can be a little more aloof, because when the pleasant sheep left without saying goodbye, the beautiful sheep was very sad, so when facing the pleasant sheep, you can be more indifferent, and then the pleasant sheep will definitely make up for the mistake, so it became a "wife-chasing crematorium". My comments are these [awkward laughter]

The only drawback at the moment is the update ། – _ – ། (quick update ヽ(•ω•ゞ))

The author's writing is very good, updated on time, both sweet and sad, it really touched my heart, I love it so much

Very pretty, I really like this [shy][KISS]

I really like the reunion plot that I want to watch, and the weapon is still the [Blowing Kiss] from the Final Battle Next Generation.

The author writes very well, the writing style is also good, the plot is very interesting, highly recommended

Looks good, the content is very good

The author's writing is very good, great! Very sweet too!

The plot written by the author is very good! The writing is also good! The emotional line of Ximei is also written very well! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Big cheers for the author! Update soon too! However, don't tire yourself, the writing is so beautiful [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Very nice. Update soon.

I hope you can update QAQ frequently (but this book is really beautiful and the emotional lines are very delicate! I personally feel that it is more of a group portrait)